Football's Star Referee

The first time I read it, I thought it was too long, so I skipped through it, but after going around and around, I found that this is the best book. I finished it, and I really hope I can expand it and continue writing it. It's really wonderful.

Finished chasing, waiting for the wedding episode

The last ending is so rushed... The previous chapters were clearly well written, so why did the last two chapters end in a hurry? It seems that I threw up the outline after I didn't want to write.

Ah! I want to see the wedding! I want to see the wedding! Give me a side story, big brother

There is also a wedding extra, please write it, I want to read it

I finished reading it, and it was very well written, but the ending was too rushed, and I felt that a lot of it could have been extended. I always felt that it ended before I was satisfied with it. After reading it, I felt a little disappointed, as if I suddenly said goodbye to Ava. This is the first full-length novel I have fully ordered in Jinjiang, and it is also a football fanfic. I have only fully ordered short stories before. I think I will read it again and again when I have time. Thank you very much to the author, and I look forward to new articles in the future!

It was really rushed in the end, I feel like I could write a lot more

Is this the end? The ending is a little rushed, but very satisfying! Whether it's a mini or a Hercules Cup! Thanks to the author for giving us a happy ending to the story

A little thought. (These are all very subjective words) My wife's writing is very ordinary, but it makes people want to read it. I have never watched a football match, and the only two figures who know something about football are David Beckham (who wrote an English essay about star-chasing little Beitou for the postgraduate entrance examination) and Messi (whose victory in the Argentina game made my classmate a huge fortune and caused ridicule among Chinese netizens some time ago). When relevant names (soccer stars) appear in the article, I search them one by one on Baidu. Before Beckham appeared, even in the first 2 and 30 chapters, I thought this was a fictional background [laughing and crying]. When I found out that Cristiano Ronaldo was Cristiano Ronaldo, I was no less shocked than when I saw the cp video of Wang and 007 (not sure if their names can be typed) on a certain website. The Brazilian Kaka is indeed very handsome, but Messi is difficult to evaluate (I thought his strength was comparable to his reputation, but the article does not think so). Ronaldo's personality is similar to what I felt when I saw his pictures on the Internet. In the early stage, there was a certain amount of space describing the game, and some commentators thought it was too short, but I could imagine the general scene of the game in my mind, which was quite fun. Some commentators believe that Yali has no boundaries, and her role gradually decreases in the middle and later stages of the film, and she becomes a tool. I thought that there would be some intersection between her and Nuno (? Cousin) in the later stage, but it seems that there is no such thing. I like the early and middle stages the most in this article. What I'm reading now is the final article, which is not short in one million words. I thought it would be a micro-group portrait article. Many characters appeared in the early stage, including Peterson, Aly, Nuno, and two female assistant referees. After Ava and Cristiano Ronaldo confirmed their relationship, their descriptions were basically brushed off. The middle period focuses on the relationship between Ava and Cristiano Ronaldo. It was really sweet when they first got along (three-point sugar, if it is Mixue three-point sugar, this sweetness is just right for me), and it lasts for more than 200 to 300 chapters (Mixue full sugar, this sweetness is extremely sweet). The events are all briefly mentioned, and other characters are not discussed in detail. They are all various plays (role playing, mirrors, etc.) Played by Ava and Cristiano Ronaldo. I couldn't stand the 300-plus chapters and jumped straight to the end. Because of the word count and the title of the novel, I would have thought that this was more of a career-oriented article, in which Cristiano Ronaldo was full of energy every day and bothered Ava. Although my wife wrote that Ava herself was not disturbed, I was very angry because I was disturbed by others while I was dealing with things. I don't know if other young couples in reality are so crooked. In my heart, they are just two love-struck people. Although Cristiano Ronaldo does not regret it, I still really want to watch Ava whistle off Cristiano Ronaldo's game. The two of them should be in a relationship after Cristiano Ronaldo's career at Manchester United ends (I really prefer articles that focus on career). The relationship between the two of them later was like me playing The Sims 4. I only focused on my own little world and lost contact with NPCs. I would get tired easily after playing for a long time. In JJ's article, just about two people's emotions would be about 200,000 words, and then add career and other lines and then add more. But maybe this article is biased toward the wife cutting her own flesh, based on the wife's preference. (There is no guidance on writing, these are all my subjective feelings) The first article I read about my wife was the one about the Duchess. At that time, I read about 500,000 words (the latest series). The heroine probably married the Duke, and they liked walking in the manor (their sex was also wild). After a while, I found that the number of words had doubled. Because the narrative is bland and the word count is fast. I once thought that my wife was an AI from JJ, she was really hard-working.

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