Unwilling

Last year, I accidentally came across the author's self-promotion video and found that the collection of unsigned articles was unexpectedly high. I came over to take a look out of curiosity. I tried very hard to read the campus part before I couldn't read it, so I gave up on the article. However, the comments were all praising it, and I became more and more curious whether it was my problem or other readers' problems. I wanted to say that I have to read the entire article to be qualified to evaluate whether a article is good or bad. I have always wanted to leave you a long review. I have been following you for a year. I finally finished reading it in five days from March 29 to April 2, 2026. Then I will leave a long review objectively and sincerely from all aspects! If it were a perfect score, it would probably be 7.5. Let me talk about the shortcomings and doubts I think. 1. Narrative aspect: The biggest problem is that there are too many words. This article can actually tell the story in about 500,000 words. It's not that you can't write more than 500,000 words about a delicate growth line, but the plot that Reluctant mainly tells spans the ten years between the ages of 18 and 29. Many of the long dialogues are indeed lengthy, and it's often difficult to tell who is speaking. I was a little uncomfortable with the part where they often called each other names, and I even wondered if it was because of the number of characters... Maybe it was to reflect the sweet pet atmosphere, but writing two names more than three times would really make me tired and irritated. Xu Wanyi's name is very nice, but calling her Xiaoyi all the time really gives me goosebumps. I don't know why. 2. Writing style issues: Too delicate. This is both an advantage and a disadvantage. In addition to the details that are needed to advance the plot, there are actually many details that do not need to be shown. Maybe I am used to setting up a foreshadowing and want to reflect the atmosphere of the movie, but too many details are really talkative. Character problem: The male protagonist's perfect love story is very unrealistic (but it's understandable because it's written like this because it's what the contemporary web audience likes), but the female protagonist really goes too far! At one time, I felt that she had more of an avoidant attachment personality and had a severe mental illness to abuse the male protagonist like this. I thought she was very selfish, and I could understand that her personality was caused by her family of origin. However, the boy taught her how to love more than once, and I saw that whenever she encountered an accident, the first person she gave up was the male protagonist. I was so angry when I saw it! I have never seen a novel whose heroine made me so angry! Obviously the male protagonist did nothing wrong! No matter how good the heroine is, she still abuses a boy who has done nothing wrong over and over again. It felt like their relationship was very unequal and unfair. The male protagonist always loved her more than she loved him (luckily she came back later and the female protagonist finally changed, but it was really easy to abandon the story in the middle if you didn't watch the end) 4. I also don't like to reiterate the plot from the beginning that the heroine was originally a good girl, but then suddenly smoked frequently, as if smoking is a stereotype of becoming bad and socialized. She also needs to repeatedly emphasize the contrast through the male protagonist not smoking, and also let the male protagonist persuade her to quit smoking (not that men should smoke and women should not smoke, but it is strange to repeatedly emphasize) Advantages: 1. Overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this fast-paced era where sweet and sweet articles are popular, it is really good to see slow and delicate textures like ancient youth magazine articles. The author's writing style cannot be said to be very good, but the writing style is definitely there, but it comes in fits and starts. Especially when writing the plot of the main drama, I can see that the author should be a director student. He wrote it according to the script language. It has a very cinematic atmosphere and the audio-visual language is well arranged. Therefore, when watching, I feel that there is a three-dimensional picture in my mind, instead of only a flat two-dimensional space. Occasionally, I see comments from readers asking the author not to sell the copyright or make it into a film or TV show. It feels a bit weird like moral kidnapping. People have not made any money by writing so many words for Love Power without signing a contract. They have been relying on their own efforts to tweet. Why don't they allow others to become more popular? On the contrary, I have a different view. I once thought that this novel is very suitable for film and television. It will definitely be very interesting and meaningful when filmed! It feels like the author is writing a film and television script 2. In fact, the underlying logic of the unwilling story is very simple. It is a very vulgar and poorly written campus love that ends without a problem and reunites in the city. Too many people have written about it, but the great thing is that a poorly written meme can be written to this extent. It is very powerful! Compared with the emotional line, what is more profound is the core values ​​behind it. The reason why it is suitable for film and television is because the male and female protagonists in the middle are working on the case that the director and the police encounter. It is especially like a unit drama, so that their growth line is no longer thin. 3. The whole text of "Unwilling" is very realistic, so when I read it, I felt that the story happened in daily life and I felt like I was immersed in it. The only thing that was unrealistic was the male protagonist's feelings. But because you write well, people will believe that such love really exists in this world. The images of other supporting characters are very stand-alone. Although there are too many supporting characters, it is hard to remember their names. This is the drawback of the group portrait story. Overall! This novel is really much better than many sweet and sweet novels written by novice writers! Worth publishing too! But what I admire even more is that the author has the courage to tweet bravely in this online article market where if you break the vest, you will be reported by hyb for online violence! You have done what many authors dare not do. You are so brave! Good articles are indeed worth promoting so that more people can see them! I have always remembered this article not only because of the author's tweets, but also because I wonder why articles of this quality have never been signed up. The author also wrote a million words in Jinjiang. How high are Jinjiang's standards? Maybe it's because it's a high-level cadre story and the male protagonist is a police officer, so the subject line is too tight. Also, it's a campus story that's difficult to get signed because they had a puppy love earlier. Also, the plot of campus reunions is old and not novel enough. If these lines are crossed, it won't be approved. I believe that other customized articles may have been signed. I have seen many new signed articles that are really not as good as this unsigned article. I am really confused by the Jinjiang editor's preference... Now it seems that I only value the plot and not the story itself. But that doesn't matter now, you have a better way to let more people know about this article, and not being signed is not necessarily a bad thing. I have expressed so many personal opinions, but I believe that you have actually written an article that satisfies you! I also wish you can write more and better articles that you like in the future! You are very good at saving the entire text and insisting on yourself even before signing a contract.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnesses, I can't do it anymore. I cried to death after watching the extra TvT. In fact, I liked the content of this novel when I saw it on Yuyu's TikTok for the first time. But before I read this article, I saw a lot of videos of my favorite novels being yshed, so I didn't dare to read those popular novels and open this novel easily. But then Yuyu? Replied to my comment and told me that it wouldn't be~ I just read it with confidence???🌈 I was sitting on the bus when I read the first chapter. I was bored at that time. When I saw the sun shining into the car through the car window and what happened to Jiang Yue and Xiao Yi on the bus, it felt so real and beautiful. I felt that this article was really real and had the feeling of a long flowing stream. In fact, I rarely read novels with more than a hundred chapters because I am a rather impatient person. It even took me a long time to finish reading this novel. It was intermittent and I read it slowly. I read it word for word [Glasses] Later, I recommended it to my good friend and asked her to read this novel. I didn't expect that it took her two days to read Chapter 105. At that time, I had just read Chapter 93. Hahaha, I read it really slowly. My good friend stopped reading after reading Chapter 105 because she thought Xiao Yi was a bit tearful and not her type, but she said she liked the story of Chi Jia and He Yu very much!! So Yuyu's writing is still very good~ [Let me be healthy] And I think Xiaoyi is not a crybaby. She is also very tired. She has carried so much on her own and she also needs to vent. In addition, I am also used to crying first when I encounter anything, so I can understand why Xiaoyi loves to cry. I also like Xiaoyi very much because she later became an independent and tough woman!! Really awesome!! I also want to learn from Xiaoyi!! In the end, it was not easy for Jiang Yue, the little bitter gourd [holding her chin] Fortunately, the two little bitter gourds were very happy together in the end~ In the end, I wish Yuyu and the readers who read "Unwilling" can reap the happy love between Jiang Yue and Xiao Yi!! Of course, everyone can become a tough and outstanding person like Xiaoyi!!!

Jiang Yue and Wan Yi want to be happy forever. I finished reading it on December 13, 2025. From the time Jiang Yue and Wan Yi first met to getting married and having children, it made me feel like I was in their world, feeling their emotions, feeling their pain and sorrow when they were separated. My habit is that every time I open a novel by a different person, it is equivalent to entering their world, as if I am personally there, temporarily forgetting the troubles of reality. I briefly enjoy the interesting things from another time and space. I will also feel all the feelings of their separation, quarrel, and sadness with them. It's Wanyi's birthday soon. Happy birthday to Wanyi in advance!! See you in the future👋

After reading it, I feel very heavy. It seems to be a happy ending for everyone, but the pain of separation from my lover, the pain of the death of my best friend, the pain of the master's sacrifice, and the time spent being consumed by longing, I can't imagine how painful they are.

It took me three days to finish reading this novel. The early stage is a sweet campus story. The male and female protagonists are very shy. After the breakup, Xiaoyi was really bitter. Fortunately, they reunited. I learned about Chen Yiming's death unprepared. The tears fell unknowingly. He was only twenty-three. I couldn't imagine how much An Ran would blame himself. She blamed herself for not spending her last birthday with him. She blamed herself. I lost my love in a fit of rage. I dare not think about how Jiang Yue He Yu survived the time when his good brother passed away. As a bystander, it would be heartbreaking to see it, but An Ran ended up with the one he loved in a different way. I hope they can be happy in that world. Officer Wang also cried well [Heartbroken] Your daughter Xingxing and wife are waiting for you to come home 😭 😭 , what impressed me most was Jiang Yue's response to Xiaoyi's temper during the interview, "She worked so hard to give birth, so she should get angry with me." The documentary filmed by the heroine in the article is also very touching. Finally, the author's writing is really good. The only book that ends with He leaving the most tears 💜

Ahhhhhhhhh I can't do it anymore I cried to death after watching the extra TvT. In fact, before reading this article, I watched a lot of videos of my favorite novels being yshed, so I didn't dare to read those popular novels and open this novel easily. But then Yuyu? Replied to my comment and told me that it wouldn't be~ I just watched it with confidence??? 🌈 When I read the first chapter, I was sitting on the bus, and I was bored at that time. At that time, when I saw the sun shining into the car through the car window and what happened to Jiang Yue and Xiaoyi on the bus, I felt so real and beautiful. I felt that this article was really real and had the feeling of flowing water. In fact, I rarely read novels with more than a hundred chapters because I am a rather impatient person. Even reading this novel took me a long time to finish it. It was intermittent and I read it slowly. I read it word for word [Glasses] Later, I recommended it to my good friend and asked her to read this novel. I didn't expect that it took her two days to read Chapter 105. At that time, I had just read Chapter 93. Hahaha, I read it really slowly. My good friend stopped reading after reading Chapter 105 because she thought Xiao Yi was a bit tearful and not her type, but she said she liked the story of Chi Jia and He Yu very much!! So Yuyu's writing is still very good~ [Let me be healthy] And I think Xiaoyi is not a crybaby. She is also very tired. She has carried so much on her own and she also needs to vent. In addition, I am also used to crying first when I encounter anything, so I can understand why Xiaoyi loves to cry. I also like Xiaoyi very much because she later became an independent and tough woman!! Really awesome!! I also want to learn from Xiaoyi!! In the end, it was not easy for Jiang Yue, the little bitter gourd [holding her chin] Fortunately, the two little bitter gourds were very happy together in the end~ In the end, I wish Yuyu and the readers who read "Unwilling" can reap the happy love between Jiang Yue and Xiao Yi!! Of course, everyone can become a tough and outstanding person like Xiaoyi!!!

I want to see the follow-up of Ning Yuan and Ning Yun🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰🐰

The sun will set and love will continue

Yuyu baby, come on, I love you, I love you😘

I really want to read the story of Ning Yun and Ning Yuan!!!