[Harry Potter] Hounded by Misfortune

Because a lot of things have happened in my life, the subsequent articles have been put on hold. I haven't touched writing for a long time, and I haven't been able to log in to my account to explain. The ending was written during the Chinese New Year last year. It was written in a hurry to keep up with the schedule, and because it was specifically stated at the beginning that even B and B still loved each other in their hearts, the subsequent plot seemed very disconnected and did not follow the growth trajectory and development of the characters. It's very inappropriate. One day when I think about this ending, I feel a little regretful. I plan to publish a revised version later and slightly delete the latter part. In short, I am very grateful to my friends who have always supported this work. I will bring the work to you in the future.

The reason I don't like be very much is that I don't like using the death of the female protagonist to punish the male protagonist and make him repent. . .

The overall feeling of this book to me is that it is too realistic, so it took me a long time to finish it... Trying to live in the heavy reality [makes me healthy] On the one hand, the group portraits and family members described in this book are great and fit the overall atmosphere of that period. The writing style of the author's wife is also very good, and the logical details are also very good. Although the main characters in the book are not even mentioned in the original work, most of them are people from Rowling's magical world that have relevant information on Pottermore (maybe apart from the male protagonist, the most familiar one to us is the female protagonist's friend Amelia Burns) The emotional push and pull between the male and female protagonists is also very precise, and the sense of fate makes people exclaim when they see it! But there are two points that I am troubled with: First, it is my personal reason. When the heroine really put the truth about Barty Jr. Joining the Death Eaters on the table, I did not agree with some of her actions. All his relatives and friends died due to Voldemort and Death Eaters, but he still loved Death Eater Barty and wanted to exonerate him. Personally, I think it is inconsistent with the image of the sober heroine in the early stage. Second, the whole book is connected by several big scenes and events. Each scene and time is beautifully written, but for some reason I feel that the causal connection between these scenes is slightly poor. It is like using a silk thread to connect multiple huge crystal balls. If the crystal ball is too beautiful and huge, the thread will be too weak, and it will not feel so coordinated. But it is undeniable that this book is the most realistic novel I have read so far. It seems that it is not describing the magical world but the real past events in Britain from 1978 to 1981. Thank you madam for your creation! Looking forward to more works!

The main part of "Chasing Misfortune" is finished, and I just signed the contract. I will post one or two extras in a few days. Thank you for everyone's love and support during this period. The full text will always be free, and I do not plan to make money from fan works. If you are interested in my own works, you can check out the newly opened original works on the homepage. Thank you again

Suddenly it became clear why he loved her. He looked at her as he looked at himself in the mirror, the insufferable father, the absent mother. However, unlike him, she got out of that cage. Even if she encountered obstacles outside, she still had a place in the world. She was exactly what he wanted to be. "I love you as much as I love myself." Then he met "Father", like a real father. This father is willing to acknowledge his excellence, see his shining points and praise him. He thought that with his father's love, his life would be complete and he would no longer be obsessed with looking for "father". Seeing her lying in front of him, silently, he didn't want to admit it, but he had to admit the fact: he and the "him" he wanted to be in his dreams both died at the hands of his "father".

My wife's writing style is excellent and delicate. The first part describes the urgency and fear of the battlefield very vividly and concretely, which is particularly good! I read it on Xiaohongshu and recommended it to read. The person who recommended it said that the writing style of this book is very good. Now it seems that it is indeed the case. It is meticulous, exaggerated and has the flavor of the West Wind masterpiece. It can be seen that the author has a deep foundation and the writing style is very perfect. On the emotional side, I think Crouch and Slavinka really don't fit together well. In such a similar native environment, Slavinka lives a radiant life because she still has close friends and relatives who love her around. Every chapter and every few pictures shows her dramatic changes and qualitative growth, as if the character is spinning on the page and becoming more and more perfect under the author's handwriting, so she has become a leading figure, loving, capable, and ambitious. It makes perfect sense for Crouch to have a crush on her. But Slavinka loves Crouch in pain. Crouch hated his friends and did not trust his relatives. He was desperately obsessed with Slavinka, as if he were worshiping a high and flawless god. He was fanatical and morbid, like a rhapsody clanking in the new night. Such love makes him weak, and he often shows weakness in front of Slavinka in an attempt to gain mercy. But this is exactly the problem in my opinion. Those who achieve great things are destined to act vigorously and resolutely. Slavinka once expressed her impatience with Crouch's inexplicable jealousy and self-pity. She is a leader and is destined not to marry her mother-in-law for love, so Crouch's show of weakness will only make her impatient. It is indeed an article about the woman taking over in the relationship, but I still feel that it is difficult for these two people to let go of everything and accept each other. The difference is huge. They are destined to be together, and Crouch's love will be many, many times more than Slavinka's love. This is a point that I think the emotional line is well shaped. The author did not distort the characters because of feelings. Such imperfect love appears to be real. All in all, it's a masterpiece worth seeing!!! My wife is great!

It is a work that restores the original work very well. The writing is fluent, the plot logic is smooth, and it is also very researched. I really like the early stage when the two people fell in love on campus, but maybe being faithful to the original work and not OOC is a bit inconsistent with the happy ending. I can understand that there may be no way to achieve a better ending. Watch In the later stage, the heroine simply looked at her love-minded bestie and her scumbag boyfriend (Dumbledore shook his head). However, I still like the character of the heroine. She is resolute and has a strong core. However, sometimes it feels that besides the kindness in her heart, her stance comes more from the family, friends and love around her.

I want to sigh, but it is indeed the best ending. The ending is very rushed, but there seems to be no other ending method. If I were to comment on their love, I would be harsh and harsh. I don't like Buddy or I don't agree with it. Because in the end Voldemort will always be a hurdle between them. But if HE is not like this, if Barty doesn't admire Voldemort, this is not the Barty who is looking for his father. I don't like him, but I like this book. I think the writing is very delicate and the characterization is very vivid. You can see whether I complain or get angry, they all confirm the charm of this book. Thank you.

This book has great stamina. Is the author considering writing a fanfic with Regulus Black as the male protagonist and a female protagonist? I hope he can live well in the fanfic and live until the war, instead of dying young.

This chapter is well written from Barty's perspective. I was originally confident (the confidence came from Raven's love for him) and I was confident that they would be able to reconcile if they tried to save him afterwards. However, after many years of separation, I was overjoyed and saddened to learn that Barty's first priority was still the damn Voldemort. I really understand Raven's mood. All in all, love and regret are intertwined, the character logic is so smooth, and the author is so good at cheating. I can't imagine HP fans insisting on updating it every day until it's finished. Thank you so much!