Yuan Shi Limo, a vampire model, was gravely injured by Litu, who had possessed Shiki's body, and transmigrated into the world of Naruto as Haruno Sakura. There, she found her mother, who had been missing for fifty years. Limo met Itachi, Sasuke, Ino, Naruto, Hinata... Everything was so wonderful that she couldn't bear to leave this beautiful dream. That was until Sasuke's betrayal and the Third Hokage's departure made Limo's heart go cold, though she had been immersed in happiness. Would Sasuke ever come back? No one knew. What would Limo choose? And how would it all end...
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It's so confusing, what a Mary Sue, I'm speechless, this heroine is so outrageous
. . . . Is Itachi so easy to talk to? . . . . . .
At just a few years old, my figure is already well-developed and must be very well developed. . . . . . . . . . .
Sakura was called the most beautiful woman in Konoha when she was 3 years old. She was called the genius of the Haruno family when she was 4 years old. Now she is 5 years old and is also called the talented girl of Konoha [It's so amazing = = I can't believe it] Tsk tsk, you have oval-shaped cheeks at the age of three? Isn't it round? My 4-year-old sister's face is not half as good as hers. Teaching your children ninjutsu fulfills a mother's responsibility. . . ,? [This is obviously irresponsible, right? Obviously it is an unknown family, but it gave birth to a genius who is rare in ten thousand years. During this period, the girl's fame far exceeded that of famous families such as the Uchiha clan and the Hyuga clan. Why is this girl so powerful? No one knows. Beauty, genius, talented woman, it seems that all the honors have been taken away by this girl. [Author, you also know, Marisu is too much] And Lima doesn't seem to be so powerful, right? It doesn't mean anything to me, and I don't dislike Mary Sues either, but I just think it's too unreasonable. I know this is the article that the author worked hard to write, but I have to finish it and read it myself.
… A three-year-old can only be considered cute at best, and is Sakura that beautiful? I'm not saying she's not beautiful, she's just the most beautiful woman or something. . . And the description of Sakura is too Mary Sue
The plot is a bit confusing, but the writing is very relaxed...
Oh, it looks pretty good
She is a beauty at the age of 3…
The girl in front of her has cherry-colored hair draped lazily over her shoulders, an oval face, watery eyes, pink lips, and a slender figure. She has an angelic face and a devilish figure. The aristocratic aura exuding from her body makes it hard to tell that she is just a descendant of the obscure Haruno family. [Girl] Worse! [The slender figure is uneven] It's getting heavier!! Let me ask = = Is she still a child?!
In fact, when I saw this chapter, I already wanted to say something. There are several reasons why I personally dislike your article: 1. I don't understand whether this article is written in the first person or the third person. PS: I don't know if other readers understand it. 2. The most important point is, is the author writing the original version of Li Mo? If you are writing the original version of Li Mo, then I can only regret to tell you that you have lost some of the original Li Mo. Why do I say this? You see: Limo turned out to be a vampire. She is not more than a thousand years old but hundreds of years old. Her original character and habits have been deeply rooted in her bones. An indifferent character is the real Limo. Limo is the kind of vampire who frowns at most when the sky falls. Why do she have so many expressions? Where has her indifferent personality gone?? I'm not saying that you, the author, don't write well. When every author writes an article, he writes the article with the intention of bringing joy to the readers. Of course, the result in return is to hope for the support of the readers. And when every author writes the article, does he not write fluent sentences, wrong words, or typos? If you, the author, were not writing about the original version of Li Mo, this article would still be a very interesting article. Therefore, the author, please consider carefully whether you are writing about the original version of Li Mo or another version of Li Mo. The above is my personal opinion. It is my first time to write a long review, and I hope the author can forgive me. Thank you!