[Don't buy this. I've thought about it for a long time, and I've decided to rewrite the entire story. I'll do my best to make it good. I'm sorry. - 2024.03.21]
Kind and gentle nobleman's daughter x spirited young general
Reserved girl x straightforward boy / mutual pining / marriage first, love later
Blurb:
Wen Fusang, the only daughter of the current prime minister, was frail and sickly from birth. She spent her childhood recuperating at a temple.
In the nineteenth year of Changyong, twelve-year-old Wen Fusang met a young man in the hills behind the temple.
The boy danced with his sword beneath falling petals, his movements free and audacious.
Wen Fusang watched for a long time from behind a stone wall, until someone came to call him.
She fled down the only path leading away from the hills, her heart pounding.
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In the twenty-second year of Changyong, Wen Fusang returned to the capital at fifteen.
By coincidence, on that very day, the valiant young General Xiao returned victorious, having expanded the empire's borders.
To celebrate the peace, the emperor hosted a banquet.
Amid the clinking of cups, everyone learned that there was another reason for the celebration: the emperor intended to arrange a marriage for the young General Xiao.
The young general was frank and direct. He said he already had someone in his heart and would give his answer to the imperial marriage decree in a few days.
Over the next few days, the daughters of the capital's noble families flocked to the Marquis of Annan's residence, bringing poems and essays and filling the air with song and laughter.
No one expected the chosen bride to be the prime minister's daughter, who had only just returned to the capital.
Later, people often saw him like this:
General Xiao, who could face ten enemies alone on the battlefield and lord it over all others, would lower his head in front of his wife and softly say something to soothe her.
The woman in his arms, who had just applied medicine to his wounds, would blush and kiss him of her own accord.
Then General Xiao would laugh without the slightest restraint.
Only then did everyone realize that the "person in his heart" he'd spoken of that day was no excuse.
Unlike three years ago, when only the Buddha knew:
The young man with a sword had lingered outside the temple for a long time, his gaze fixed on the girl beside the Buddha statue, bent over her desk copying scriptures.
He had heard she went to the hills every day to study medical texts, so that day, he went ahead of her.
Theme: Keep your family safe, but also protect your country
Finished reading. It gives me a very warm and beautiful feeling of a long time. It may not focus on writing strategies or anything, but it also seems to give people a very relaxed atmosphere "to accompany you through the long time." I just started reading this book this morning. I was watching the video and saw the introduction of someone else's tweet, and I thought it would be a very heartwarming story. However, it is indeed the case. Then I clicked on Jinjiang and saw that the author said that he wanted to rewrite it, and then I read it with the slightest suspicion. After reading it, I actually think I don't need it. Maybe, after rewriting it many times, I suddenly feel that the story at the beginning is still the best! My favorite sentence is "The flowers in the mountains are already blooming, it's too late to see you happy". ------Xiao Xin stayed in the evening of July 19, 2024.
The relationship between boys and girls is so beautiful
I have read it very carefully. The author's writing style is quite good. The description of the environment and the transitional paragraphs are very delicate. However, I also have some personal suggestions. I personally think that if you just watch the sweet love and not the plot, there will be no problem. Some places should be written with a little more pen and ink. For example, when Fusang got married and his brother carried him out, I read it several times before I understood it; then when the prince rebelled, he simply said that the louder the noise, the better, but later he did not write down what happened clearly; and in the first year of Zhiyang, the new emperor asked Xiao Jihe to lead troops to fight, but it was not clearly written, and when Fusang became a doctor, he did not explain why there were suddenly so many patients... After all, it is a novel. In addition to the sweet romance lines, the overall plot should also need more writing. It is just a personal suggestion. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.
Secret love recordhhhh
Can you drive a lot during the extravaganza? The text is very well written, but a bit unclear. People who love each other should have sex as soon as possible.
After raising it for a few days... The main text is finished, and the extras are out...
Ahhhhh, it's over, don't do it!
"No" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
The extra is so beautiful
It's so exciting to me. It's so romantic to be together for the rest of your life.