[Practice writing, not recommended]
[Hybrids who died peacefully, don't come here acting crazy]
Pei Yu transmigrated into a novel about a variety show for kids as the hated stepfather everyone despised.
The original owner was the real young master of a wealthy family. After being framed by the fake young master and kicked out, he happened to secretly marry an award-winning actor. At long last, he managed to land a spot on a variety show for kids to clear his name, only to appear as a wicked stepfather and end up hounded by the entire internet until he jumped off a building.
Pei Yu: "???"
After transmigrating, his stepson threw a tantrum and demanded a new stepfather. Pei Yu sprawled out like a corpse, playing dead.
"Ah, yes, yes, yes, yes."
The production team maliciously edited the footage, so Pei Yu gave up entirely and spent his time petting cats and playing games.
For some reason, the audience started appreciating his charms.
His antis viciously harassed him online and told him to get out of showbiz. Pei Yu clutched his chest and put on a sickly act to disgust them. "Lawyer, go get my lawyer."
A top-tier legal team dug into the identity behind the leading anti-fan account and discovered it belonged to the always-gentle fake young master.
The wealthy family: "???"
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One day, the award-winning actor showed up at the set. Everyone was so nervous they hardly dared breathe. But the aloof, chaste man who seemed like a deity walked straight to the sofa and picked up Pei Yu, who was petting a cat. "Honey, I've missed you so much QAQ"
The confused production team and contestants: "...???"
Some random passerby: "Didn't they say Pei Yu's husband was a greasy middle-aged man???"
His stepson was so mortified he wanted to die. "You little vixen, what did you do to my dad?!"
The actor's solo fans and cult-like fans were heartsick. "Wake up, A Yao! That's Pei Yu. Put him down, put him down."
A beautiful, laid-back receiver x a wealthy award-winning actor top
-[The first draft of this blurb was written on 2023.2.5 and screenshotted for the record]
Reader's guide: A devoted 1v1 couple, a wish-fulfillment romp. The story will explain the situation with the stepson.
Theme: Prosperity, democracy, civility, and harmony
Hmm... How should I put it... It just feels like a forced reunion, and the emotional lines are also inexplicable, and many of them are not explained clearly. For example, is there any necessary connection between Pei Yu now and the original Pei Yu? Are they the same person? Who does Jiang Xingyao like, Pei Yu?
Either I don't remember it or it's too little. . . Is there any emotional drama in this article? . . (Anyway, congratulations on the completion.
It ended so hastily, and I didn't see any emotional lines.
Author, you know how to write well
I really... Convinced him
There are nearly sixty chapters so far, and the writing is very good, but the plot development is too delayed and slow. Up to now, the protagonist has not been cleared, and the villain is not finished yet, and he is still a villain who can only be regarded as cannon fodder. If this development continues, it is estimated that there will be another 20 or 30 chapters before Pei Cai's downfall, and there will be a vicious male partner who causes misunderstandings between the couple. At this rate, there should be at least 25 chapters left, and there will probably be a big reveal about the return of the protagonist. Secret, it can't be justified without writing dozens of chapters. It's too slow and procrastinating. It's not enjoyable and has no desire to read. If the author wants to write a long novel, he still needs to make the plot more compact, otherwise it will have no feeling and it will be too bland.
I was confused by the complicated relationship between the Jiang family
Leaving claws, so Yu Yu is the original owner?
"You should act according to other people's ideas" is a big bug for the author~
The logic of this sentence is a bit wrong [Top your chin]
The chapters so far are really frustrating to watch. [Personal opinion only]
Hmm... How should I put it... It just feels like a forced reunion, and the emotional lines are also inexplicable, and many of them are not explained clearly. For example, is there any necessary connection between Pei Yu now and the original Pei Yu? Are they the same person? Who does Jiang Xingyao like, Pei Yu?
Either I don't remember it or it's too little. . . Is there any emotional drama in this article? . . (Anyway, congratulations on the completion.
It ended so hastily, and I didn't see any emotional lines.
Author, you know how to write well
I really... Convinced him
There are nearly sixty chapters so far, and the writing is very good, but the plot development is too delayed and slow. Up to now, the protagonist has not been cleared, and the villain is not finished yet, and he is still a villain who can only be regarded as cannon fodder. If this development continues, it is estimated that there will be another 20 or 30 chapters before Pei Cai's downfall, and there will be a vicious male partner who causes misunderstandings between the couple. At this rate, there should be at least 25 chapters left, and there will probably be a big reveal about the return of the protagonist. Secret, it can't be justified without writing dozens of chapters. It's too slow and procrastinating. It's not enjoyable and has no desire to read. If the author wants to write a long novel, he still needs to make the plot more compact, otherwise it will have no feeling and it will be too bland.
I was confused by the complicated relationship between the Jiang family
Leaving claws, so Yu Yu is the original owner?
"You should act according to other people's ideas" is a big bug for the author~ The logic of this sentence is a bit wrong [Top your chin]
The chapters so far are really frustrating to watch. [Personal opinion only]