Dismantling CPs in Dream of the Red Chamber with My Archrival

??? Where does this come from? How big is the heroine's face when she can't eat because of choking? Based on my own opinion, I thought Xichun's life was not good, so I gave it away? To put it bluntly, your own life is not good, why don't you kill yourself? How should I put it, this article, he completely deviated from the Dream of Red Mansions. The name is quite interesting, but the content is really, really bad. A modern heroine, who has no look like a modern person in ancient times, wants to be a concubine, and she writes Lin Ruhai and Jia Min so badly. The sister Lin written by Mr. Jia is a little too sharp-tongued and caressing, but her nature is still pure and pure. I don't believe that Sister Lin's parents would be so miserable when you wrote about them. What were you writing about? Although I have read the last chapter. But to put it bluntly, this article is regarded as a fantasy and ambiguous H article.

I sent a long review of thousands of words very sincerely, without any swear words or verbal insults. I haven't mentioned any other problems with your article. The author and his friends gave the article points and gave gifts. There is also a problem with the number of clicks on the article. I have read it several times. The number of clicks is increased by those people who keep clicking. If I scold you, it is my fault. There is something wrong with your writing but you cover your mouth to prevent others from talking about it. Do other readers deserve to read your article with obvious plot bugs?

What happened to the stone idiot's child?

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I drank urine when I was thirsty, the heroine was so bad, the interaction between these two was really interesting.

The writing is good, but the characters

Dear readers, please have a harmonious discussion. The author's full text is in the manuscript and there are no written words. The first article is mainly about trying to finish. It is normal to have questions about the description of the plot details. Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Writing guidance is welcome. Comments will not be deleted, and relatives and friends will not be invited to make up the number. Just comment individually, you don't have to convince others. Although the heroine traveled through time and became a maid, she does not agree with this identity in her heart. She is still a corporate executive. As the Black Lotus character, she looks at the people in the Red Mansion through colored glasses and tries to manipulate other people's lives. So I act a little irrationally and act willfully without considering the consequences.

What a great plot structure, one link after another

Should I say that the male protagonist is very male and knows how to do things with his eyes?

The teacher is so good at writing.

If you tell me how many seats you have in Jia Lian's room, you'll know there's something wrong.