He has the same ideals, brains, and abilities as any bona fide male lead.
He longs to show what he can do on a daring voyage, and is even more eager to become the richest man in the world.
But clutching his moneybag, he blunders into a novel tagged "danmei" without even realizing it. A few men who are supposedly his "companions" force him to reveal an unparalleled spirit, repeatedly crushed and resisting, then resisting and crushed again.
He thinks his misfortune comes from carrying the world's most valuable map as he searches for the legendary "Philosopher's Stone." But he doesn't know that the reason monsters target Tang Sanzang isn't to steal his scriptures, but to get their hands on that delicious, tender flesh.
So, flaunting the tempting flesh he has, he sets off on a debauched journey of slaying demons, teasing giants, wreaking havoc across the world, and falling in love along the way.
Dear, if you can see it, please contact me and leave a message. . The author recently became a painter. . .
Author, how long has it been since you came back... By the way, what kind of myth is this? When I read it before, I thought this giant was really silly and cute.
KISSKISSKISS~~XCP
Yeah, yeah, being a money worshipper is also a cute thing, what a cute young master~
Oh oh oh JQ ah JQ~Young man, why have you cared about it since you were a child~~The little ones are all purple~~Noja Fansado's loyal dog, just obey him~~
I finally have access to the Internet, let's take a look
It took twice as long as expected to read this article. Good article, but I felt a little tired while reading it. Let me tell you how I feel. It's a family matter and we accept discussion, haha.
First of all, the author chose a story with a Western background, which would inevitably go against the reading habits of most Eastern readers. This means that the author must avoid the obstacles that deficits bring to reading. The most obvious place where these obstacles appear is in the names of places and people. This has the same flaw as a Western fantasy article in LS, that is, unfamiliar names of people and places frequently appear in just a few chapters, which is a huge reading obstacle for readers. Whenever readers see a name, they will stop and think about who this person is. They always pause like this, and most of the time they give up after reading a little. We may be able to remember a Chinese name at a glance, but sometimes we can't remember a foreign name even after reading several chapters. It is true that the author's language in describing the appearance of the characters is very vivid, but each person has two eyes and one mouth. No matter how unique and characteristic the description is, readers will forget about it because there is no unique incident in this character that makes readers remember him. Of course, after reading this article and looking back, I found that the author's writing was quite good. The image of the red-haired boy gradually became more fleshed out as the plot unfolded. But looking at the first three chapters alone, it is impossible to establish too many characters in these short chapters. In addition, the confusion of various place names (which sound quite like people's names) makes reading difficult, especially in the second chapter. Before the reader is fully familiar with the two male protagonists, various cannon fodders appear one after another. To be honest, the second chapter is really too confusing.
Secondly, there are gaps in the plot. I feel like these 11 chapters are divided into two parts. The first part is related to the idol, and the latter part has nothing to do with the idol (ok, what nonsense, PIA!). The suspense setting in the first chapter is good. The boy puts the small bag on the shelf, frames the boss, and is chased by the police. This structure is very good and very attractive to me. But the further I go, the more I want to eat. Setting up suspense does not mean just throwing away the baggage and then sitting back and relaxing. If you want readers to follow you, you must constantly make plot twists, set expectations and then break them. Looking back at this article, the author has lost a burden from the beginning, and there is no longer any bait or twist to provide oxygen to your suspense. Your initial suspense is no longer sustainable. That's all. Later, the incident of the idol was inexplicably unfinished. I still don't understand why the boy secretly sold the idol. The author's previous explanation was not clear enough. I originally thought it was foreshadowing and there would be a satisfactory explanation later. But... What happened to the pirated idol and why it caused such a big mess? These can be used as echoes throughout the rest of the article. The boy ran away, and the matter ended without any problem. It reminded people of the huge battles in the previous chapters, and it really felt a bit anticlimactic.
In the end, the character creation was okay, and the protagonist's portrayal was very successful, but the second male lead, Fan Zuo, was still in the sketching stage and didn't even have color, let alone three-dimensionality. Up to now, my impression of Fan Zuo is "tall" and nothing else. I think Dawson is much better portrayed than Fan Zuo.
By the way, authors who write Western fantasy sometimes tend to lose sight of the other in order to make their writing appear more similar to Western literature. In other words, I always think about my own words and think about how to write and read more authentically, which makes the plot and characters secondary. Therefore, the whole article feels good in writing, but it is difficult to read.
By the way, this should make for a long review...
It seems... My message was swallowed by JJ?
I'll touch my paw and tell Nai that I'll make a comment tomorrow.
Dear, if you can see it, please contact me and leave a message. . The author recently became a painter. . .
Author, how long has it been since you came back... By the way, what kind of myth is this? When I read it before, I thought this giant was really silly and cute.
KISSKISSKISS~~XCP
Yeah, yeah, being a money worshipper is also a cute thing, what a cute young master~
Oh oh oh JQ ah JQ~Young man, why have you cared about it since you were a child~~The little ones are all purple~~Noja Fansado's loyal dog, just obey him~~
I finally have access to the Internet, let's take a look
It took twice as long as expected to read this article. Good article, but I felt a little tired while reading it. Let me tell you how I feel. It's a family matter and we accept discussion, haha. First of all, the author chose a story with a Western background, which would inevitably go against the reading habits of most Eastern readers. This means that the author must avoid the obstacles that deficits bring to reading. The most obvious place where these obstacles appear is in the names of places and people. This has the same flaw as a Western fantasy article in LS, that is, unfamiliar names of people and places frequently appear in just a few chapters, which is a huge reading obstacle for readers. Whenever readers see a name, they will stop and think about who this person is. They always pause like this, and most of the time they give up after reading a little. We may be able to remember a Chinese name at a glance, but sometimes we can't remember a foreign name even after reading several chapters. It is true that the author's language in describing the appearance of the characters is very vivid, but each person has two eyes and one mouth. No matter how unique and characteristic the description is, readers will forget about it because there is no unique incident in this character that makes readers remember him. Of course, after reading this article and looking back, I found that the author's writing was quite good. The image of the red-haired boy gradually became more fleshed out as the plot unfolded. But looking at the first three chapters alone, it is impossible to establish too many characters in these short chapters. In addition, the confusion of various place names (which sound quite like people's names) makes reading difficult, especially in the second chapter. Before the reader is fully familiar with the two male protagonists, various cannon fodders appear one after another. To be honest, the second chapter is really too confusing. Secondly, there are gaps in the plot. I feel like these 11 chapters are divided into two parts. The first part is related to the idol, and the latter part has nothing to do with the idol (ok, what nonsense, PIA!). The suspense setting in the first chapter is good. The boy puts the small bag on the shelf, frames the boss, and is chased by the police. This structure is very good and very attractive to me. But the further I go, the more I want to eat. Setting up suspense does not mean just throwing away the baggage and then sitting back and relaxing. If you want readers to follow you, you must constantly make plot twists, set expectations and then break them. Looking back at this article, the author has lost a burden from the beginning, and there is no longer any bait or twist to provide oxygen to your suspense. Your initial suspense is no longer sustainable. That's all. Later, the incident of the idol was inexplicably unfinished. I still don't understand why the boy secretly sold the idol. The author's previous explanation was not clear enough. I originally thought it was foreshadowing and there would be a satisfactory explanation later. But... What happened to the pirated idol and why it caused such a big mess? These can be used as echoes throughout the rest of the article. The boy ran away, and the matter ended without any problem. It reminded people of the huge battles in the previous chapters, and it really felt a bit anticlimactic. In the end, the character creation was okay, and the protagonist's portrayal was very successful, but the second male lead, Fan Zuo, was still in the sketching stage and didn't even have color, let alone three-dimensionality. Up to now, my impression of Fan Zuo is "tall" and nothing else. I think Dawson is much better portrayed than Fan Zuo. By the way, authors who write Western fantasy sometimes tend to lose sight of the other in order to make their writing appear more similar to Western literature. In other words, I always think about my own words and think about how to write and read more authentically, which makes the plot and characters secondary. Therefore, the whole article feels good in writing, but it is difficult to read. By the way, this should make for a long review...
It seems... My message was swallowed by JJ? I'll touch my paw and tell Nai that I'll make a comment tomorrow.
Click a paw~ I'll give Nai a review tomorrow MUA
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