The Gloomy Hated One Is Reborn

I think it's well written. This is completely Xiaoyu's rebirth and revenge plan. No one loves him, no one helps him, he relies entirely on himself, so everything must be calculated repeatedly, and he even uses his own body to make excuses with people he hates. So we can see that Xiaoyu is wronged, unable to resist and must endure with all his strength. Readers like that when the protagonist is suffering, he always hopes for a male savior. However, Xiaoyu does not have such luck. Someone will not suddenly come into his life to save him and change his destiny, so this kind of plot is not pleasing to the eye. But, I like it very much! I like that every desperate struggle of Xiaoyu is based on his own efforts. The main attack appears very late and has very few scenes. However, I think his appearance gives Xiaoyu an escape route and holds him when he completes his revenge and gives up the world. He is not a savior, he is a traveler. It's a pity that the author didn't want to write it anymore in the end. The story was quite complete. After reading Xiaoyu's suffering, there was no sweet love to fill the readers' empty hearts. . . . Woohoo, author, you owe us a lot of sweet extras!

What I said may be unpleasant to the author. This is not a matter of eye contact or not. The characters are actually very good, but many of the plots and characters are not handled well enough and are too mechanical. Pei Xingzhi is a mechanical deity. Shao's and Zheng's black histories have no foreshadowing and have nothing to do with the previous character creation. They just chose a "most crushing and impossible to reverse" method to send them out. The traitorous bastard actually had a lot to explore, but in the end he just saved Jian Yu's life as a tool and nothing more happened. Also, the collaboration with Lao Qi could definitely make the writing more exciting and thicker and darker. All in all, Jian Yu could have been darker and more calculating, instead of letting Pei Xingzhi come to the rescue with just one move. Compared with Brother Jian, Brother Jian was punished with three drinks of wine as a penalty, while Mother Jian and Sister Jian did not explain anything at all. (My father asked his son to accompany his boss, and he also sold fake medicines. How can readers accept this if he has not been using a sewing machine for a few years???)

In fact, I think the author wrote it very well. This article is not the traditional happy-go-lucky plot of waving your hands and taking revenge, but more realistic. Xiaoyu uses his own strategy to get back step by step, instead of relying on Xiao Pei's power. But in the end, Xiao Pei gave Xiao Yu a final harbor, allowing him to have a place of peace of mind in this world that he originally wanted to give up.

It's quite good-looking. Many people like the cool way of having someone powerful around you help the protagonist slap the protagonist in the face. Some people also like this kind of story where you get revenge step by step on your own. In his previous life, Jian Yu suffered heavy blows and gave up hope of survival in extreme despair. How could he immediately transform into a confident and capable avenger after his rebirth? He has no background and no golden fingers. He can only rely on himself to plan and plan. The most real thing is to use everything he has to take revenge. The role of the protagonist can only be said to be just right. It is a retreat and a harbor, a reliance and a life-saving straw. Without Pei, Jane may not necessarily have the desire to survive after the revenge is over. No, it should be said that after the revenge is successful, Jane may also disappear from this world. Pei is a chain, linking Jane and the world. It was Pei who stretched out his hand to hold the infinitely falling Jane. This sense of redemption is really great!

When I saw the previous picture where Jian's father said that everyone in the family has his or her own place, I fantasized about whether the protagonist would get into trouble later on, drive his eldest brother away, and be exiled overseas. When his father pointed at him and scolded him for being a traitor, he said: "Father, didn't you say that?" Everyone in the family has his or her own place, and your place is—(looking up and down) Oh, father, this is all for your own good. Then he was placed under house arrest in a small villa, where he quarreled with his younger brother, younger sister and mother.

He feels guilty, but he watches others bully him with cold eyes How ironic

I don't dare to think how good this would have been if the response to the article had been better and I hadn't pounced on it.

In fact, I think it's pretty good. There's not a very satisfying slap-in-the-face plot, but Xiao Yu relies on his own abilities to seek revenge. He uses his own strength to fight, but he finally becomes a big tree instead of a dodder. I like it very much. Come on, come on.

It's actually pretty good-looking, and I've been following it to the end. Why is it not as popular as the previous book? I think it may be because the revenge scumbag attack is too long and the main attack appears too few.

The author has always made great progress. This article ends unexpectedly, but the characters are also very real: a man with bruises all over his body is reborn, and the mental and soul trauma, even if he takes revenge, it is difficult to predict when he will get better. It's a pity that Xiao Pei's role is slightly less. Although I can imagine the happy daily life between him and Xiao Yu, eating the author's candy is still the sweetest thing.