
My Childhood Friend, the Little Husband
竹马小夫郎
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 214k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
55Chapters
2.7kFavorites
7.0Score
1.1kNutrient gifts
5kClicks per chapter
638Comments
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It feels a bit anticlimactic, oh, not very anticlimactic,,,,,,,,,,,,, you know how much I look forward to seeing this article? Did you know? Did you know? It's just that the mood is very broken. I thought you wrote it after such a long time just to brew up the emotions, brew up the chapters, brew up the plot. I really didn't expect it, I really didn't expect it. The longer you use it, the worse it gets. Don't think that I am ugly. I am expecting everything. The night you updated, every time I saw the payment, I was really happy and sad at the same time, because I really liked the setting at the beginning, unless you modify the whole text, you really have lost me, although I am not important to you. But once, you were very important to me, but I was really sad. I watched the story that I loved so much turn around and change, and I was really, really sad. This setting is so touching, and now it's so broken,,, I'm really angry and funny. Not the kind of helpless and conniving smile. I'm really speechless. I feel your perfunctoryness. It's really sad,,, and I don't know what you think? Either I have no energy or I no longer love you. But there is a saying, you have heard it, if you don't love it, please don't hurt me. I have received 10,000 critical hits right now. My language system has become disordered. I am really confused now. To be honest, I don't want to affect your mood for writing other novels. But I really I really. Please finish writing this novel. I paid for it. I didn't read the pirated version. I know other people also paid. Can you please respect my consumer rights? I really really really, you know? Your main character is poorly written. His social status in the early stage is actually very good. Originally, according to that formula, because from my experience of reading the article, it should be a redemption article,,,, and then the two protagonists grow up together,,, what you wrote, tmd one of them has grown to the sky,,,, and the other has shrunk inward like a potato ( TMD means that her mother's education is not good, and there is no personal attack. Speaking of this, I am also very annoyed by the mantra of Chinese residents. People around me have always said this since I was a child. It doesn't have any deeper meaning. It's just pure sexism. It's annoying to death.) You know? Did you know? I have been really looking forward to it and looking forward to your wonderful rejuvenation. But now you are still constipated. You have been constipated. I know. But today it seems that you are about to die. Do you know? I feel that the setting of No. 1 Is really good, I give you affirmation. Very sure. But so be it. I don't know what's going on, anyway, my impression after watching this circle is that Lin Hao's character is too thin, that is to say, I feel that he is very one-sided, and I feel that No. 1'S love for No. 0 Is also very inexplicable,,, you know? That is. It's a bit like how humans now like to only deceive people into liking the second dimension, but it feels as nonsensical as if they were falling down. You say it's hope for redemption. It's reasonable, but unrealistic, and in line with rational logic, but it lacks emotional color, very, very lacking. Also, it reads a bit dry. But I still like this setting very much. I really love this article. Why did you abandon it? Did you know that a motherless child is like a root? ,,,,, (These little dots are all marked, I feel confused and speechless) you know, you know, you know? Maybe you know, I really hope you're trying. Maybe this book will become a hit? I have read a lot of books, and I think that the touching storyline is very attractive, and the touching setting is also very attractive. And the interaction mode you choose at the beginning of the movie, which is No. 1 And No. 0, Is very attractive. Do you know? Did you know? I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night just because of your article,,,, from 1:00 am to 5:00 am,,, I'm not lying to you,,, really really change it,,, don't give up,,, really don't give up,,, remember, remember, really remember, motherless children are just grass,,, I say the important things three times: Motherless, children are grass, motherless, children are grass, motherless, children are grass. Do you remember it? Although we have never met, I am fortunate to have experienced some days with you through this article. For the sake of these days, I really can't say, please, don't force me to beg you, come back and see you, this difficult-to-delivery baby, really, you look back, you take a look, you take a look
It ended too hastily. Write 80% of the plot in a few chapters. Moreover, except for the protagonist, everyone at the beginning of the plot died in various ways.
It ended like this. . . . I thought it would take a few more chapters for the two of them to really get together, and there would be more than a dozen chapters after marriage because of the label of having children. . . .
The more you get to the back, the more rubbish it gets. Really, I like the front very much.
No. . What is the ending like? It was so well written before, why did it end so hastily? . . When I saw the ending label, I thought there were dozens of them. The pace was so slow at the beginning. One chapter was over?
Going to get into trouble? Isn't it? OMG
I also want to see the development of their relationship. Why did they fast forward so fast? Didn't you still like it on the boat?
It looks good, it would be nice if it were longer.
It's over, it's hard to say anything
The ending is very rushed, very rushed. . . Very perfunctory