Named for a Rose (Revised Edition)

I feel that the modified version is more compact and reasonable than the original version. Bonus points!! I don't know when Chapters 4 and 5 will be unlocked.

I came here after reading the original version and here are some suggestions and ideas. In fact, regarding these two roses, I suddenly thought of the Korean drama, the sister Yun Xi, who is somewhat similar to An An's kindness. I don't know if adults have seen it. One of the girls there had bullied her since she was a child. Later, she even pretended to be her and claimed millions of dollars in wealth. In order to steal a man, she indirectly killed him on the day he married her. For this reason, the girl went to jail, and when Yunxi went to visit the prison, she yelled so righteously, scolding Yunxi for taking away everything from her. (I'm sorry, I don't know if people who haven't seen it understand what I mean. I just forgot the name of the bad girl~~~~~~~) However, the red rose in this article seems to be more selfish and paranoid. At that time, during the prison visit scene in "The Glass Slipper", I remember one line most firmly. It was said by Yun Xi: "A person's happiness depends on whether he is satisfied or not." In that scene, the psychological language of both parties was extremely vivid. Of course, due to the length of this article, the psychology of the protagonist is described in detail, but there is basically no positive writing about the other red rose. So it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is deified in the Queen's novel. Red Rose is also a human being, and even a paranoid person will have her own psychological activities. I hope adults can spend more time on her in the revised version. I suspect that she had an extreme personality at first, then became a little paranoid, and then maybe she became paranoid. Of course, there is deep love and deep hatred, but I can't see this development process in the original version. Secondly, everyone likes an excellent protagonist, but if she is closer to the psychological journey and performance of a 16-year-old girl, then the unintentional degree will be even deeper. Also, in the author's original text, the development of the plot in some places needs more foreshadowing. I was especially shocked when Zhuo Fan said he loved her. I'm just confused. Unbearable. He also understood that she loved him deeply, but it was still too sudden. He was forced to do so at first. Under her cruel behavior like a lunatic, when did he fall in love with her? Because of my son? The mother of this little life was pregnant and was scheming and forcing others, which resulted in him being born with a disability. It's really hard for me to believe that such a vicious and crazy person exists. And she also got love?! It's really hard to imagine!! Also, as for Yi Yang, as a shopping mall elite, he always has thunderous methods, and he also loves An'an. His pampering towards his sister is really unbelievable. I'm afraid it can't be explained by the fact that she suffered because of him when she was a child. Even if it can be assumed that this person is a guy who loves his family very much - such a person does exist, doesn't he have a wise understanding that for a sister like him, moderate restraint is actually a kind of love and care! He should be aware of all the things his sister has done! Instead of just watching this war of two roses. Moreover, he later realized clearly that he was more of a money-making machine and pillar for his family than a son and brother, so he still protected his family - his stepmother, his half-sister? I was a little surprised that after Zhuo Fan told him about the past when Hong Rose was kidnapped as a child, he didn't go to An An again! As I write this, I have another feeling that the characters in the original text are all too one-sided. People can't have only one side. White roses are the embodiment of kindness, purity and tolerance? Are there no dark actions and thoughts in the face of sworn hatred (killing parents, stealing lovers)? Not even for a moment? Of course, I personally like this article very much. Except for the ending, I felt sad when I read it, but I have to admit that it is very innovative. Tragedy, only tragedy can highlight the loyalty and greatness of love!!! Like heartache!! The ending does not have to be changed, but it must make people feel that this ending is acceptable. God says: Many things are not what they seem. Suffering from a disaster may be a kind of happiness and blessing - it often avoids a greater disaster or brings other benefits. So when An An was suffering, I often comforted myself like this. So, if adults insist on the original ending, then write more about the happiness she got in the end. Seeing that the author intends to write another edition, in addition to supporting it, I would like to make some suggestions, hoping to see a better article! Scatter a piece of flowers here to comfort the hard-working author. Writing is a lonely and hard work. I've written so much, it's enough for a long review. Although it looks a bit like bricks. However, I just don't have the benefit of writing Wenwen – everyone who has read it will know!!!!!!!! There are hard-working coppers, so let's write a big one. Looking forward to it.

Come on, I hope there will be a different ending

Want to write about college life? Come on, author!

I hope the ending can be modified so that Fang and An can finally be together.

Have you started revising? Come on! I saw it was officially recommended! Come on VIVIAN! I still can't leave my contact information. Once I leave it on MSN, I won't be allowed to leave any messages. How can I communicate with you directly instead of chatting with you? I'm so depressed.