After the Ceremony Is Completed

Serious copywriting: I really met my mother Anjia one gloomy afternoon when she was lying on the hospital bed, hoping that I could go to Kerpur to find my long-lost father. Winter was almost over by then, and the shadows in the room ate the dogs, just as I left Anjia. Bad copywriting: (1) Kerpur is a small town built around a circular lake. Because there is only one lake here, the lake is "lake". It has no other meaning, just "lake". (2) Kelpur is also a lake. (3) My mother Anjia passed away. Before she died, she told me that my father was someone from Kerpur and she hoped that I could fulfill her wish. (4) Anjia loves me very much. (5) Kerpel hates me. (6) The dog is not a Kerper. (7) The dog won't love me. (8) Dogs are not dogs. (9) "I" is not me. (10) I am Delaire's friend. (11) I am Su Anna. Intention: Never forget the original intention