It was once titled "Song, Faintly Heard" and "Elegy." Thank you for that one view *(∩_∩)*
An elegy is for the dead, as time passes and quiet grief lingers. A song is written only for those who have passed away.
Missing someone can carry you to a distant shore.
There, unfamiliar paths are fragrant with brocade, and roses are woven fine,
blossoming along the road to tell me you're doing well.
Back then, flowers bloomed in all their glory, and pear blossoms drifted down with a refreshing fragrance,
bringing gentle warmth and the intoxicating trace of your presence.
Everyone remembers the expression of someone else,
but when loneliness comes, what could weigh more heavily than missing you?
Missing things can reach the far side of the clouds.
The rock candy is gone, but I can still taste its pure, clear sweetness.
The apples are gone, but I can still remember peeling sweet, succulent mangoes.
The fireworks are gone, but I can still shine for one dazzling instant, an eternity before vanishing.
I hear there's a movie you love playing on the street corner,
but all I can do is sketch your blurred, fragmented profile.
Everyone is scenery in someone else's life,
but when loneliness comes, what could be more painfully naked than remembrance?
I can't help remembering how cute you looked licking your ice cream.
Unable to sleep at night, I hide in the covers where you once slept.
On a bus alone, the lovely shadow beside me is still an empty space.
Changing streetlights, treetops flashing by, passersby racing past.
The elegy has yet to end, the sad song has already passed, and everything is changed.
All right.
After coming back to write this story, my style gradually changed too much =皿= So the story, which was originally meant to be serious, ended up becoming lighthearted instead. orz...
Sister story, "I Was Born to Be King":
Premise:
There are too many characters and I don't really understand them.
Roy is the English name of my boyfriend!
Dear, I feel that there are too many characters and too complex. The writing is quite good~ but I feel that too many descriptions cause aesthetic fatigue.
First post on Tieba? - -
A bouquet of flowers, but my writing still needs work~
So... Packing and stuff...
Come on, come on and call me, please listen to my mother~~~ [Minixiao...
Sometimes tragedy does not require too much reluctance to describe. Sometimes, just like this, a casual sentence and a line of psychology can be achieved. After all, Asakawa is not a heartless and optimistic child. She has her persistence and her own pursuits. She wants to be watched, cared for and loved. Her family didn't say anything, but she felt that she missed home. If I understood correctly, the mountain she went to later was her hometown. Was her happiness and hope all there? Is that why she left without any regrets? The end of the factual article didn't reveal her ending, so I was also imagining that Shan'er probably wouldn't let her leave like this, or could she still be seen in "Elegy"? In the end, it turns out that Shan'er could make her more miserable, not too sadistic, and very tangled. It's like seeing abuse, and then the author hesitated, then changed the subject and said softly, come on!
Damn it... To be honest, this extravagant abuse in your family has made me... Come on...
I saw you yelling in the forum yesterday that you didn't dare to write the bad ending that Xiaolu wanted. I thought you were going to open a new trap, but it turned out to be a side story! And it's already over 10,000 in just two days. It's rare for Shan'er to be so productive~ The quality is pretty good, Dark Wind~ However, Shan'er, I don't think you were in a good mood when you wrote this story. You said it very negatively in many places, but well, it makes sense. Sometimes the sarcasm is very loving It's better to choose not to see the ending. Now I'm endlessly entangled. I'm also curious as to why Shan'er is urging readers not to read further... I always feel that it is a pity for Mio Asakawa, who was living a careless life. Before I read the text, I thought she would play the role of a third party, but now it seems... Shan'er, why don't you give Mio Asakawa more roles in the text in the future! Please torture Bena more! See how badly Xuwa'er was tortured! Xiaokelie and Xu have sex, right? □□~(^O^) Shaner has great potential in writing satire~