[My heart breaks the rules for you. An incurable illness absent from medical texts]
+++ Upcoming: My Online Romance with a Nonhuman Villain Is Exhausting
+++ I have a boyfriend I've been dating online for half a year.
He's broad-shouldered, slim-waisted, long-legged, and has an eight-pack. I'm very pleased with that.
Except...
1. He sometimes gets chuuni and insists he's the big boss of some infinite world.
2. Sometimes he'll call me "baby" on voice chat, then vanish the next second. Much later, he'll come back and say he went to deal with a few arrogant people. Then, when he sees I'm upset, he'll soothe me by calling me "baby" over and over.
To be honest, other than those two things, everything else about him is great.
But it is an online relationship, after all.
As time went by, I slowly grew bored and tired of it.
Everything he shared with me every day was either wild fantasy or completely unrealistic, and he was always coming up with excuses not to meet me in person.
In short, I didn't like it.
I was exhausted.
I didn't want to pretend I still liked him, so I broke up with him without hesitation.
I thought he'd try to talk me out of it.
But for two whole weeks, he didn't reply to a single message.
I thought our online relationship was over.
But then...
I woke up after a night's sleep and found myself pulled into a strange world.
There, I saw a figure leaning against an obsidian throne. The same broad shoulders, slim waist, and long legs, but this time he was dressed. I didn't know if he had an eight-pack.
He did look a bit like my damn online boyfriend.
Then I heard a familiar line that made my face instantly turn red.
"Baby, want to see my abs again?"
Note:
1. The blurb is in first person; the main text is in third person.
2. An overpowered boss of an infinite world x a beautiful, haughty male college student
Theme: Starting over for a better life
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How Can a Socially Anxious Villain Survive in Infinite
Dear author, now that I read your article, I feel more and more something is wrong. The feeling of separation is getting stronger and stronger, so strong that I can't read the article. Later, I thought about it for a long time and finally figured it out It seems that your writing setting is in conflict with your writing style. You see, the protagonist is a domineering president in a shopping mall. Although he is a domineering president in a bloody novel, you have also described before that he has a big career and has to deal with the affairs of the shopping mall. But your writing style is that of a fresh and sweet article. Then there is a conflict. The protagonist has been tempered in the shopping mall for ten years. It is not a normal shopping mall, but a bloody shopping mall in bloody novels. Behavioral habits will definitely change. Strangers may not understand it very well, but familiar people will know at a glance that something is definitely wrong. In your novel, the description of the protagonist after returning to his own world is too much like a young boy. Or too weak. It's not a weakness in strength, it's a weakness in character. It's as if nothing has changed about him in these ten years, but your assumption is that he has. There is a sense of conflict and fragmentation. A wealthy CEO who has been tempered by extreme shopping malls for ten years would be so flirted with by a boy younger than him (mental age). . . Shy? Especially in this filming and romance drama, the relationship progressed very quickly. If he was just an ordinary sweet story, then this progress would actually be normal, but the story happened to last ten years. It was a painful ten years of having to act like others and not being able to be yourself happily, having to deal with business in the mall, going through those bloody things, and in the end even being sick and lying in bed and dying directly. I think people would be numb then. It has a bit of a sense of redemption, but there is no redemption in the article. It seems that the protagonist has recovered on his own. But I don't look like I've recovered, it's more like I haven't had the normal behavior pattern of this "decade" (the feeling of youth in the twenties, playing around and having fun? A young boy?) Just, very fragmented. Because I am more concerned about the setting of the article, but your writing style is really very small and fresh, and it is separated from this setting. I hope you will read my comments carefully. I actually did not give detailed examples of the details in the article. I just felt that at the end of this chapter, the protagonist seemed to like each other. Because I am asked to talk about the details of the article, but I can't remember it. I have read a lot of articles, and if I really want to grasp the details, I have to read the previous chapters again, and this is not necessary. It's just that what I'm talking about now is that when I read this book, the impression it gave me was that it seemed to be disconnected and very abrupt. Setting aside the setting, this book is very normal, just a cookie, sweet. But once this setting of time travel was inserted, it was abrupt, too abrupt. In the end, I discussed it rationally and did not mean to criticize. I just made a suggestion. (Wearing a vest, if you scold me, you are sick.) Great job writing the article! I wish your writing will get better and better [Comparison of Hearts]
Fifty meters is a bit too little. The length of a standard swimming pool is already fifty meters.
Liang Zhen, has been outrageous from the beginning. He likes Ning and has been hostile to Lin from the beginning. Forget it, his words are still old and ugly. Absolutely
When will it be updated? Great 🥺 🥺
When will it be updated? Great 🥺 🥺
You don't want to refund the money to update another chapter, right?
Damn it, it turns out you still remember this book.
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