
[Big Windup! Fanfiction/TaSan] The Three-Legged Bird's Long Sleep
大振同人/田三/三光鳥的長眠
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 106k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
24Chapters
86Favorites
10.0Score
20Nutrient gifts
1.2kClicks per chapter
19Comments
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I spent three days reading this article. I didn't dare to read more than 8 chapters a day. Because I can't bear to part with it, this is really a rare and good article. When I first read this article, I felt very confused and couldn't understand why Mihashi was in the mansion and why he met the thief Tajima. With many questions, I was full of interest in the article. The author's writing is like painting a painting. At the beginning, he was full of doubts about the painting and did not know what emotions and artistic conception the painter wanted to express. But with the completion of the painting, it is not just a painting, but also a spiritual impact and shock. The author describes Mihashi Ren, like a young bird, growing up and finally no longer afraid of anything. I was really surprised when I saw the part where Mihashi killed Brino. I thought someone came to save Mihashi, but I didn't expect that it was Mihashi himself who did it. Afterwards, he helped Tajima and others to be convicted. It's really surprising. The author's description of Tajima is also very detailed. Tajima loves Mihashi all the time, even hurting himself, but he also inadvertently hurts others. I think the Tajima written by the author is the real Tajima. He is sunny and cheerful, yet does not lose his domineering attitude, does not lose his childishness, and feels a lot more mature. After Mihashi was arrested, Tajima was suddenly written as "childish". This is really a wonderful method. Tajima's sadness, anger, and incomprehension towards Mihashi are expressed through strong contrast. (I cried when I saw this = =Sleeping boy, your sister is not paying attention to me! Just write more extra stories... Pia, fly to me...) When I read the full text, the last scene of the reunion was also very touching. Yuichiro in Tokyo is no longer the Yuichiro of Hamisha in the past. Mihashi also fulfilled his wish. The two of them live together forever. They are really in love. . . (Sleeping boy TAT finally returned after seven years. It's very JQ to add an extra paragraph of H [Alas = = greedy] to add an extra paragraph of trivial matters in life...) Complaints over I will probably re-read this article many times in the future. Thank you to the author for writing this story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Woohoo, it seems that after transferring to the school, my skills are still as strong as before. After a bunch of lies, there is also the best abbreviation!
Haha, I'm thinking: It's great that Sleepy Boy can be cute to Tian San.
Xiong has always been a person who is not good at words, so he may not be able to accurately convey all the gratitude in his heart to you, Sleepy Boy. Despite this, I still hope to express all my inner feelings by writing this article. To be honest, Xiong rarely reads fanfics. He thinks they are all delusions with strong subjective color (there is no malicious intention here), let alone those that are trying to exclude and pinch him. The first time I noticed the masterpiece "The Long Sleep of the Three-Lighted Bird" (please allow me to say this) was when I saw the reprint of Cai Ren Children's Shoes in the Ace Pitcher Bar. The two words "field + three" attracted me more than the title, mainly because I was unfamiliar with the term "The Long Sleep of the Three-Lighted Bird", and the first time I saw the word "Long Sleep", I felt that it was a tragic article. But the charm of the word "Tian San" was too great, so I clicked on the link to find out. 22 Chapters, an astonishing number of words, really made me have the urge to give up, so I ran to the last page to read the reviews of other children's shoes. Uncle Ya's comments are brilliant. I believe he must have been greatly stimulated (?) To be able to write such good comments. At this time, I made up my mind to read this article that makes people unconsciously fall into it. As expected, Sleepboy's ingenuity can be seen from the story's background, layout, character settings, narrative techniques, use of suspense, scene structure, etc.; The plot is intricate and interconnected, and each seemingly unrelated detail at first sight is an indispensable piece of the puzzle to piece together the truth. And every character who appears is just like what Sleepy Boy said, there are no supporting roles, everyone is the protagonist; their images are real, plump, vivid, and deeply portrayed. Everyone interprets their own life appropriately, using their own hands to fight against fate and struggle in the face of adversity. Sleepboy's in-depth and thorough interpretation of Da Zhen's characters really shocked me. It is really gratifying to see the young people who have been completely damaged by the torrent of the times, step by step towards the dawn. I was initially attracted to Tian San because of their way of communicating beyond language. In the match against Kirito, Tajima could interpret Mihashi's inner thoughts with just a few gestures and eyes. Tajima could understand the few words that confused the catcher Abe. The physical and mental synchronization rate between Tian San and the two of them has reached an unbelievable level. It is true that among the Tian San group, I personally prefer Tajima. I am impressed by his unmistakable brilliance and attracted by his sensitivity and understanding. I have always felt that Tajima is the person who understands Mihashi best. He will be the dawn of Mihashi, his salvation, and his destination. Mihashi must have been living under the protection of Tajima, smiling happily and a little silly. But Tian San is Tajima and Mihashi after all. They are two people who can be of the same mind, but they are independent individuals with their own ideas and persistence. Xiao San's persistence in the pitcher's mound and pitching in Da Zhenli is not sure whether it can be said to be his persistence in survival. He believes that as long as he lives, there will still be hope, even if he has to make do with compromises and live in an ignoble way. But in the end, he actually killed Brino with his own hands and was charged with theft and other charges. I was shocked to realize that Tajima was not the only one who could sacrifice everything and even his life for the other party. Mihashi could also do it for Tajima. Fortunately, there was a good ending in the end, otherwise I might have lived in a haze for a while... I can't write any more thoughts or character analysis, so I'll stop here. I hope you'll forgive me for being so long-winded and out of context. I think it's just a bear talking in his sleep or lying. I hope your creative passion will not fade away, because there are many people behind you who silently support you~ Come on! PS: The new work is also very nice!! Full support!!
I came across this article from a Tieba forum. On the 20th, I spent a whole afternoon, from 2pm to almost 9pm, and finally finished reading this masterpiece. The longer time passes, the more I feel that no matter which CP Da Zhen has, there is always something cute about him. Now, he no longer has any particular destiny, only the pairings he doesn't like. I have a long-term affection for Tian San. I have never stopped liking Da Zhen since I first came into contact with him, so I wanted to write something to support this article. I think the world view of this article is really powerful. To be honest, this is not a world I like. It is gloomy, dark, gloomy, and has a depressing atmosphere... But I must admit that this world is really well constructed. I actually have no idea what kind of bird the Sanguang Bird is, but I always believe that no matter what kind of bird it is, it has a basic positive meaning. Even the crow, despite its ominous connotations, is the source of the story of returning nourishment. Okay, this might be a bit far-fetched. Because I am not good at it, I am slow to accept the huge world view every time. I worked hard to read about ten chapters of this thing before I gradually got used to it and accepted it. Sometimes I still had to rewind and read it again, so it took me more than seven hours to read it all, as I am used to reading ten lines at a time. With my mind and experience as a Bensan Ogisang, I can certainly understand the dark side that is unknown to everyone, whether it is officialdom or society. But those in the article are just underage children after all. Let alone the 19th century, even now in the 21st century, the system is not very transparent. It is simply unimaginable how they work hard to survive in such an environment. As far as Tian San is concerned, I love Tajima far more than Mihashi, but the Mihashi in this article made me discover that Mihashi can have another side. In the article, Mihashi's character is still very timid. Because resisting would lead to injury, I followed Brino. Because I was timid, I cried and ran away when I was about to be bought. Because I was afraid of making people angry and criticized, I always apologized regardless of whether I was right or wrong. Such a timid and timid master could become so strong for Tajima in the end, and suddenly I was touched. Looking back on Tian San in my eyes, Tajima has always been a devoted love who would go through fire and water for Mihashi and take good care of Mihashi. Because only Tajima understands Mihashi best, if it weren't for Tajima, no one would be able to tolerate Mihashi's bad character. After reading this article, I suddenly realized that it is not impossible to change for the one you love. Mihashi is very weak, but if he has Tajima's support and if it is for Tajima's happiness, he can do things that seem out of reach. In fact, I was quite surprised when the author arranged for Mihashi to kill Brino, maybe because my thinking has been limited to the routine of "Misashi's words are impossible", and I ignored the deep hidden strong side of his character. Speaking of Tajima, I can say that the Tajima created by the author makes me feel impeccable. Tajima should be that kind of person. Even though he is still young, his spirit will not be concealed. Such Tajima, whether it was three years or ten years, in short, since he met Mihashi, his entire life was rigidly bound to Mihashi. He is destined to live or die for Mihashi in the future. Sister Momoe sees Tajima very clearly. No matter how old Tajima is, whether he is weak or strong, he is still immature. Because as long as Mihashi's weakness exists, he will inevitably be unable to see some things. Tajima Yuichiro and Mihashi Ren are two people who are quite equal to each other. Only Tajima understands Mihashi's few words without predicates. There is a height difference of 1cm between them. They are both Red Letter Party members. They both like to talk about food... The more I look closely, the more I can see the similarities between the two people, and then the more I feel that A3 does not exist in my eyes. This article is not just Tajima and Mihashi, other characters are also well developed, such as Izumi. When watching Da Zhen, apart from Tajima, my favorite character is Izumi Kousuke. He is a very calm young man who doesn't speak much, but is well-organized in his dealings with others. Because he is shrewd, the gangsters of Harukuruya do not regard him as a commodity but as an accomplice, because they can make greater profits this way. Although Quan is cold, he is not heartless, but he only thinks about his friends. Regarding the matter between Tajima and Mihashi, he has always been on Tajima's side as a friend. Occasionally, if you are harsh, it is for the sake of your friends; sometimes if you push the person concerned, it is for the sake of your friends. He is always a neither salty nor bland character in the article, seemingly just to promote the development of the plot, but without him, the article will lose a lot of color. It is such a light person who makes me feel very happy. It feels like the author has really studied the children of Dazhen thoroughly, and it seems that everyone should be like that. And then I feel, yes, he can be like that too. Except for Tian San, the CP is almost not mentioned in the text. Even Rongguchi's tragic sacrifice to defeat the emperor didn't even get a supporting role, which I always felt was a pity. While reading the article, I kept wondering whether it was a spring or a spring. However, the author did not light a bright light until the end, which made me regret it for a long time. But even this is enough. I can teach you all kinds of things. On this day of Thanksgiving, I would like to thank the author for this feast of words, and say thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Author, you are so awesome. I finally waited for you to update QDQ!!!!! Love this article!!! I mean, I saw people crying (tears) The HE at the end was so awesome Although the QAQ in the middle was very worrying... Thank you for your hard work!!! Finally finished wwwwww