This is the love story of a young woman named Quan Shanshan and her best friends.
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She has a bad temper, but a soft heart.
She's petty, but fiercely protective of her friends.
She gets jealous, but she's optimistic.
She's vain, but kind.
She's average-looking, but has a sweet smile.
She doesn't have many friends, but the friendships she has are deep.
She likes to act cute and clown around.
She's shy and afraid of cockroaches.
She has a serious case of morning grumpiness.
Every little flaw and virtue is part of what makes Quan Shanshan who she is.
Take any one away,
and she wouldn't be complete!
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Hello Guliang. The article has been reviewed in the building.
Sorry, you are the first one I comment on this time, so you were a bit picky at first.
But... I found... After I read other articles... Your article really has a lot of praise, I hope you don't hate rp Jun T-T
I like the narrative descriptions in these chapters - I like Miss W-'s writing style very much. She tells the plot from the perspective of a third person. It is very plain and has a little sadistic point that touches my heart. It's very good! !
As I look at it, I always feel that it is awkward. Please forgive my venomous tongue. My dear, what you wrote does not make sense. Example:
Yibai, a name that makes Quan Shanshan hate her so much and can make her heart beat faster in an instant. Just thinking about it, Quan Shanshan can feel that her heart is sweet and sour for a while, making her uncomfortable. Every time she thinks of An Yibai, Xuan Yan's name suddenly appears next, like a bright knife that plunges into Quan Shanshan's heart, causing dull pain but not a drop of blood. .
It's a pounding/rapid heartbeat. What is the situation of [heartbeat is pounding and accelerated]? There seem to be too many attributives and it feels very complicated.
Sweet and sour is a kind of taste, can it be [twisted]? And shouldn't the sour and sweet feeling be wonderful and green?
Thoughts are abstract. How can I think of XX and then suddenly XX appear next... How?
Take the first sentence as an example. If it were changed to: Yibai, a name that she both loves and hates... It would be much simpler and clearer.
It's a bit difficult to read. Is this your first time writing?
What I said may not be correct, it's just my personal opinion and I'm totally free to say that.
This comment is waiting for review by the administrator and has been automatically blocked by the system. It will be displayed after passing the review!
Hello Guliang. The article has been reviewed in the building. Sorry, you are the first one I comment on this time, so you were a bit picky at first. But... I found... After I read other articles... Your article really has a lot of praise, I hope you don't hate rp Jun T-T
I like the narrative descriptions in these chapters - I like Miss W-'s writing style very much. She tells the plot from the perspective of a third person. It is very plain and has a little sadistic point that touches my heart. It's very good! !
As I look at it, I always feel that it is awkward. Please forgive my venomous tongue. My dear, what you wrote does not make sense. Example: Yibai, a name that makes Quan Shanshan hate her so much and can make her heart beat faster in an instant. Just thinking about it, Quan Shanshan can feel that her heart is sweet and sour for a while, making her uncomfortable. Every time she thinks of An Yibai, Xuan Yan's name suddenly appears next, like a bright knife that plunges into Quan Shanshan's heart, causing dull pain but not a drop of blood. . It's a pounding/rapid heartbeat. What is the situation of [heartbeat is pounding and accelerated]? There seem to be too many attributives and it feels very complicated. Sweet and sour is a kind of taste, can it be [twisted]? And shouldn't the sour and sweet feeling be wonderful and green? Thoughts are abstract. How can I think of XX and then suddenly XX appear next... How? Take the first sentence as an example. If it were changed to: Yibai, a name that she both loves and hates... It would be much simpler and clearer. It's a bit difficult to read. Is this your first time writing? What I said may not be correct, it's just my personal opinion and I'm totally free to say that.