Tales of Peace at Tianlong Temple

Haha, thank you for the essay first~ Xiaoyue found that her essay solicitation has become a review training camp for novices. However, all the authors are novices, and so am I, so I understand very well that new articles need support. Please forgive me in advance because there are many essays and I need to read them bit by bit, so it takes a long time! In addition, since most of your comments are for improvement, I won't praise you! It would be more practical to give you some suggestions. My first impression when I read this article was that it was not long... How to put it, if you don't grasp it well, it will give people a feeling of exhaustion, so my suggestion is to write less than 100,000 words. Of course, it may be that the plot has not been developed yet. It is my misunderstanding. I personally recommend that you read the recently popular "Wolf's Retirement" as a literary reference book. Although it is almost unrelated,... You can learn a lot @Hope it helps!

Friendship points, friend of Kagetsu sama

When Shi meets a man with facial paralysis, he is the cutest > <, my dear, you have to remember to fill in the soil.

Clapping your paws as you pass by, scattering all kinds of cute things, don't be fooled by transparent birds

Poor Shi Yu =www= This article is extremely joyful and eloquent! What's going on with all the cute attributes gathered together!!! The bald head setting is a bit OTZ, but I got used to it without realizing it www Keep writing~