The Sickly, Hated Prince Is Reborn

The main text has been completed, the extra chapter has dropped, and the column preview is available in the original volume "Cannon fodder male partner, happy raising cubs [Quickly travel]"

I stayed up all night to finish watching it. There was almost no crematorium, and Gong was only tortured by a stab in the back. The back part was simply emmmmm. If the crematorium didn't look like it was burning in full force in the front, I don't think there would be so many people scolding it. To put it bluntly, feelings have never occupied a high position in the relationship between the two people. The setting of the poison is simply shit. The conditions for poisoning are that the person who planted the poison must be sentimental, so the small flames in the crematorium will be extinguished. The author doesn't know how to write about the crematorium, and I sincerely recommend that you don't write about it in the future. He was tortured so hard at the beginning, and he couldn't bear to be tortured at the end. Apart from the crematorium, this article is still good. If you remove the crematorium-related aspect, it will be a sweet story with a good plot. The subsequent plot that looks like a crematorium but is actually a sneak peek at the dog-licking is completely unnecessary. It is purely disgusting to the point of being a single mother and a partial one.

This article is really a mess of the main text, and all the sugar is piled in the extras.

It's so astringent. My pants are flying. What do you like most about watching and controlling things?

I originally thought that this sweetheart story would be about their mutual feelings for each other, but the ending ended abruptly. The sentence "Go back", and then turning to the next chapter is actually Jue Zai'er and the Governor. It's really wonderful. It reminds Jue Zai and reminds me.

After reading it, I found it quite interesting, but I still feel that the side chapters of the Bamboo Horse and Gangnam chapters were not completely finished.

Lu: giegie~

Hahahaha, the tea smells like tea, Jue Zai said: "It's so dangerous, but fortunately I'm smart enough" (he pinched the innocent Lu Green Tea next to him)

I really liked Jue Zai. I ordered it all and stayed up late to watch it. I got up early in the morning to watch it again and finally tied it. Crematorium suggested deleting and rewriting it. From the beginning of the second life to the poisonous poison, the whole thing was inexplicable. The death of Gong was barely explained based on the ghost realm and the setting of both people being injured. Then the real versions of the identities of the two people were later revealed. I have always been curious about how it was conveyed. I can't tell it to Cao Yi, but if it is just a story to echo the entanglement between the two, it is unnecessary. The rest of the story is more perfunctory. The two people talked about everything in the third life. The writing in the third life was actually okay, but the second life was really lame. When I became emperor, I quickly switched to the third life. The plot felt gradually sloppy. I was really convinced that it was unfinished. And the full text of the emotional line... Emmmmm, I don't like it well. I can feel that Jue Zai doesn't understand his own mind. Using emotions is one of my xp, but it gives people the feeling that Jue Zai's inner changes are very peaceful. In the second life, he pretended and then gained Gong's preference. There was very little about his psychological activities when he was pretending, and there was not much written about Gong's emotional changes. He just grew up and got along very well. The writing was very good in the early stage (but the sadism... I am not a party-controller but I am a bit biased), and then the plot gradually fell into a landslide. Can you please delete and rewrite the later part? Help me. If you really want to summarize it in a few words, it feels like it's just a bit crude. If you look closely at the plot, it looks like shit.

If you want to see the crematorium, don't come. It's too frustrating. It's so unfinished.