Yulun Robe

I finished reading it a long time ago, and tonight I suddenly remembered that I wanted to write a comment to the author. First of all, the author should not be a newcomer, right? If so, he is truly gifted. The writing is so good, with a sense of melancholy and gorgeousness from the past. The smoothness of the narrative, the precision of the description, the visual feel of the scenes, including the strong contrast formed by the description of some scenes are all very cinematic. Especially in chapters 77 and 78, the conflict between the friendship between lovers and the responsibility between monarch and ministers reaches its maximum. The scene of the dying lover and the ministers kneeling in the snow is really well written. I would call it a god-level scene setting. As a person who really likes words, I am amazed by the author's ability to use words. Personally speaking, many popular authors on the market are probably not as good as this author. I like it very much, which is why I stayed up all night to read the whole story. The words are as natural and moving as flowing water. However, after reading the full text, I couldn't help but feel regretful. Such good writing and such good feelings, but there is a plot that cannot match it. I don't know why, but I always feel that the author just wants to see the involvement between attack and suffering, and the pain of suffering, so I made a meal of dumplings for this vinegar and wrote this article. It's strange why the writing and emotions are so delicate, but the plot becomes so rough. Many settings actually don't work. For example, sworn brothers are more like four people who are sworn separately. They are not familiar with each other; for example, the death of the eldest brother and the second brother. It is right to use their deaths to intensify the conflict between the attacker and the sufferer, but is it possible to give them a more reasonable cause of death? For example, in the early stage of the attack, they ignored brotherhood and used the death of the eldest and second brothers to scare the monkeys. Why did they take the initiative to give up the world in the end? This behavior not only made the death of the eldest and second brother ridiculous, but also completely destroyed Gong's character. Regarding Shou's character design, I can probably guess the author's xp. The author is particularly persistent in making Shou vomit blood and get injured. I can actually understand it, because I also like battle damage myself, and the author's writing style can also support the description of such scenes - but is it a bit too frequent? I will find it beautiful once or twice, but overuse will greatly reduce the plot and the beauty of the battle. Moreover, Shou's character design overemphasized his frailty and sickliness, and his personality charm, that is, his tough and gentle side, was greatly buried. I think what touches me most is his flexibility. I like sickly beauties, but I prefer sickly beauties whose mental strength is beyond ordinary people. Because they are weak, in order to do this, they must be firmer, stronger, and more vivid than others - and the author's Shou is more than gentle but not tough enough and not bright enough. As mentioned earlier, chapters 77 and 78 are beautifully written and tense, and the atmosphere is very good. In fact, I personally think it would be better to let Shou die in this chapter. The subsequent plot is really unnecessary. Not to mention how funny Shou's body is jumping on the edge of death again and again. The final ending is also too hasty. There is a feeling that the author has written everything he wants to see and doesn't know how to edit it. Wouldn't it be more beautiful and sad to let Shou die in this chapter, let the freedom that yearns for freedom, choose the loneliness of the country, and let them never find a better way out despite the struggle? What he did in the later period, including giving up the throne inexplicably, made me feel that he was a comprehensive failure as a brother, a leader, and even an emperor - what do the people of the country and the country mean to him? Child's play? Since he could give up the country so easily, why did he need to say that he was a wise king in the first place? Why would he force his eldest and second brothers to death? Has he ever considered what will happen to the government and the people after he becomes the governor? Well, the questioning ends here. After reading the whole novel, I felt a mixture of surprise and regret. The overall feeling this novel gives me is that it is very personal, and it is more like the author's XP, a plot tailor-made for the author, rather than a popular novel for readers. We were just passing by and happened to be lucky enough to catch a glimpse of the author's wonderful writing. The author wrote this article more like to fulfill his dream. If this is really the case, the author can write such a long article for this purpose, which is very great in a sense. And it is fate and luck that I happened to meet this article. After all, I really like the author's writing style. Finally, although the author only wrote this article, I think if the author can consider the plot seriously and write a better article, it should be as easy as searching for something. Your level deserves better. Anyway, I really like your words, wish you well.

I can't stand it anymore. The writing is very good and I can tell it has an ancient tone. However, after reading the story for twenty-five chapters, I still don't feel immersed in it. It happened very suddenly. It has been more than 20 chapters, but I still don't see how deep and deep the friendship is between the past and the present. The changes in the friendship between the five brothers in the past are also very nonsensical. The main reason is that I don't feel that the third brother who became the emperor is stupid and incompetent... Then the position of the eldest brother, the fourth and the fifth is to support you as the emperor. Once you become the emperor, we will feel that you have changed, and you want to leave. You can't stay in the palace. It's so strange. The writing is good, the story develops strangely, and I can't convey much emotion at once.

I cannot understand the source of this civil unrest. . The third brother written in the book is a wise king but not a foolish king. He patrols the country and governs the country. It is stipulated that private soldiers cannot be raised. The relationship between the eldest brother and the third brother is not good. It is difficult for the third brother to raise a private soldier at the risk of resisting national laws. Put aside the inexplicable civil strife and start fighting...

The writing style is very good, and it can be seen that the author is knowledgeable, but there are too many redundant descriptions, and the narrative seems very trivial. But I still admire the author for being able to calm down and sit on the bench, and I hope it will get better and better.

The writing is very good, but the plot is very uncomfortable.

Therefore, the country is not allowed to raise private soldiers. Why does the elder brother raise private soldiers?

After reading more than a dozen pictures, I just remember that I always had stomachaches due to pregnancy. . Almost every chapter is written...

It's such an old-fashioned piece of writing, I'm sorry, the writing style doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer.

Does anyone know the author's name?

I finished reading it a long time ago, and tonight I suddenly remembered that I wanted to write a comment to the author. First of all, the author should not be a newcomer, right? If so, he is truly gifted. The writing is so good, with a sense of melancholy and gorgeousness from the past. The smoothness of the narrative, the precision of the description, the visual feel of the scenes, including the strong contrast formed by the description of some scenes are all very cinematic. Especially in chapters 77 and 78, the conflict between the friendship between lovers and the responsibility between monarch and ministers reaches its maximum. The scene of the dying lover and the ministers kneeling in the snow is really well written. I would call it a god-level scene setting. As a person who really likes words, I am amazed by the author's ability to use words. Personally speaking, many popular authors on the market are probably not as good as this author. I like it very much, which is why I stayed up all night to read the whole story. The words are as natural and moving as flowing water. However, after reading the full text, I couldn't help but feel regretful. Such good writing and such good feelings, but there is a plot that cannot match it. I don't know why, but I always feel that the author just wants to see the involvement between attack and suffering, and the pain of suffering, so I made a meal of dumplings for this vinegar and wrote this article. It's strange why the writing and emotions are so delicate, but the plot becomes so rough. Many settings actually don't work. For example, sworn brothers are more like four people who are sworn separately. They are not familiar with each other; for example, the death of the eldest brother and the second brother. It is right to use their deaths to intensify the conflict between the attacker and the sufferer, but is it possible to give them a more reasonable cause of death? For example, in the early stage of the attack, they ignored brotherhood and used the death of the eldest and second brothers to scare the monkeys. Why did they take the initiative to give up the world in the end? This behavior not only made the death of the eldest and second brother ridiculous, but also completely destroyed Gong's character. Regarding Shou's character design, I can probably guess the author's xp. The author is particularly persistent in making Shou vomit blood and get injured. I can actually understand it, because I also like battle damage myself, and the author's writing style can also support the description of such scenes - but is it a bit too frequent? I will find it beautiful once or twice, but overuse will greatly reduce the plot and the beauty of the battle. Moreover, Shou's character design overemphasized his frailty and sickliness, and his personality charm, that is, his tough and gentle side, was greatly buried. I think what touches me most is his flexibility. I like sickly beauties, but I prefer sickly beauties whose mental strength is beyond ordinary people. Because they are weak, in order to do this, they must be firmer, stronger, and more vivid than others - and the author's Shou is more than gentle but not tough enough and not bright enough. As mentioned earlier, chapters 77 and 78 are beautifully written and tense, and the atmosphere is very good. In fact, I personally think it would be better to let Shou die in this chapter. The subsequent plot is really unnecessary. Not to mention how funny Shou's body is jumping on the edge of death again and again. The final ending is also too hasty. There is a feeling that the author has written everything he wants to see and doesn't know how to edit it. Wouldn't it be more beautiful and sad to let Shou die in this chapter, let the freedom that yearns for freedom, choose the loneliness of the country, and let them never find a better way out despite the struggle? What he did in the later period, including giving up the throne inexplicably, made me feel that he was a comprehensive failure as a brother, a leader, and even an emperor - what do the people of the country and the country mean to him? Child's play? Since he could give up the country so easily, why did he need to say that he was a wise king in the first place? Why would he force his eldest and second brothers to death? Has he ever considered what will happen to the government and the people after he becomes the governor? Well, the questioning ends here. After reading the whole novel, I felt a mixture of surprise and regret. The overall feeling this novel gives me is that it is very personal, and it is more like the author's XP, a plot tailor-made for the author, rather than a popular novel for readers. We were just passing by and happened to be lucky enough to catch a glimpse of the author's wonderful writing. The author wrote this article more like to fulfill his dream. If this is really the case, the author can write such a long article for this purpose, which is very great in a sense. And it is fate and luck that I happened to meet this article. After all, I really like the author's writing style. Finally, although the author only wrote this article, I think if the author can consider the plot seriously and write a better article, it should be as easy as searching for something. Your level deserves better. Anyway, I really like your words, wish you well.