A Youth with Nowhere to Go

Flip the table. Why, DT can bring the finishing touch to fans these days?

I have an indescribable fondness for this kind of writing [] Come on, I've collected it, take a look at it

I can't guarantee that I'll leave a comment after reading every chapter. The author seems to be a newbie in Jinjiang, and my qualifications haven't been around for a long time. But, how can I put it, it feels so weird, so awkward! In terms of word count and plot, the most MS-heavy ones are the dialogue, action, and appearance. It doesn't have to be exhaustive every time, but the occasional inadvertent detailed description will have a great impact on people's changes!

One chapter is too few words, huh! Also, how should I put it? The theme of the article on online games is still online games. It's not good to go too far off topic. Although I know that dream missions are boring, but for the occasional short break, as long as the first light up under the dream elf in the friends column is him, I should feel a little more like that = =The heroine is too obsessed with that.

Uh, there are too many dialogues, it seems very cumbersome, the characters are not prominent enough, and the heroine feels very rude and can't help but be elegant, eh

So, the number of words in one chapter is a bit too few = =[Yuanmu] You must know that the most powerful author has tens of thousands of words per chapter = = At least I guarantee it will be more than two thousand.

So so arrogant = = I keep a low profile when playing games.