Just how much of a stir can an ordinary person with memories of a past life cause in another fantastical world? Stay tuned and find out!
Disclaimer: Blurbs are meaningless. Put simply, this is a fantasy wuxia story... at least, that's how I define it. This story has brought together friends from three different groups, so you could also call it a tale about a bunch of amazing supporting characters and a rather unremarkable protagonist. OTZ Every character is better conceived than my protagonist, and it makes me so miserable~~~~ One important thing: You don't have to like this story, and you don't have to read it, but please don't throw bricks at me. What this author needs is encouragement, not bricks. Thank you!
Pretend to be passing by casually... Raise your eyes and look silently... You know what I mean~ drift away...
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Ah Li, I am the red-skinned cat whose whole body is on fire~
Do you know who I am?
Waiting for the red cat to appear, =W=
Smile, one of my great loves in life is reading articles!
From the distant classic martial arts era, to innocent romance, and then, very accidentally, into the world of Danmei. From then on, it became even more out of control. And Wu Dan and fan fiction opened up another world of words for me.
However, although I often feel something after reading the article, this is the first time I write a serious review. Therefore, sir, Xiaoxiao, I adhere to the principle of writing whatever I think. If there are any objectionable words in my review, please believe that Xiaoxiao's original intention is to hope that your literary talent will further improve by leaps and bounds. . . . .
Okay, the preface has made it clear. Now, let's get back to the story itself of "Mu Yu's Sorrow".
Let's start from the beginning. Xiaoxiao, I have never had a good grasp of the plot, and I have no sense of it. I am only interested in the characters, because I think the characters are the center of the story, and the joys and sorrows of the characters are the fundamental thing that touches people's hearts.
Let's talk about Mu Yu's sadness first.
"Mu Yu Huai Shang", first of all, I was abducted by this name.
Mu Yu is sad, Mu Yu is sad, it seems that just by murmuring this name, there is a faint sadness, lingering and helpless. Feeling sad and sad, the winding water comes to my heart, and the cup of wine begins! After the hustle and bustle, there is the sadness of the end!
Only when we got into the story did we realize that Mu Yu Huaishang was a person, or to be precise, a "god". God of salvation.
And God is a ruthless existence, because great love is ruthless, and because if you want to treat all creatures in the world equally, you can only be ruthless. As the saying goes, "The sky is ruthless and treats all creatures as stupid dogs."
Therefore, Mu Yu Huaishang is actually very simple. His words and deeds have only one starting point: to save the world. As a god, Mu Yu would never take medicine when he was injured, nor would he take risks for money, nor would he use magic to stay in his residence forever in the autumn colors of falling red leaves for some obsession.
Let's put it this way, as a god Mu Yu Huaishang, his life can be grand and his deeds can be great, but as a simple person, his life is actually very simple.
If it hadn't been for the accident at birth, Mu Yu's life would have been as simple, direct and boring as you can imagine.
Fortunately, there is also Fu Feng. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Although this story is still the beginning, I still feel that Fufeng is the protagonist in this story.
I still can't see how this unforgotten memory, this sad memory of the past life will affect this person who carries the sad memories of his previous life. This will be one of the reasons why I pursue the article. I hope the original poster can help me clear up my confusion after reading the article.
Fufeng, the current impression is that he is smart and obedient, loves money as much as life, and is an expert in playing pranks. Of course, the sorrow deep in his heart was the original reason for his becoming a demon, right? How can we let go of such suffering? ? ? ? ?
And I look forward to the host of the building, taking us together, to accompany Fufeng out of the shackles of painful memories.
Although the story of Su Nuo has not yet unfolded, and the character of Su Nuo has not yet been fully formed, there is one thing that makes this character worth looking forward to.
The reason is: obsession!
The moment I thought of this word, a thought flashed through my mind: Love is obsession!
As for Su Nuo, his obsession with Fu Feng will turn into a quagmire as time goes by, sinking him deeply and unable to extricate himself. He is the strategist of the underworld. It is conceivable that he is a wise man, and there is often only a thin line between a wise man and a madman.
What kind of impact that sip of divine blood that he accidentally drank will have on him is not shown for now. Just because of his current paranoid obsession with Fufeng due to hatred, it can be foreseen that a shocking entanglement will inevitably happen in the future!
What I want to say here is: Even if there is an entanglement, the person is Fu Feng, not Mu Yu Huaishang! Of course, these are my thoughts after reading the article, and others may have other thoughts. And this is also the fun of reading the article, haha.
In fact, mourning is worthy of people's sympathy, because it is an extremely sad thing to have a destiny.
But, because of one person, I started to be jealous of him
This person is Mu Huaiyu.
Mu Huaiyu, I don't know what his martial arts and skills are at the moment, but his medical skills are very high. This alone is very interesting. And he is a good brother who cares about his younger brother. Wow, I can't help but feel resentful again: Why does Mao, a man like me who has a good brother, laugh at me but don't laugh at me? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Resentment! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Mu Huaiyu, for his father, he felt more resentment than hatred.
He blamed his father for giving up his newborn brother so easily for the so-called justice of the world, and even worse, killed him himself. Or, others would say that this was for the sake of the overall situation, but he was Mu Huaiyu, and he was not noble enough to think that his brother should deserve death, even if it was for the sake of the so-called common people in the world. All life in the world is destiny, isn't his younger brother one of them?
Therefore, he resented his father and doted on his younger brother who finally recognized him even more.
Because of this unconditional love for my younger brother, I also unconditionally like this character!
Mu Huaiyu, in the future, please continue to pamper Mu Yu Huaishang! Long live my good brother!
The person I want to talk about now is Zhan Chen!
To be honest, I don't really like this character at the moment. I hope my husband-in-law won't slap me when he sees me saying this.
Zhan Chen had a trace of inherent jealousy towards Fufeng from the very beginning. He knew very well that he would be accepted as a disciple by Mu Feiyuan, and he would be trained as the future sect leader, just because Mu Feiyuan lost Mu Yu Huaishang, and he was a substitute. But no matter how good the substitute is, he still can't compete with the main figure, and he really can't compete with the main figure.
He is very smart, and among the new generation of Taoists, his ability is indeed not bad. However, if you are too proud, even if you are extremely slow to react on the spot, you will make the same mistake again and again, but you will not admit your shortcomings. This is the most hateful thing.
But, at the same time, he is also very pitiful.
Because he is the future sect master, he has been under much greater pressure since childhood than other Taoists; and the most pitiful thing about him is that he has no childhood, does not understand the joy of games, and does not know how to be naughty and happy with others. The only thing that accompanies him as he grows up is loneliness.
Although everyone around him loves him and treats him as the most precious baby. But such love is so far away and so cold. He is jealous of Huai Shang, not only because of Huai Shang's ability, but because there are so many people who dote on Huai Shang unconditionally.
He is a poor man in the emotional world.
I hope that in the future, there will be someone who can give him unique love to make up for his pale emotions.
Okay, this ends the character review.
Now let's talk about the overall storyline structure.
To be honest, so far, I haven't seen the overall direction of this story clearly. Originally, the original poster just started writing.
So, there's really not much to say about the plot.
One thing I want to say is: when it comes to handling the details of the plot, the poster is too straightforward, which makes me less nervous about reasoning and guessing when reading the article. Although this is not a mystery novel, compared to the poster's previous novels, the plot of "Mu Yu's Sorrow" is too straightforward. If the original poster can make some changes in the plot, this article will gain a lot of points.
The advantage of this article is that it is written in a light and humorous way, making me very happy to read it! This kind of article has great healing power! This advantage must be maintained!
Uh-huh, I turned around suddenly and found that I had said a lot of things! Ha ha!
"Mu Yu's Memories" is just the beginning. Maybe the poster will ask me to see more interesting people and interesting things in the future, so my review ends here, and what I will do in the future is: Cui Wen, Cui Wen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Above
Holding flowers and smiling
Added another flavor to the prescription
Is it just medicine?
"It doesn't mean you won't feel bad if you know he won't die."
As expected, my brother is the best~~~~~~~~I'm so moved
Awkwardness or something... Actually very loving~~ =v=
But if you don't eat all the time, you won't starve to death, right? Didn't you say you won't die no matter what?
Update in the middle of the night! Come and reserve your seat as soon as possible
Before watching, I tried my best to recall the previous plot...
So after reading Feng's settings, I can understand Fufeng's character. There is no confusion, it's very clear~~
By the way, Fufeng's slight concern for Mu Feiyuan shows that he actually still longs for his father's love, right?
He swallowed my reply again, why didn't he spit it out this time...
Su Nuo's blood is really powerful. Which one is the inducement, the sword technique or the evil clan's blood? If this continues, Fufeng won't turn black...
By the way... For some reason, I suddenly thought of grapefruit... T T
Love, love, love!
I really like this article and will continue to read it!
Looking forward to the story of Mu Yu Huaishang and Master Fufeng's real separation, it will definitely surprise people...
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
I almost forgot the previous part, so I went back and read another chapter... = =
Taoism can also give birth to wings~~~handsome
"If it were not affected by certain factors, he should be able to become the strongest."
This factor refers to... Two people sharing a body?
Pretend to be passing by casually... Raise your eyes and look silently... You know what I mean~ drift away...
Come and have a look~ Start reading Wenwen Ah Li, I am the red-skinned cat whose whole body is on fire~ Do you know who I am? Waiting for the red cat to appear, =W=
Smile, one of my great loves in life is reading articles! From the distant classic martial arts era, to innocent romance, and then, very accidentally, into the world of Danmei. From then on, it became even more out of control. And Wu Dan and fan fiction opened up another world of words for me. However, although I often feel something after reading the article, this is the first time I write a serious review. Therefore, sir, Xiaoxiao, I adhere to the principle of writing whatever I think. If there are any objectionable words in my review, please believe that Xiaoxiao's original intention is to hope that your literary talent will further improve by leaps and bounds. . . . . Okay, the preface has made it clear. Now, let's get back to the story itself of "Mu Yu's Sorrow". Let's start from the beginning. Xiaoxiao, I have never had a good grasp of the plot, and I have no sense of it. I am only interested in the characters, because I think the characters are the center of the story, and the joys and sorrows of the characters are the fundamental thing that touches people's hearts. Let's talk about Mu Yu's sadness first. "Mu Yu Huai Shang", first of all, I was abducted by this name. Mu Yu is sad, Mu Yu is sad, it seems that just by murmuring this name, there is a faint sadness, lingering and helpless. Feeling sad and sad, the winding water comes to my heart, and the cup of wine begins! After the hustle and bustle, there is the sadness of the end! Only when we got into the story did we realize that Mu Yu Huaishang was a person, or to be precise, a "god". God of salvation. And God is a ruthless existence, because great love is ruthless, and because if you want to treat all creatures in the world equally, you can only be ruthless. As the saying goes, "The sky is ruthless and treats all creatures as stupid dogs." Therefore, Mu Yu Huaishang is actually very simple. His words and deeds have only one starting point: to save the world. As a god, Mu Yu would never take medicine when he was injured, nor would he take risks for money, nor would he use magic to stay in his residence forever in the autumn colors of falling red leaves for some obsession. Let's put it this way, as a god Mu Yu Huaishang, his life can be grand and his deeds can be great, but as a simple person, his life is actually very simple. If it hadn't been for the accident at birth, Mu Yu's life would have been as simple, direct and boring as you can imagine. Fortunately, there is also Fu Feng. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Although this story is still the beginning, I still feel that Fufeng is the protagonist in this story. I still can't see how this unforgotten memory, this sad memory of the past life will affect this person who carries the sad memories of his previous life. This will be one of the reasons why I pursue the article. I hope the original poster can help me clear up my confusion after reading the article. Fufeng, the current impression is that he is smart and obedient, loves money as much as life, and is an expert in playing pranks. Of course, the sorrow deep in his heart was the original reason for his becoming a demon, right? How can we let go of such suffering? ? ? ? ? And I look forward to the host of the building, taking us together, to accompany Fufeng out of the shackles of painful memories. Although the story of Su Nuo has not yet unfolded, and the character of Su Nuo has not yet been fully formed, there is one thing that makes this character worth looking forward to. The reason is: obsession! The moment I thought of this word, a thought flashed through my mind: Love is obsession! As for Su Nuo, his obsession with Fu Feng will turn into a quagmire as time goes by, sinking him deeply and unable to extricate himself. He is the strategist of the underworld. It is conceivable that he is a wise man, and there is often only a thin line between a wise man and a madman. What kind of impact that sip of divine blood that he accidentally drank will have on him is not shown for now. Just because of his current paranoid obsession with Fufeng due to hatred, it can be foreseen that a shocking entanglement will inevitably happen in the future! What I want to say here is: Even if there is an entanglement, the person is Fu Feng, not Mu Yu Huaishang! Of course, these are my thoughts after reading the article, and others may have other thoughts. And this is also the fun of reading the article, haha. In fact, mourning is worthy of people's sympathy, because it is an extremely sad thing to have a destiny. But, because of one person, I started to be jealous of him This person is Mu Huaiyu. Mu Huaiyu, I don't know what his martial arts and skills are at the moment, but his medical skills are very high. This alone is very interesting. And he is a good brother who cares about his younger brother. Wow, I can't help but feel resentful again: Why does Mao, a man like me who has a good brother, laugh at me but don't laugh at me? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Resentment! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Mu Huaiyu, for his father, he felt more resentment than hatred. He blamed his father for giving up his newborn brother so easily for the so-called justice of the world, and even worse, killed him himself. Or, others would say that this was for the sake of the overall situation, but he was Mu Huaiyu, and he was not noble enough to think that his brother should deserve death, even if it was for the sake of the so-called common people in the world. All life in the world is destiny, isn't his younger brother one of them? Therefore, he resented his father and doted on his younger brother who finally recognized him even more. Because of this unconditional love for my younger brother, I also unconditionally like this character! Mu Huaiyu, in the future, please continue to pamper Mu Yu Huaishang! Long live my good brother! The person I want to talk about now is Zhan Chen! To be honest, I don't really like this character at the moment. I hope my husband-in-law won't slap me when he sees me saying this. Zhan Chen had a trace of inherent jealousy towards Fufeng from the very beginning. He knew very well that he would be accepted as a disciple by Mu Feiyuan, and he would be trained as the future sect leader, just because Mu Feiyuan lost Mu Yu Huaishang, and he was a substitute. But no matter how good the substitute is, he still can't compete with the main figure, and he really can't compete with the main figure. He is very smart, and among the new generation of Taoists, his ability is indeed not bad. However, if you are too proud, even if you are extremely slow to react on the spot, you will make the same mistake again and again, but you will not admit your shortcomings. This is the most hateful thing. But, at the same time, he is also very pitiful. Because he is the future sect master, he has been under much greater pressure since childhood than other Taoists; and the most pitiful thing about him is that he has no childhood, does not understand the joy of games, and does not know how to be naughty and happy with others. The only thing that accompanies him as he grows up is loneliness. Although everyone around him loves him and treats him as the most precious baby. But such love is so far away and so cold. He is jealous of Huai Shang, not only because of Huai Shang's ability, but because there are so many people who dote on Huai Shang unconditionally. He is a poor man in the emotional world. I hope that in the future, there will be someone who can give him unique love to make up for his pale emotions. Okay, this ends the character review. Now let's talk about the overall storyline structure. To be honest, so far, I haven't seen the overall direction of this story clearly. Originally, the original poster just started writing. So, there's really not much to say about the plot. One thing I want to say is: when it comes to handling the details of the plot, the poster is too straightforward, which makes me less nervous about reasoning and guessing when reading the article. Although this is not a mystery novel, compared to the poster's previous novels, the plot of "Mu Yu's Sorrow" is too straightforward. If the original poster can make some changes in the plot, this article will gain a lot of points. The advantage of this article is that it is written in a light and humorous way, making me very happy to read it! This kind of article has great healing power! This advantage must be maintained! Uh-huh, I turned around suddenly and found that I had said a lot of things! Ha ha! "Mu Yu's Memories" is just the beginning. Maybe the poster will ask me to see more interesting people and interesting things in the future, so my review ends here, and what I will do in the future is: Cui Wen, Cui Wen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Above Holding flowers and smiling
Added another flavor to the prescription Is it just medicine?
"It doesn't mean you won't feel bad if you know he won't die." As expected, my brother is the best~~~~~~~~I'm so moved Awkwardness or something... Actually very loving~~ =v= But if you don't eat all the time, you won't starve to death, right? Didn't you say you won't die no matter what?
Update in the middle of the night! Come and reserve your seat as soon as possible
Before watching, I tried my best to recall the previous plot... So after reading Feng's settings, I can understand Fufeng's character. There is no confusion, it's very clear~~ By the way, Fufeng's slight concern for Mu Feiyuan shows that he actually still longs for his father's love, right?
He swallowed my reply again, why didn't he spit it out this time... Su Nuo's blood is really powerful. Which one is the inducement, the sword technique or the evil clan's blood? If this continues, Fufeng won't turn black... By the way... For some reason, I suddenly thought of grapefruit... T T
Love, love, love! I really like this article and will continue to read it! Looking forward to the story of Mu Yu Huaishang and Master Fufeng's real separation, it will definitely surprise people... Come on↖(^ω^)↗
I almost forgot the previous part, so I went back and read another chapter... = = Taoism can also give birth to wings~~~handsome "If it were not affected by certain factors, he should be able to become the strongest." This factor refers to... Two people sharing a body?