At sixteen or seventeen, Ye Luo met Jiang Mufan, and each left a deep mark on the other's youth.
The world is vast, and meeting someone is the greatest stroke of fate. So what does it mean to like someone? It means wanting to see them every moment of every day.
Meeting you in this life is where our fate begins. If it was destiny, then how could fate have a beginning?
After three days of college entrance exams,
Jiang Mufan asked Ye Luo to meet him on the rooftop.
When Ye Luo pushed open the slightly ajar door, Jiang Mufan, who had been facing away from her, turned around. The moment he saw the person he had longed for, light appeared in the boy's eyes.
Jiang Mufan spoke softly: “Do you know? Everything I do is to get closer to you. I can't explain why I want to be near you, but I know for certain that I really like you.”
Ye Luo was very nervous, but after calming down a little, she answered, “I really like you too. I like the freedom in you, the way you earnestly explain problems to me, and, even more, the curve of your smile.”
“So you say yes?”
“Of course, boyfriend.”
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I saw it. Let me give you a little bit of my own opinion. If it offends me, just pretend I didn't say it. First of all, it's the title of the article. It's not good to have too many jj articles with the same title, and the title does not reflect the feeling of pure love (personal opinion). If you love ABO in modern times, you can actually consider changing it. It is best to highlight the characteristic elements of ABO. Secondly, there is the copywriting. To be honest, the first time I read the copy, I felt that it was a type that I would not click on. For newcomers, it is best for the copywriting to point out the most prominent and eye-catching plot points in the book, rather than showing off innocence in the copy (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, don't criticize if you don't like it) Finally, there is the main text. The layout of the article... I personally don't like it very much. For this kind of article with a relatively relaxed start, it is best to change the layout with wider spacing. You can check out the new list of modern pure love to see how others write it. It is said that the first three chapters are the golden chapters. The plot points should be mentioned at the beginning of the article. For newcomers, it is very important to retain readers to continue reading the article. If there is no reader base, only the opening is eye-catching. Also, do not have too many titles of the article. Just focus on the plot of the two protagonists. It is indeed difficult to sign a contract in Jinjiang, especially Pure Love, which requires very high writing and plot requirements. And when signing a contract in Jinjiang, you must at least ensure that you are updated. Three days a day is the minimum standard. You can get a lot of money for six or ten thousand a day (I feel tired). I chose Jinjiang because of my feelings. If the author really likes Jinjiang and wants to die in Jinjiang, it is not impossible. At least he can stay in Jinjiang. Refine your writing skills. If you want to sign a contract with FQ, then I can only remind you that everything is not that simple. FQ is indeed better than signing, but it only gives you a chance to make your debut at about 70,000 words. Before 100,000 words, you can basically stand alone, and this type of writing is not popular on Tomato. If the author can't stand the loneliness and goes to fq, it will be difficult to persevere. Of course, if the author really likes to write passionately, then I won't say that. All in all, writing requires hard work, and you need to take it step by step, practice your writing skills and develop the plot in a down-to-earth manner. Ziweixing is always in the minority, ordinary people should take their time. Finally, I wish the author finds a platform that suits him and signs a contract as soon as possible.
The writing is very good, but it may be better to write in more detail.
It's great, the writing is beautiful!