After the Story Ended, Mary Sue Was Replaced

I specially read the last chapter, it's great, the heroine is not with the annoying Hua X!!! This kind of person is the most superficial!! Only looks at faces! What is the difference between this kind of person and the person who bullies the heroine because she is ugly? Moreover, he has played with the feelings of many women before, and he is not worthy of a good girl!!!

After reading this book for so long, I feel that your writing style is really good and your storytelling is very fluent, but you place too much emphasis on data. This is not to say that data is not important, but sometimes data needs to be slowly drained and accumulated. It exploded soon after the beginning of the book because of the right time, place and people. If you stop updating and finish it hastily, you really can't attract loyal fans, that is, the base of readers. Then I looked at the direction of the comment section, and I felt that you were also being carried away by the comment section (don't pretend that I didn't say it). I'm not saying this is bad, but it's like a chef cooking, there are always some people who like it and some people don't. If you change it at will, there are other comments saying that the transition feels a bit stiff. I've been reading you since your book "The Great Beauty". You really feel comfortable writing about heartthrobs. I hope you can stick to it and become popular. I haven't used Jinjiang for a long time, so I couldn't help but comment [changed] 🙏

It feels like there was too much preparation in the front, especially since Hua Zai has always been treated as the main CP in the front, and many people may have been fooled away... I jumped directly to the back of the Bridesmaids set, and I was relieved when I saw that the CP was not him.

Yes, what disgusts Hua Yan the most is that he is so confident in his ability to win. He is too conceited. It literally turns off the lights in a second.

L I take the liberty to give you some suggestions, hoping it will help improve the data of your next book (it may be wrong, it may be ignored) 1. If your publicity is not in place, you can use your old books with good data for publicity. Comments from the author of the pinned new article 2. Use the copywriting of old articles for publicity. Add a sentence to the old copy of the article, such as "Open a new article,? Xxxx.? It's also the same style of Su Wen" or something like that 3. Your new book has too few tags and is difficult to find. It would be easier to find it if you add a few more tags.

I still want to see big beauties! The kind of beauty who needs a clear head hhh

The writing is very good, but the poor data may be because many people cannot find this article at all. If I had not excluded a series of popular tags in the advanced search and searched for the article based on the update time, I might have missed this good article.

Because the turning point is too abrupt, Hua has too many scenes, and the mentality during the turning point is not carefully described. It is very abrupt and very streamlined.

Want to watch Beauty 2!!

Then watch Big Beauty 2? Open a new article and place an advertisement under the finished article! Many people may not know