The Palace Falls (First Draft)

The emotional line here is very unsuccessful. The heroine was not firm at first and could not bear to let go of either of them. Later before marriage, she was sure that she fell in love with Rui Si, but she was not sure whether she had family affection or love for Yi Ru. Finally, she fell in love with Chen Fengbai. To be honest, I prefer a heroine with a single-minded relationship. In fact, after reading this, I can't decide who is the male protagonist. I think the writing of the three men is very weak, and no one scores higher than the other. It's good that everyone dies in the ending. I can't watch Yongning being pregnant with Chen's child and then haunting the hearts of Ruiyi and Ruiyi, and I can't accept that Ruiyi and Ruiyi have their own happiness without Yongning. In fact, Yongning is very selfish, and so am I as a reader, hahahaha

Speaking of which, this is an article I followed a long time ago. I finished half of it, but Yuexia's update was not fast. I was also busy with other things, and the group I added was kicked out (... Hehe, sorry) Later I forgot about it, I had nothing to do the night before yesterday, so I read some old articles and opened the collection. Only then did I realize that "Gong Qing" had already been written. After watching the ending, I was extremely sad. It turns out that the result is like this... It is like this Although it might have been sad to see the real history in the past, I still didn't expect the final result to be like this. Ruisi, Yiru, Fengbai, Wenbin... Of course, there is also Yongning… Yuexia's writing is not my favorite type, but I think the character settings are particularly interesting and full-bodied, and I can't forget them. Rui Si, who is full of evil but fragile, Yi Ru, who is rich and gentle, Feng Bai, who is burdened with hatred and cannot turn back, and Wen Bin, who seems to be ordinary... I read the book and think about it, but my heart can't calm down. Now I have summarized the top ten unforgettable scenes that moved me, which can also be regarded as a souvenir of my reading of the article! Please forgive me for any inappropriateness! In no particular order: First scene: I was a little annoyed, it was always embarrassing to be exposed, and I was just being cool. All I wanted was his obedience and comfort, but I seemed to have ignored my own status and our mutual identity, and ended up making things worse. "Get up." I waved away the palace maid, and I walked over, trying to reach out and help him get up. "Thank you, Your Highness." His voice was as calm as ever, but he stepped back, avoiding my hand, and slowly stood up. He lowered his head and stopped looking at me. After a while, he said, "Please Rong Chen, please leave." (The gentle Yiru also has the temper and stubbornness of a child, so cute. Compared to his gentleness towards Yongning, I prefer Yiru's temper, Gentle men seem to be common and stereotyped in many novice articles. They are also difficult to get close to and are too facial-facial. It is Yiru's temper that makes me remember that he is Yiru and not Zhang San, Li Siwang and Er...) Second scene: "How will others know if you don't tell me?" I also got angry. "I can go if I like, and why would you go?" "Are we the same?" The next moment, Wang Ruisi suddenly appeared next to me, held my arm forcefully, forced me to turn around and look at him, and then said word by word: "I am a man, are you? I am a slave, are you? I was born to be better than others, and I deserve to be mistreated and looked down upon by others, are you? ? I like to go to brothels, because no one will look down on me there, do you too? My noble princess? Are you the same as me? To you, I am just teasing and teasing when you are not happy, and you don't even bother to look at me, right? (Ruisi and Yongning, the way they get along always reminds me of the Japanese "Chun Qin Chao", The same young lady and slave, the same abuse and joy, but the difference is that the arrogant Chunqin finally accepted Sasuke, while the kind-hearted Yongning lost his love while wandering. Maybe on the road to love, you really shouldn't think too much...) The third scene: "..." He didn't speak for a long time, just looking at me like this, but sadness gradually gathered in his eyes. It was a kind of sadness and melancholy that could not be described in words. It also made his whole person look touching. It turns out that sadness and melancholy can be so beautiful, so beautiful that those who see it can't stop crying. When my tears rolled down my cheeks and dripped onto his hands, Wang Ruisi slowly closed his eyes. When those beautiful and evil eyes opened again, the sadness and even the pain of despair disappeared, replaced by a kind of calmness after desolation. He raised his hand and gently wiped away the tears on my cheeks and eyes, and said in a tone I had never heard before: "For these tears, even if you just lied to me, even if I have to pay everything for it in the future, I will admit it." (For this last sentence, even if this is a trap, I jumped resolutely... It turns out that sadness and melancholy can be so beautiful. It turns out that my love for you really has nothing to do with you.) The fourth scene: "Stop crying, your face looks like a tabby cat. I promise I won't annoy you in the future, okay? Be good, stop crying." His gentle voice sounded in my ears. I had never heard him speak like this before, and I felt a little at a loss for a moment. "Stop crying, Yongning, it's not worth crying like this for me, don't cry anymore..." His voice disappeared in my ears, and his cold lips gently fell on my cheek. (Alas... Sigh, Ruisi has many classic lines, but this guy is a giant in words and a dwarf in action. Compared with Yiru's kiss, Chen Fengbai's eating and drying, Ruisi's benefits are really very few... He was punished to kneel down and copy books and was beaten and knifed countless times. In the end, all he got was a kiss from a child, which made us, the resentful women, burst into tears and clutch our handkerchiefs with great resentment.) The fifth scene: "Yes," he looked at me, closed his eyes slightly, and when he opened them again, his eyes were as clear as before, "When I was a child, I always felt that just because you were here, there were always too many ifs in my life, which were unpredictable, and even made me wonder if everything would be better without you. But now I understand that if you are not here in my life, then what difference will it make if I live and die together?" (Ruisi's infatuation always makes people cry) Scene six: Shuyue's smile kept appearing in front of my eyes for a long time. After she smiled that day, she kowtowed three times to me, then turned around and left. Someone had packed her things for her, and she just kept walking away without looking back. The last smile she left here was not for me, so I can't accurately tell whether her smile was one of sudden enlightenment or complete despair, or both. She left this smile to one person, but in the end, that person didn't speak or say a word for her. (Shu Yue is a minor supporting character who left a deep impression on me. Maybe she has her own calculations in her mind, but who can say that she is wrong? A supporting character is not qualified to succeed, but has the right to fight for it. If she cannot succeed, she will eventually become ashes. Perhaps Yongning's repetitiveness and gentleness made me resentful, but Shuyue's little tricks made me feel pity. Is the love of little people not love? ) Scene 7: "Your Highness," when I turned around and was about to leave, Ruisi suddenly spoke, his voice was very low, "If one day, you want to leave me forever, can I ask you something?" My body trembled, and an inexplicable fear and sadness surged into my heart. Why did he say that? He can't know the future results, so... "What's the matter?" I forced myself to calm down and stopped, but did not turn around to look at him. "When you leave, you must keep your steps firm and keep moving forward. No matter how I call you or cry and beg you, don't stop, let alone look back, and don't even look at me, okay?" He said in a calm tone, as if he was talking about someone else's business. (Actually, Ruisi may be the person who understands Yongning best. Unfortunately, his inferiority complex and Yongning's sense of responsibility limit the relationship between the two. Ruisi underestimated his own weight, and Yongning overestimated his abilities and his heart.) Scene 8: Yiru's shoulders stiffened slightly, and then relaxed again. At the same time, his hands gently wrapped around my waist, pulling me closer, gradually tightening his strength, and finally hugging me tightly, "My family, country, and world, from the time I was ten years old, my family, country, and world have only been you." (Yiru's only direct confession made Yongning shed tears and made me sigh...) Scene 9: "That's what you have to do," Ruisi smiled, and the pain in his eyes dissipated, replaced by clarity, "I also said that I will stay with you until I die." (Ruisi in the following article becomes calm and calm. Because he has made a decision, he no longer hesitates. Because he knows the outcome, he accepts and is calm... This calmness is even more heartbreaking) Scene 10: The Ora soldiers have poured in like a tide, and everything is finally over. Before I closed my eyes, I felt my body light up. Someone picked me up and said in my ear: "Yongning, don't think that you can get rid of me by dying. Don't even think about getting rid of me if you go to poverty or to hell - because I love you!" (The ending is very unexpected and seems reasonable. It's great, but it's sad... 55555, I actually prefer tragic characters like Murong Fu. I actually like Chen Fengbai's character design, but I always feel that Fengbai's image is not very three-dimensional. It wasn't until this sentence was slowly spoken in the last chapter that I had a feeling. In fact, I felt that Feng Bai could have been described as a little more crazy at the end, and maybe the character would have been more powerful (my humble opinion, please don't blame me). I always felt that Yongning fell in love with Feng Bai too quickly, and I didn't feel that she liked him much. I always thought that she liked Ruisi... Feng Bai makes me feel like a wolf, alone in his revenge, drifting away on the road of life. Unfortunately, he made the same mistake as Yong Ning, always overestimating his cruelty. I don't know what Feng Bai was thinking when he died holding Yongning in his arms, but I remember the shyness under the red hijab on the wedding night.) I just scribbled it down as a souvenir. Please don't be offended if you are disrespectful. I strongly appeal to write down Chen Fengbai's extra story! ! ! ! ! ! !

I always thought that Yongning would be with Ruisi, but Feng Bai's writing was indeed a bit thin, and he didn't feel that Yongning liked him. Yiru and Ruisi are both people in Yongning's life who cannot bear to be hurt, but after all, Ruisi's childhood was more frustrating, and Yongning was deliberately bullied when he was a child. At least they should be allowed to live happily for the rest of their lives to make up for it... Hey, in fact, when I saw the ending, I still felt a throbbing feeling in my heart, at least let them live happily in my dream. In fact, the author's purpose in writing this ending is to hope that people who read the article will know what real life is and not blindly indulge in an illusory world...

Finished reading. Feeling angry. This heroine takes it upon herself to get fucked. From a young age, I had been working very nervously, and I had been busy for more than ten years without achieving anything. Even when I had a group of little companions, they were killed one by one, and those who were not killed were worse off than dead. She didn't want an honest consort, she had to compete with him to create one with ulterior motives. She sacrificed her body and soul with a few sweet words. Chen's suspicious behavior had already hinted at revenge, but she was not alerted yet, so she had to stab her belly with a sword. She came here just to help the tyrants do evil. The destruction of the Tumu War would not have been successful without her.

I like this text so much, and I love the ending so much

Cry to death, they are all dead! Depressed

One of the rare high-quality novels in Jinjiang. I like Ruisi very much, and "Suddenly Like a Dream" is also very interesting.

It made me really depressed, why didn't Yongning choose Yiru? I feel so bad, why is Yongning so confused despite being so smart?

Finished reading. Feeling angry. This heroine takes it upon herself to get fucked. From a young age, I had been working very nervously, and I had been busy for more than ten years without achieving anything. Even when I had a group of little companions, they were killed one by one, and those who were not killed were worse off than dead. She didn't want an honest consort, she had to compete with him to create one with ulterior motives. She sacrificed her body and soul with a few sweet words. Chen's suspicious behavior had already hinted at revenge, but she was not alerted yet, so she had to stab her belly with a sword. She came here just to help the tyrants do evil. The destruction of the Tumu War would not have been successful without her.

I came in to read it because of the high number of clicks. After reading the first 10 chapters and looking at the ending, it was embarrassing. I don't say whether it's for nothing, I just say that the heroine is too stupid. As a time traveler, she actually tried to think of some stupid methods that are not popular. First, she caused everyone around her to follow her to death, and finally the whole country was destroyed. It's too natural to think about leaving the palace to make friends or secret guards. Is it possible for her to do it alone? Just kill Oboi directly and get rid of the old thief. The opponent is not the Invincible Dongfang, and he can't kill an early stage eunuch on his own territory. She must first pretend to be young and talk about enjoying her childhood, and then drag her out of the palace to struggle with the family's influence, and then go around in a big circle and end up falling in love with her enemy, and commit suicide to pay off her debts. She completely asked for this ending.