The Apricot Fairy Is Still Looking Out for the People Today!

I feel like the heroine has some ideas that come and go, and the author's settings are quite attractive.

The heroine claims to be a modern person, advocates equality and doesn't want anyone to bow down to her, but she always loses her temper over trivial things. It feels a bit strange, maybe she's not integrated with the original heroine, right?

If there is anything that can be improved, I think some character descriptions can be added. After reading so many chapters, I feel that apart from the height of the characters, their clothes, appearance, and tone of voice are not mentioned. Like in this chapter, does the mother-in-law who sells lotus root powder speak with an accent, how is she dressed, or do she have vertical and horizontal wrinkles on her face? It feels like adding some small details can make a character come alive more. Moreover, for the restaurant described in this chapter, you can also write a little about how many floors it has, what materials the tables and chairs are made of, whether they are new or old, whether they are clean or not. When the heroine enters, she finds that the restaurant is already full, so she can write about the noise inside and what the diners are doing. Sometimes the small details given by these background panels can make the world in the text more substantial. But this is my personal opinion, because I like to read articles with a sense of immersion, so I prefer some details. The author has his own style and ideas, and the overall logic of the article is online, which is already very rare. After all, sometimes it's hard to find logical articles (face covering). In addition, Brother Monkey feels that there is no OOC, so I'm happy!

It's a bad name as expected, hahahaha, the changed name is not as good as someone else's original name

These rules are nothing at all, but maybe there is something wrong with the wording, which makes people feel uncomfortable. I even feel like I am reading an ancient novel.

It still feels a bit sloppy, and there is no outstanding shining point (cheek support)

I feel like this article of mine can basically be read as an original article, right? For paragraph comments, when readers want to post, they have to click on the paragraph and open the paragraph comment before they can post. Is it because of this that no readers leave comments? Don't want to try it?

I don't have the ability now, so let's forget it and look around.

The first paragraph comment was won by the author. The author has turned on paragraph comments. There are no restrictions. You can comment freely. Comments are welcome. By the way, in the world of Journey to the West, there are so many exotic flowers and grasses, and fairy grasses in the fairy mountains, which are all resources. Liu Xing wants to take all these things and distribute them reasonably.

After watching it for so long, I feel like I can't figure out what Liu Xing's main mission is, building Mohua City? Eat, drink and be merry?