
A Sequel in the Making
衍叙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 14k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
3Chapters
5Favorites
327Clicks per chapter
3Comments
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Haha, I am here to contribute a long review again. I feel that long reviews are still very important to the author. As for this article, I feel that it is just a story about two idiots getting together. It is really sweet and scary!! I can't find anything unreasonable, except that the length is too short, but fortunately each article is relatively long, except that the first chapter's narrative is a bit long, which goes well with the name of this article. Hahaha, I just read the author's columns, and I found that they are all about traveling through books, and some relatively simple themes on campus, but I think, stick with it, I believe the author will one day try new themes and new styles. What do you think of entertainment industry articles? Infinite flow, and the difficulty of the investigation is very high. Should I write something more relaxed to adapt to the slightly longer length and practice my control over the story? Of course, I just mentioned my thoughts, hoping to give the author some help and direction in choosing topics, exercises, etc. The author's emotional writing in this article is good!! As an article that focuses on secret love, the emotional aspect is already well written! Later readers will feel good after reading it, please give the author a score! Every point is important to novice authors qwq
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