I Livestream Entertainment for the Ancient World

Madam, write an outline, at least write a program, just follow your program. What is the purpose of writing this article? What is the main content? In fact, the broadcast of entertainment videos and agricultural videos is very rare in Jinjiang's historical live broadcasts. Madam, this is very special. You have to grasp this special thing carefully. Once you write it, more people will read it. As for some suggestions from our readers, we need to screen and identify them. If the wife thinks they are acceptable and will not ruin the story, then add them; if you find that adding them makes it impossible to continue writing, or damages the framework of this article, then don't add them. For some of our ideas, my wife can draft them first to see if they can be written, if they can be logical, and if they can have an ending. If not, then we won't use them.

It can be seen that the author is not only writing an article for the first time, but also has no outline. He just comes up with ideas one by one. There were some inconsistencies in the previous chapters, but now we insist on creating a fourth natural disaster. The logic of the entire article has collapsed to the point where it cannot be saved. To put it bluntly, except for the stench of male authors written by Fei Lu and Tomato and the poisonous historical view of street stall literature, the degree of collapse of the article is even worse. Goodbye.

You write at your own pace, don't always listen to the readers. This is a novel that is a bit of a novel, not a history book. It is impossible to write it perfectly. Changing it to follow the readers' wishes will only make it more confusing and eventually collapse.

Okay, let's change the emperor in the Song Dynasty. Except for Zhao Kuangyin, the surname Zhao has no other abilities. The Qin Dynasty had the First Emperor, the Han Dynasty had Han Wu, the Tang Dynasty also had Tang Xuanzong, and the Ming Dynasty had Emperor Yongle. When it comes to the Song Dynasty, it's embarrassing, embarrassing!

Although it's quite enjoyable, I don't feel particularly good about reading it now. I think the author wanted to write too much. Although the various channels were interesting, in the later period, these channels were all messed up and it was unclear. It was difficult to tell where the live broadcast content of Tianmu was and where the private messages of Tianmu were. In addition, the emperors also had chat groups and forums. Although the plot is good, I can't bite off more than I can chew. I suggest the author choose one of the directions to improve the details, and just focus on this aspect in the future. Another point is that there are too many audience reactions. People from different dynasties and different identities all wrote reactions, which makes people feel that the narrative is complicated and straightforward, and it does not have enough power to move people's hearts. This is my personal feeling, I hope you don't mind me saying so much

Oh, it's Zhao Kuangyin, isn't Yue Fei loyal to the Song Dynasty? Since you can't change the country, then change the emperor.

It's cool, but it feels messy

Woohoo, when will we see Confucius driving a Maserati?

Can you criticize the Qing Dynasty? I hate this dynasty so much

The disgrace of Jingkang was so cruel that the two saints of Xuexiang should be cut into pieces by a thousand swords.