After Getting Together with a Game NPC, I Became the Strongest in the World

In the dead of night, Lu Suiqiu quietly walked up to Lin Jinwan: "Pavilion Master, tonight..." The sound stopped suddenly, and the person next to the pillow was quietly reading a book? She looked curiously, but saw "The Girlfriend I Randomly Said Comes True" and "The Poisoned Girl and Her Best Friend Heed" Lin Jin tilted his head and gently stopped her movement, "Collect it first, and then discuss other matters." Lu Xianqiu: Humph! [Click to favorites to help xql progress!

I don't know if I have read it yet, so I just came up with it. In fact, the main part of the story is too fast in the later period. Xiao Lu's cultivation level is like drinking water. The martial arts training process is not written in detail, which makes Xiao Lu seem weak and the plot is too fluid. In addition, there is a feeling in the later stage that Xiao Lu seems to be very powerful, as if everything has been designed, but her enemies are often stronger, and they are not stronger than one or two, whether in terms of force or information. , Xiao Lu has always been passive, she doesn't know anything, can't do anything, and may have lost the sense of excitement of a refreshing article (I didn't read the label, I don't know if it is a refreshing article), and the rhythm of the article is a bit bland. I don't know how to describe it, it is quite daily, without the feeling of a nine-death experience of upgrading the protagonist. It seems that Xiao Lu is not good at martial arts, but he is very strong when he explodes when encountering things, and there is no obvious cost. It is very strange. However, Huo Zhixiang, Linjiangxian and other players' descriptions are good. Backhand stabbing of teammates reflects the characteristics of the player's fourth natural disaster, and it is really easy to switch between the small pavilion master and the pavilion master! ! ! ! ! Anyway, the overall feeling of the story is that the plot line is average, but the emotional line is good. It may be more urgent later on, and the rhythm is obviously hasty. In fact, before Xiao Lu goes to fight the boss, some characters can release information through some characters, so that Xiao Lu knows more information. It will not feel like Xiao Lu doesn't know anything now, which is quite frustrating.

It's so beautiful ~ Finished with flowers ~ Although there were some disappointments in the middle, I was comforted by the fact that the ending was good. The main reason is that Qiuqiu seems to be strategizing, but in fact, you can feel her deep sense of powerlessness at times. For example, when confronting Master Yuwen, and regarding the bridge between the game and reality, she is actually very passive. She knew nothing at the beginning, kept guessing in the middle, and only learned a lot towards the end. Then the relationship between Qiuqiu and the Pavilion Master is really yyds, it's so sweet, and the flow is smooth and not abrupt. The article doesn't say why they fell in love from beginning to end, but the article is full of sugar, and it's a cyclical and gradual kind. Love doesn't know where it started, but it goes deep, maybe that's how they are.

I don't think the pacing issue is a big problem, it's probably due to the setting of the fourth natural disaster. The main plot of the fourth natural disaster novel I have read is generally very long. The first time I read it, it was finished in 300,000 yuan. I thought it was very fast. But after watching it, I felt quite comfortable

Love the door. . . (Showing a subtle expression)

Wailou, does Xiaohai really like the word autumn? I just discovered that the names of the protagonists in the three books are all in Qiu

Very nice, very happy ending [Cat Head]

Although some parts could indeed be better, I really loved this book [Spreading Flowers]

The writing is very nice. This kind of subject matter is very niche, but the writing is very good.

Really finished spreading flowers! Good