This was my first book, and I left a lot of foreshadowing unresolved.
The previous arc can be read as a complete supernatural tale. It feels more complete if you read the final bonus chapter too.
The foreshadowing about Shuo Feng in the Zisun City section wasn't explained clearly.
Readers also felt that the final part about the six realms of reincarnation came out of nowhere.
That's all. If that bothers you, please don't read.
Thank you, angels, for accompanying this pig as I grew up. T^T
This novel: The growth story of a female emperor who cuts through the wilds with her sword
Jiang Li thought she had entered an immortal cultivation sect that devoured mortals and practiced sinister sorcery.
She never imagined that Xuan Yin Temple was a huge breeding farm,
where everyone, from Qi Refining disciples to Foundation Establishment cultivators, was being raised as a prospective meal for the temple master and the others.
After she packed her things and ran away,
she encountered Zisun City, where people traded their descendants' lifespans for supernatural power; fishing boats that made a living selling "vegetable people" and "merfolk"; and the royal family of Chu, who sacrificed mortals alive to increase their dragon qi...
In this world, cultivators were often extreme in temperament. Some were barely human, more like monsters.
"In my cultivation, I wish only to walk the path of the immortals. If demons stand in my way, I will slay them. If this world stands in my way, I will cut down its crooked ways and restore peace beneath the heavens!"
Scene:
Jiang Li never expected that a nighttime excursion of her soul would reveal such a beautiful sight!
The young man stood in the stream, his expression cool as he dried his long hair with a silk cloth. His snow-white undergarments were soaked through, revealing the jade-like skin beneath...
Suddenly, he raised his head. His clear, serene eyes met Jiang Li's gaze from afar. His eyes curved as he smiled. "Daoist Jiang, are you here to become sworn brothers with me again?"
#The heroine is devoted to seeking immortality and puts her career first. At the beginning, all she wants is to become sworn brothers with the hero.
Here's a pre-release I'm working on. TVT
Offering Up My Ex-Husband, Then Ascending to Immortality
Ge Yao was the Daoist partner of Immortal Lord Qin Huan.
She had accompanied Qin Huan as he climbed out of a mountain of corpses and a sea of blood, helped him evade schemes and conspiracies, and witnessed the misery and disgrace hidden behind his bright and noble exterior.
The day they took possession of the immortal mountain, Ge Yao naively thought the two of them had finally reached their happy ending.
It wasn't until the army retreated from the battlefield, leaving her alone behind as a hostage, that she realized...
The young man who hadn't let go of her hand even among the heaps of bones had long since become a different person.
On that opulent immortal mountain, adorned with flowers and splendor, a legitimate wife who had once been a sword-servant and a slave
could only be Qin Huan's shameful, wretched past, a bloodstained lump of mud that everyone wanted to avoid.
Ge Yao didn't believe in karma, reincarnation, or retribution.
In this life, she would sever this ill-fated bond with her own sword.
And with that single strike, the unreachable Immortal Lord would become once more the wretched young man she had loved.
#When my scummy ex-husband's memories return to the year he loved me most,
not even severed meridians and a shattered body will make me look back at him this time.
#The ex-husband can't escape his punishment. The second male lead wins her heart.
Theme: Keep working toward your goals.
It is speculated that he will fight against the new Wutong God in the Chu Kingdom, kill three corpses, and become the only golden elixir monk in the world! (I don't know why it feels like it's almost over) To be honest, the plot at the beginning is very compact and the world view is bloody enough. Later on, it becomes more and more inclined to the female protagonist spreading the three views. I can understand it, and there is no problem in writing this way. Only for the emotional line, the author named Jiang Jianwei as the second male lead, but it hasn't appeared yet... And the male protagonist has nothing to show for it. The author explained that it is difficult to survive now, so he can't fall in love. I think this is indeed the case, but as a novel with the male protagonist in the introduction, it is a bit of a failure. In fact, it feels a pity to see this. It is probably the first time for the author to write a novel. Many good plots are not well developed. As a novel, the existence of foreshadowing and suspense is very necessary. The author deliberately portrayed it, but it was too deliberate and it seemed not so thrilling. Even so, it can't cover up the cruelty in the heroine. She is kind and righteous, but she is really cruel, and she is super cruel to herself. But if I were brought into the role of the heroine, I would not be able to do what I am doing now. I might have been eaten when I was fighting Huang Pizi. I would not be able to escape from the soup pot when my inner demons interfered, and I would not be able to accept my mother's life experience so easily. Maybe that's why I'm an ordinary person. The author also worked very hard to portray some supporting characters, including Qi Zhengan and the recently appeared tiger. I like them very much. Qi Changan's contradictory thoughts also let me see the author's progress. He is more flesh and blood than the previous supporting characters. On the one hand, he is very upright, but on the other hand, as the son of a general who wants to serve the motherland, he is essentially a bit of a bureaucrat? I don't know if what I'm saying is what the author wants to express. He wants to protect mortals, but he can't get rid of the inherent ideas brought by his class, so he does wrong things with good intentions, but still doesn't regret it. At present, he is still unlikable, with such a stubborn character, but it is also this unlikeability that makes me find that his existence is really meaningful. I don't know if Chen Hao will appear in the future, what will be the ending of her and Qi Zhengan, and I am also looking forward to the eradication of Xuanyin Guan! I really rarely read this kind of article that can't even enter the v, but for the first time I witnessed an author's little efforts and progress, I couldn't help but want to comment. I can't enter v but insist on updating it every day. If I forget to update it, I will make it up. Although there are many problems at present, they are constantly being corrected. Keep at it, I believe this book will get better and better!! Spread flowers spread flowers
Xie Qing, is your younger brother a reserve soldier, right? Jiang Li is bringing beams of light to this dark world. Some people cry when they see the light, some hide when they see the light, some run after the light, some try to make the light disappear, and some want to seize the light for light therapy (the style of painting changes)
The next door is open: I am the fish killer in the world of strange stories about rules Angels who are interested should go and see it (`ε? ) This article: The peaceful life of an NPC in a world with strange rules. After Xiao Er graduated from Death No. 1 Middle School with excellent grades, he chose to escape from his less-than-warm family and drop out of school to work. After all, the risk of death in going to school is too high haha. With only a high school diploma, she finally chose to join the Bloody Slaughterhouse as a fish-killing master. Occasionally, some annoying outsiders disturb the waiter's peaceful life. But it doesn't matter, "I have been killing fish for ten years, and my heart has become as cold as the knife in my hand. Do you think I care about the lives of others?" The glamorous Fish Killer NPC was holding a boning knife and looked at the players huddled in a corner and smiled at Monsen White Fang. Weird stories about rules have been coming to Blue Star for many years. The living space of human beings has been continuously compressed, and only by clearing the game can they barely survive. Until the appearance of "Natural Disaster No. 2". She is a rare NPC who can always stay awake and walk through different rules and weird stories. People sometimes call her the Fish Killer.
Jiang Li is so brilliant, the emotional drama doesn't affect the whole story. It's nice to add icing on the cake, but please don't steal Jiang Li's limelight hahaha
It's good-looking, and the setting is very novel. It's the first time I've read a dark novel about cultivating immortals. Come on! Make persistent efforts
Ah, this... Looks good, but is the progress a bit too much?
So Chen Hao has been sitting outside the cave before practicing. Unfortunately, she is not an important supporting role and there is not much to write about. I feel so good that I cry TT
How do I detect some of Mao Zedong's red thoughts? Long live the people.
Hindsight is fun haha
This evil dragon shouldn't be considered a companion in the first place. Even if they share merits, their hearts are still dark. The true nature of the goddess is revealed as soon as she fails to ascend!