The Journey

Woo..., Why?

There are two ways to win in a novel: winning by plot and winning by emotion. Those who can combine these two methods will naturally become a rare good article. I love this article and its sentiment. The short-lived love, although in the text, seems to span a long time. However, it all feels fake. Those times seemed fabricated, non-existent, and were preparations for the final climax. If, just if, the author could be a little more "bad" and make these times real and real. The final climax of the story will be even better. In the final analysis, what the author wants to describe is a kind of short-lived love. In order for this kind of love to reach its climax, you need to be ruthless and put everything in place before it. However, the author uses a fairy-tale style to cover up all the cruelty. In the article, whether he betrayed himself or was almost raped, these are not actually the cruelties of life, but rather the author's description of his own charm. This is also the problem when describing cruel places in life. The "cruel life" originally used to set off the two people seems to be inadequate here. There are two possibilities. One is that the author's writing power cannot reach it. Another possibility, which is more likely, is that the author's own view of love is that of a fairy tale. Therefore, reality is always blurred unconsciously. Moving on, what kind of love can be regarded as short-lived love. In fact, it can be said that love that goes against life is short-lived. In other words, love with stories is short-lived. In terms of endings, you can have multiple endings. Except, happily together. To create an ending is to confess the author's own ideas. Although this article is a BE, the author's concept is HE. They fell in love and knew each other, even though one of them died. However, overall this is a HE story. How will it become a BE story? There are many possibilities for this, and there are too many forks, so I won't go into them here. Apart from the above, this article is a good article emotionally. The author writes with strong emotion, without too much deliberate polish. From between the lines, it can even be seen that the author writes with emotion. A typical emotional article, far better than the plot:)

Embarrassing... I thought it would be HE. T^T

Churches are used for weddings for people who cannot fulfill their wishes in reality. Haha~

What a pure feeling! If it were me who wrote it, I would probably carry a basin of dog blood and spill it everywhere. = =

Fei Fei, I think it would be clearer to explain the transition between memory and modern times with two empty lines.

One person regards it as the final madness, and one person regards it as the beginning of love. ——Suddenly sad. Alas~

Vase - I am reminded of a story, The Love of Lucilesi. Leucresi and Cesare were brothers and sisters born to Alexander II and his mistress, and they were two people whom he protected regardless of his circumstances. The brother and sister have a deep relationship and once painted a love umbrella in a vase. After Cesare came of age, in order to unify the country, he did not hesitate to use his favorite sister as a marriage tool, but every time, he would kill his sister's husband in the end and let her return to him. Cesare died on the battlefield shortly after the death of Alexander II. Lucrece, the mysterious woman, put a gun to her head and committed suicide. When she died, she was pregnant, but no one knew that the child was actually Cesare's... Until her death, she never heard a word: "I love you" from her beloved brother.

Leave your claws alone for now, I'm sleepy~ Come and squat tomorrow~O(∩_∩)O~

1. Sprinkle flowers. . . Celebrate the end. . . 2. I am still the cutest third stop 3. Hate the end. . . I feel sad when the story ends