This story came about entirely by accident. Here's how it happened...
Once school started, I had no time to write, even though I was only a sophomore. Then our teacher assigned us an English exercise: "Write a short story using dash, clash, crash, smash, flash, ash, splash, and bush."
Well, before I knew it, I'd gone off track: Against the backdrop of the Great Depression, a penniless man who's been unemployed for years and a temporary robber with a few principles become a pessimistic, depressed duo. They've completely lost faith in the world, and neither wants to go on living...
First I wrote it in English (my first time writing fiction in English), then translated it using the Chinese way of thinking. Hahaha, that really is so me.
I've included the English version too. Come learn English on Jinjiang with me~
But time was limited, so I feel the story's overall pacing is a little fast. I didn't go into much detail, but leaving things unsaid has its own beauty.
Theme: Becoming one
Let me briefly report: I have finished the mind map... I was not so serious before writing the article!! [I really didn't expect that the writing teacher (she happened to be teaching narrative) would ask me to use a mind map to analyze the creative process and ideas in front of the whole class] Imagine me standing in front of the electronic whiteboard: "Archie flushed, be... Because..." (Archie flushed, be... Because...), Or "These sentences... Their function is to... To present a vague affinity." Oh my God!
Came here from Zhihu! My wife taught me how to write my college entrance examination essay on shoes, hahahaha
A sudden thought: Can my wife write rou in English in the future? Will she pass it? If so, I will bring the dictionary to Ah Jin to read the article.
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, everyone~
OK, screenshots have been taken, you can save your life at critical moments →It goes something like this: "I'm playing with my phone again!" "Mom, I'm learning English!" If Chapter 2 appears on the English test paper, I will definitely read it carefully (?? Benefit?)
This is he! This is he!! This is the highest state of he!!!
Life is as gorgeous as summer flowers, death is as quiet and beautiful as autumn leaves
The Chinese version that was released first has not been reviewed yet. Is it because the online reviewers don't want to read the English version? Hahahahahaha
How many people came here to read the article hahaha⊙▽⊙I'll catch you in the comment area~
Madam, I must come back and tell you!!! Just now my English teacher praised me in the group for the continuation of the short essay I wrote before the holiday, saying that my writing was vivid and vivid, hahaha, I borrowed a few sentences, really, only a little bit. I have never described scenery in my essays before, and the characters only had pitiful walk run smiles⊙⊙I forgot to grade it last time, so I have to correct it this time.