
Britain (Ultimate Edition)
不列颠(终极版)
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 15k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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I'm still in the pit. I really like the old version, like the part where the water plants in the Cam River wrap around my ankles... Don't lock it, woo woo woo.
Since you rewrote Peisi, she has transformed from a gentle girl into a mean and sharp young woman. Who can still believe that she is a poor and lonely little penguin who was thrown to the North Pole? Oh.. Come on… There is a suspicion of "pretending"! It's because you haven't continued writing for too long, and the freshest flower has already bloomed!
"Spider web-like lanes and overpasses intersect with each other, and the constant flow of traffic and people squirm among them. Each car is like a cocoon, sealing out the dust of Beijing's midsummer with an almost suffocating air-conditioning." This is really well written, I can't say it's good, but it's very good. I am often on the 18th floor of Ideal International, looking at a square overpass below. Nearby are the gray roofs of other shorter buildings and poorly arranged rooftop flowers and trees. In the distance are low but rolling mountains. Everything looks a bit disharmonious, why are they matched like this, why do the cars look like this, why are they crawling on the road, why are there dark gray-blue highways and overpasses. . . Very strange feeling. But I can't describe it. Maybe this is why reading your writing is so enjoyable. Whatever I didn't catch myself, you described it fluently, crisply and extremely accurately.
Since the master has opened a new pit, and it is impossible to kill me, then I will jump down.
Pei Si... Didn't transform from a little white rabbit into a black pepper, but transformed into a philistine little steel tooth... What a mouth! It's probably hard to see how she was able to contradict Xiaofeng ten times with one sentence. No matter what, whip Ji Rigeng with a whip!
Sisi changed from a white rabbit to a black pepper. . . The tone of the article introduction becomes relaxed I like them all~~~but I hope that the old sensual brushwork with a deep sense of perspective will not disappear~~
These aliens are so sharp. We and them live in two different worlds.
There are so many locked up. I hate that I don't have a chance to look at them again.
This version of the intersection between Pei Si and Li Xiyan has been deleted.
Come back and fill this hole. It's been so many years. I'm really resentful.