Do you know what I've become now?
All the beauty in my soul, every path I walked with all my heart, was utterly shattered on the day you died,
swallowed by reincarnation along with you.
Those are the traces of the Dao, the traces of my broken body, but they are no longer traces of you and me.
So hatred brought me here.
Even all the iron in this universe could not be forged into a word as vast as "hate."
Can you see them? These souls drifting across the sky, these desolate graves stretching for a thousand miles, are the elegy I sing for you, thirty years too late.
After this, I will give everything to pay for it all.
But.
Tonight.
My fury exists for you alone.
I found this book by accident. I originally read it out of love for the author, but because its unique charm was so attractive, I finished reading it in three days. Although it has been many years since the completion of this book. But out of great fondness and unfinished thoughts, let me write down my thoughts after reading it. I don't know if the author can see it, but if so, I hope you feel my love.
I really like the depiction and design of the plot. Every passing detail hidden in the text, even in the words and sentences in the outer chapters, has its own corresponding plot. Each seemingly independent paragraph interweaves one unexpected and reasonable reversal as it progresses, and when put together, the huge plan hidden behind it is revealed. The characters are also portrayed with great care, whether it is Yan Tongruo, Quan Qianliu, Qing Tianling... In the author's writing, you can clearly feel the friendship, goodness, order, or love they each believe in, and the "Tao" that belongs to them that they pursue.
To be honest, I didn't understand some of the short passages. I blame it on me for the time being because I was too excited to read and didn't have time to dissect every detail that the author carefully created. This may be solved when I read it again. It may also be because I am not familiar with the list of gods and historical stories. The author should be praised here for his clever way of integrating these elements, which is really admirable and gratifying.
As for the ending of this article, it seems to end abruptly, but the charm is like the cry after the strongest move is released, which is very profound and leaves people unfinished. Perhaps what seems to us to be selfish and cunning is also pursuing its own path. This is probably the meaning of the sentence left by the author in the introduction: "I have my own way."
Chapters are written carefully, until I finally see the last word, I finally connect everything and see the unique color of the whole story. I really like this kind of interconnected structure, and I also love the poignancy and dazzling beauty of every character in the author's works. While they are trying their best to find a way out and follow the path, everyone's destiny story is so confusing, but it seems to be as reasonable as planned. Maybe this is the absurdity of the world.
Still want to say, I really like this story. Even after so long, I still hope that the world built with such care can be seen by more people. This is a very, very thoughtful work and a very, very interesting world.
2023.11.16
Will you pick up novels again? You don't say you are middle-aged yet, you are in your middle age!
After many years, I finally found this original novel
I watched it again after five years and I still liked it. I always feel like I still have more to say, and I very much hope there will be a follow-up.
Thinking of some things, such as why when they finally went to destroy Kunlun, there was no one on Kunlun and only one puppet came out. Han Dulong did not dare to tell who Yan Tongruo saw on him, and then asked Long Xuhu to come out, indicating that Kunlun knew that there was an enemy. I wrote about Shui Yan and the many junior sisters who pursued Qianliu before. I felt that there were many people in Kunlun. After it was revealed that Kunlun was a bad guy, there were no more people in order to set off Yinfengshasa.
The most powerful technique that appears in the whole text is actually used by the bad guy. It is so powerful that it makes people despair and feel sorry for the master. The last time I watched it, I thought that such a powerful technique would destroy Kunlun. Combined with Jiang Ziya's words, my impression of him was that he was different and could not be understood by ordinary people, but he was responsible. After destroying Kunlun Mountain, there would be no more Nine Yin Corpse Girls. This time I found out that it was Penglai Mountain that was destroyed. He made Kunlun truly isolated from the world, and made Yan Tongruo live with hatred and be his container. Angry, he is so bad.
However, Shen Gongbao, who was once at the same level, can no longer maintain his body. It's strange that his remnant soul can still use the thirty-three-day thunder curse.
It's a pity that Qianliu's soul was used to break the door open, I thought it would have a more important use.
Ah, it's really beautiful. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. But the author of such a sad story must have been very sad to write it. Thank you for your hard work so that people can read this story.
It took me two nights to finish watching it, and it consumed three batteries. Well~ the plot is so intense that I can't stop rating it. Let's make up for it in one go! Lu! What a pity! This is the starting point! Jinjiang is clearly a bastard world that "doesn't need a world view or big scenes, as long as it keeps having fun and snowy nights, it will be popular"! Well~ let's talk about the flaws first. First, Qingtian Ling exists just to clear his name! It's so obvious! Except for the fact that Yu was a Nine-Yin Corpse Girl who didn't guess, when the truth was revealed, there was almost no feeling of shouting "So that's it"; secondly, although it is true that emotional description has always been a male weakness, although this is not a romantic drama at all (although it is covered with such a skin...), But since it is the main line, how can Yu and Qing's feelings be unconvincing! The reason for celebrating seems to have been forced upon me! Demo~ What was supposed to be a million-word article was compressed so hard, but it has been handled very well! I saw some people say that their world view is based on other people's opinions. As someone who rarely reads online articles (she was seduced by Sister Li on Fanfou ==), Jianguo, your world view is very interesting! All in all I think it's very fresh. Ah, the mobile phone addicts feel their hands are so sore... Jia~ Let's do this for now~
Not sure if I understand it, but it's really exciting!
Very, excellent work. I also read two other books, which I thought were very exciting. I actually read Sister Li first (unfinished, unfortunately), and then this book. I was a little uncomfortable with it at first, but gradually as the story unfolded, I read it in silence for two days, and my heart was still filled with sadness and shock. This book surpasses some of my favorite classics. I look forward to your works. No matter how long it takes, this account that has collected your works will be preserved forever.
Wang Jianguo, please come back and write the second part soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
(It's been a long time since I've been this sensational... To be precise, it's not a long review, just my thoughts after reading it. But, it's all typed word by word on my mobile phone.)
I watched it desperately, and finally finished it in one week.
I have always admired people who write long novels, because the longest novel I have written so far is only about 100,000 words, and it was a eunuch—it was all handwritten TuT when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Maybe it's because I'm getting older. It seems that I have less and less passion for writing. I am more and more influenced by the outside world. I have no perseverance and no literary ideas. In short, I don't have a satisfactory result in the end. On the contrary, when I didn't understand that there were so many people in the world who could write novels and essays, and who could write good novels and essays, my fevered head was filled with arrogant self-confidence and enthusiasm that did not require response. Looking at my ugly words in a thick pile, I was only left with happiness and a sense of accomplishment. But later. . . . In fact, I still have passion, but my courage is not yet full, and I can't bear to see my story die prematurely.
However, now, I am a die-hard fan who has been waiting for updates every day since I fell into Sister Li's readership. I am also suffering from the author's hand cancer syndrome and irregular updates (hey...). I help you promote it on various IMs. I also vote for you on Sina Weibo. I opened NetEase Weibo just to read the column of Kingdom of the Dead Sword. Because I was shocked by your stinking poorness running around all the time, I was hit by Xiao Liu's cold jokes (=____.=), I was attracted by your inseparable bond with scumbags, and I was moved by your persistence in not giving up your ideals. How I once wanted (and still do now) to write a book of my own, complete and complete, with black and white writing on the paper. When I turn the pages, I can hear the sound of rubbing, which makes me laugh and burst into tears. Not for readers, not for sales, not for collections and votes, but for yourself. (Oh my god, I'm so moved right now╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭) Because ideals are really difficult to achieve in the face of reality. Especially in such an era and dynasty.
I really want to see Yan Tongruo, Quan Qianliu, Qingtian Ling, Yun Zhongzi, Bai Qi, Nezha, Ao Li, Wan, Yu, Xiao Ye, Xiao Gen (yes, I have a clear distinction between love and hate and only love to be sensational), and I want to see them surging and breaking through Nirvana. Just a few hundred thousand, how can it be enough!
At first, I frowned after reading a few chapters. There were too many killing scenes (are they all good!), And girls would not like it (although I have also read a lot of fairy tales, magic, magic, and heaven, but your writing is really tragic...); But, why, I couldn't help being caught in the plot, and I wanted to laugh and cry to my heart's content, and join in the fierce battle.
Nine Knives said that the box office success of "Those Years" has nothing to do with the name Nine Knives, nor does it have anything to do with the vulgar love theme; it sold well because it is good-looking.
Just because it looks good.
From every intricate conspiracy idea in the whole article, the deeply emotional text, the ghostly recurring revision announcements before and after chapters (-Pan-), and from the update speed of Sister Li who is currently writing, I can vaguely imagine how difficult it was when you first created Dao Tianqi, and how you were always hit by the number of collection comments when you first tried to write a full-length novel. . . It can be seen that because I once had the same passion, I now have countless admiration.
It seems that running all the way towards your ideal requires that kind of unwillingness, that kind of disdain for surrender, and that kind of arrogance, arrogance, and momentum like nine knives. When he first started writing, no one paid attention to it for five years. What are you afraid of! ! !
I really hope you can cheer up. You have many, many supporters, including lovers, fans, and readers. Your Japanese-style jokes bring a lot of joy, as well as occasionally convulsive comics and parody interpretations of history. More importantly, you already have your own work, right? It is your most solid, most solid, and least likely to betray your hard work. It is Dao Tianye, it is Sister Li. It is already standing here, fearless. Words are born for ideals. If you want to write, keep writing! You know, even if the domestic cultural industry and literary world are as barren as this, we cannot let our ideals become victims. You see, there are really many people who believe and believe that your writing is great and that you will eventually succeed in achieving your world.
However, I have no intention of pinning my ideals on your story.
Because, I have determined that everything I am doing now is moving in that direction. In short, one day, I will be able to see the sky I created.
One book, one world, one word, one Kunpeng.
Let's encourage each other with Uncle Jianguo.
2011, December 10.
"Because, because, if Qianliu wants to kill me," Yan Tongruo said, her grief was being borne like this, "If Qianliu wants to kill me, I just need to be killed by you quietly." TuT
I found this book by accident. I originally read it out of love for the author, but because its unique charm was so attractive, I finished reading it in three days. Although it has been many years since the completion of this book. But out of great fondness and unfinished thoughts, let me write down my thoughts after reading it. I don't know if the author can see it, but if so, I hope you feel my love. I really like the depiction and design of the plot. Every passing detail hidden in the text, even in the words and sentences in the outer chapters, has its own corresponding plot. Each seemingly independent paragraph interweaves one unexpected and reasonable reversal as it progresses, and when put together, the huge plan hidden behind it is revealed. The characters are also portrayed with great care, whether it is Yan Tongruo, Quan Qianliu, Qing Tianling... In the author's writing, you can clearly feel the friendship, goodness, order, or love they each believe in, and the "Tao" that belongs to them that they pursue. To be honest, I didn't understand some of the short passages. I blame it on me for the time being because I was too excited to read and didn't have time to dissect every detail that the author carefully created. This may be solved when I read it again. It may also be because I am not familiar with the list of gods and historical stories. The author should be praised here for his clever way of integrating these elements, which is really admirable and gratifying. As for the ending of this article, it seems to end abruptly, but the charm is like the cry after the strongest move is released, which is very profound and leaves people unfinished. Perhaps what seems to us to be selfish and cunning is also pursuing its own path. This is probably the meaning of the sentence left by the author in the introduction: "I have my own way." Chapters are written carefully, until I finally see the last word, I finally connect everything and see the unique color of the whole story. I really like this kind of interconnected structure, and I also love the poignancy and dazzling beauty of every character in the author's works. While they are trying their best to find a way out and follow the path, everyone's destiny story is so confusing, but it seems to be as reasonable as planned. Maybe this is the absurdity of the world. Still want to say, I really like this story. Even after so long, I still hope that the world built with such care can be seen by more people. This is a very, very thoughtful work and a very, very interesting world. 2023.11.16
Will you pick up novels again? You don't say you are middle-aged yet, you are in your middle age!
After many years, I finally found this original novel
I watched it again after five years and I still liked it. I always feel like I still have more to say, and I very much hope there will be a follow-up. Thinking of some things, such as why when they finally went to destroy Kunlun, there was no one on Kunlun and only one puppet came out. Han Dulong did not dare to tell who Yan Tongruo saw on him, and then asked Long Xuhu to come out, indicating that Kunlun knew that there was an enemy. I wrote about Shui Yan and the many junior sisters who pursued Qianliu before. I felt that there were many people in Kunlun. After it was revealed that Kunlun was a bad guy, there were no more people in order to set off Yinfengshasa. The most powerful technique that appears in the whole text is actually used by the bad guy. It is so powerful that it makes people despair and feel sorry for the master. The last time I watched it, I thought that such a powerful technique would destroy Kunlun. Combined with Jiang Ziya's words, my impression of him was that he was different and could not be understood by ordinary people, but he was responsible. After destroying Kunlun Mountain, there would be no more Nine Yin Corpse Girls. This time I found out that it was Penglai Mountain that was destroyed. He made Kunlun truly isolated from the world, and made Yan Tongruo live with hatred and be his container. Angry, he is so bad. However, Shen Gongbao, who was once at the same level, can no longer maintain his body. It's strange that his remnant soul can still use the thirty-three-day thunder curse. It's a pity that Qianliu's soul was used to break the door open, I thought it would have a more important use. Ah, it's really beautiful. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. But the author of such a sad story must have been very sad to write it. Thank you for your hard work so that people can read this story.
It took me two nights to finish watching it, and it consumed three batteries. Well~ the plot is so intense that I can't stop rating it. Let's make up for it in one go! Lu! What a pity! This is the starting point! Jinjiang is clearly a bastard world that "doesn't need a world view or big scenes, as long as it keeps having fun and snowy nights, it will be popular"! Well~ let's talk about the flaws first. First, Qingtian Ling exists just to clear his name! It's so obvious! Except for the fact that Yu was a Nine-Yin Corpse Girl who didn't guess, when the truth was revealed, there was almost no feeling of shouting "So that's it"; secondly, although it is true that emotional description has always been a male weakness, although this is not a romantic drama at all (although it is covered with such a skin...), But since it is the main line, how can Yu and Qing's feelings be unconvincing! The reason for celebrating seems to have been forced upon me! Demo~ What was supposed to be a million-word article was compressed so hard, but it has been handled very well! I saw some people say that their world view is based on other people's opinions. As someone who rarely reads online articles (she was seduced by Sister Li on Fanfou ==), Jianguo, your world view is very interesting! All in all I think it's very fresh. Ah, the mobile phone addicts feel their hands are so sore... Jia~ Let's do this for now~
Not sure if I understand it, but it's really exciting!
Very, excellent work. I also read two other books, which I thought were very exciting. I actually read Sister Li first (unfinished, unfortunately), and then this book. I was a little uncomfortable with it at first, but gradually as the story unfolded, I read it in silence for two days, and my heart was still filled with sadness and shock. This book surpasses some of my favorite classics. I look forward to your works. No matter how long it takes, this account that has collected your works will be preserved forever.
Wang Jianguo, please come back and write the second part soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
(It's been a long time since I've been this sensational... To be precise, it's not a long review, just my thoughts after reading it. But, it's all typed word by word on my mobile phone.) I watched it desperately, and finally finished it in one week. I have always admired people who write long novels, because the longest novel I have written so far is only about 100,000 words, and it was a eunuch—it was all handwritten TuT when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Maybe it's because I'm getting older. It seems that I have less and less passion for writing. I am more and more influenced by the outside world. I have no perseverance and no literary ideas. In short, I don't have a satisfactory result in the end. On the contrary, when I didn't understand that there were so many people in the world who could write novels and essays, and who could write good novels and essays, my fevered head was filled with arrogant self-confidence and enthusiasm that did not require response. Looking at my ugly words in a thick pile, I was only left with happiness and a sense of accomplishment. But later. . . . In fact, I still have passion, but my courage is not yet full, and I can't bear to see my story die prematurely. However, now, I am a die-hard fan who has been waiting for updates every day since I fell into Sister Li's readership. I am also suffering from the author's hand cancer syndrome and irregular updates (hey...). I help you promote it on various IMs. I also vote for you on Sina Weibo. I opened NetEase Weibo just to read the column of Kingdom of the Dead Sword. Because I was shocked by your stinking poorness running around all the time, I was hit by Xiao Liu's cold jokes (=____.=), I was attracted by your inseparable bond with scumbags, and I was moved by your persistence in not giving up your ideals. How I once wanted (and still do now) to write a book of my own, complete and complete, with black and white writing on the paper. When I turn the pages, I can hear the sound of rubbing, which makes me laugh and burst into tears. Not for readers, not for sales, not for collections and votes, but for yourself. (Oh my god, I'm so moved right now╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭) Because ideals are really difficult to achieve in the face of reality. Especially in such an era and dynasty. I really want to see Yan Tongruo, Quan Qianliu, Qingtian Ling, Yun Zhongzi, Bai Qi, Nezha, Ao Li, Wan, Yu, Xiao Ye, Xiao Gen (yes, I have a clear distinction between love and hate and only love to be sensational), and I want to see them surging and breaking through Nirvana. Just a few hundred thousand, how can it be enough! At first, I frowned after reading a few chapters. There were too many killing scenes (are they all good!), And girls would not like it (although I have also read a lot of fairy tales, magic, magic, and heaven, but your writing is really tragic...); But, why, I couldn't help being caught in the plot, and I wanted to laugh and cry to my heart's content, and join in the fierce battle. Nine Knives said that the box office success of "Those Years" has nothing to do with the name Nine Knives, nor does it have anything to do with the vulgar love theme; it sold well because it is good-looking. Just because it looks good. From every intricate conspiracy idea in the whole article, the deeply emotional text, the ghostly recurring revision announcements before and after chapters (-Pan-), and from the update speed of Sister Li who is currently writing, I can vaguely imagine how difficult it was when you first created Dao Tianqi, and how you were always hit by the number of collection comments when you first tried to write a full-length novel. . . It can be seen that because I once had the same passion, I now have countless admiration. It seems that running all the way towards your ideal requires that kind of unwillingness, that kind of disdain for surrender, and that kind of arrogance, arrogance, and momentum like nine knives. When he first started writing, no one paid attention to it for five years. What are you afraid of! ! ! I really hope you can cheer up. You have many, many supporters, including lovers, fans, and readers. Your Japanese-style jokes bring a lot of joy, as well as occasionally convulsive comics and parody interpretations of history. More importantly, you already have your own work, right? It is your most solid, most solid, and least likely to betray your hard work. It is Dao Tianye, it is Sister Li. It is already standing here, fearless. Words are born for ideals. If you want to write, keep writing! You know, even if the domestic cultural industry and literary world are as barren as this, we cannot let our ideals become victims. You see, there are really many people who believe and believe that your writing is great and that you will eventually succeed in achieving your world. However, I have no intention of pinning my ideals on your story. Because, I have determined that everything I am doing now is moving in that direction. In short, one day, I will be able to see the sky I created. One book, one world, one word, one Kunpeng. Let's encourage each other with Uncle Jianguo. 2011, December 10.
"Because, because, if Qianliu wants to kill me," Yan Tongruo said, her grief was being borne like this, "If Qianliu wants to kill me, I just need to be killed by you quietly." TuT