A Carefree Journey in Another World

Great, can you add adjectives after the words of the characters = = For example, so-and-so said, so-and-so said helplessly, so-and-so said with a smile, etc. = = It is just a dialogue. There is too little psychological description of the characters. I always feel that the characters lack feelings and are very transparent.

Due to the sudden crash of the album, the link address of this picture is no longer available. Please go to the painting shop section to leave a message, and I will reply with the new address under the message. Sorry for the trouble. Bow~

What a cute tree man. What a kind child.

What a beautiful picture, very cute

I took a look first when I saw the update~

So there will be no new ones before next week? . .

So I watched it from the beginning again. . .

Sprinkle some flowers~ Not bad~

When will Da Nai update the article =.=

I want to say that this article is too wordy. . . There are many things that can be covered in one go, so don't break them into chapters. Also, because this is my first time writing an article, it's normal for my writing style to be childish. I can't write the key points and the character's personality is not outstanding, which makes me read boringly. Actually, I don't want to say anything against the author, but I think this article is quite good. I hope the author can revise it again. Make this article interesting