
Fleeting Sorrow (Itachi and Naruto)
浮殇(鼬鸣)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 50k Words
- Genre
- –
- Era
- –
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
23Chapters
452Favorites
8.0Score
6.9kClicks per chapter
139Comments
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Setting Notes 01
Reader comments 47
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It's really, really good-looking!
Really among all the Naruto CPs, my favorite is Itachi, and I also like Sauna, but... Well, that's it, in short, thousands of words can be reduced to one sentence: "Naruto is always suffering, you bastard!!!"
Really, really touched Even if the memory fades, the most precious thing will never be forgotten...
Very good!! Very interesting. I like your article very much.
I really like the feeling of light love! Scatter flowers
Spread flowers~leave claws~I like it~come on~
So you shouldn't have defected in the first place = =
Memories from past lives? I can say that Naruto is transported from the future. . . . That's why there is the so-called memory of past lives. . .
Not bad,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
First of all, congratulations on the completion of "Floating"! Spread flowers~~~Beibei, give me a hug! Every time I go to Jinjiang, the first thing I click on is the favorites list to watch Beibei's update. It's all over in one go. I always feel empty in my heart and look up to the sky! I have always liked my brother and Naruto, and Itachi is also the cutest among the Naruto CPs. I like Naruto very much in "Sorrow". He is powerful, not only because of his growth in ninjutsu, but also because of his indifferent way of dealing with things and his rational analysis of the situation... Such calmness attracted my attention. I have always believed that indifference and rationality are Naruto's hidden inner qualities The psychological descriptions of my brother and Naruto in the article include a touch of melancholy, which I personally think is the most suitable emotion for them. The same goes for their emotions, which seem as plain as water but are very heavy. Because of their circumstances, they love each other but cannot express their love, which makes people feel pity. The psychological description of Sasuke is also very good, especially in Chapter 5, when Sasuke is in Konoha Hospital, because of the psychological changes after Naruto defeated him, people will think, "Ah, the original Sasuke is back, he is no longer the Sasuke who was blinded by hatred and became irrational." There are also many places in the article that use the description of Sasuke to highlight the various relationships between Itachi and Naruto. This kind of description can be regarded as the finishing touch What's more worth mentioning is that the battle scenes in the article are very exciting, and Bing Tong's original ability is also very popular. Not only is she powerful, she also gives people a strong cold beauty. Regarding the fact that the fourth generation is a demon, I once asked you, but you didn't answer. After reading the end of the volume, I understood Beibei's intentions. It was indeed as Beibei said. Naruto is no longer weak, he is powerful. The deeper the obsession, the more powerful the inner demon becomes. For Naruto, his father is a goal but also an obstacle, so the dream will become the inner demon, and naturally it is the fourth generation. This setting is very novel. Naruto would rather choose to let Itachi forget his existence than to let Itachi continue to suffer. How can we not be moved by this kind of dedication, this kind of strength, and this kind of love? Although the ending is not perfect, is it not the most suitable ending for them? Leave the past behind and embrace the future. At the end of the article, watching Itachi become like a soulless man because of the lost memory, I, as a reader, can feel the sadness and sadness in my heart. Through the words of others and the interaction between the two protagonists, one can feel the intensity of love in their hearts. Throughout the article, the seemingly gorgeous battle scenes are interspersed with many scenes that make people laugh. But there is always a lingering hint of sadness interspersed in it. This faint feeling makes people unforgettable for a long time, and few people can express this kind of description so naturally and smoothly. From Beibei's article, although there is no clear description of the background world of ninjas, from the description of the characters' hearts, whether it is the protagonists Itachi and Naruto, or Sasuke, we can understand the helplessness and sadness of the ninja world. This is the advantage that I like. In addition, there is a bright side but also a dark side. I have a few small comments. I also hope Beibei won't be offended. To be honest, the end of this article is a little too hasty. The ancient mythical beast Suzaku in the back mountain of Konoha mentioned in the article has not been described in detail before entering the end. Some parts of the plot move very quickly, and in some places the characters' hearts and scenes are not described in detail, making it not particularly clear. This is my first time writing a long review, so please forgive me if it's not good! And it was only after Xiaoye modified it that I dared to take it out to meet and cover my face! It should be regarded as Xiaoye and I's shared feelings and opinions about "Floating Sorrow"! It is also the result of our common love for Fushang (what a disgusting thing to say!) I hope Beibei will continue to work hard! We will continue to follow your Wenwen, and we are also looking forward to your new articles. Finally, give me a hug