An Island from the Start [Apocalypse]

The settings are imperfect, and there are many and obvious loopholes. You can't read it with your mind. The game world can still be fooled, but the real world makes me feel that it is not "realistic", especially the author's foreshadowing of how harsh the real world is compared to the game world. When I come out and look at it, oh well, I brought a lot of supplies and cheats, but even a person can survive. This is nothing. I don't know how the author positioned the heroine's character, but after reading the whole story, I feel that the author wants to write a heroine who is self-reliant and self-reliant. However, it may be that the author's own core does not yet have this trait, so I feel that the heroine is a delicate type, but because of the stack of lucky buffs and the weak supporting characters, the "strong" feeling is very abrupt. Finally, I had a heart attack after watching the extra episode! [Split]

How to put it this way, at first I thought Luo Ze would be the male protagonist, but I was a little resistant and felt that Mianmian was not enlightened. I don't like my younger brother. Later, I said that the male protagonist was Wei Yue, which I thought was good. At least he was very strong and his character was more CP-like. However, in the extra story, the interaction between the two of them was just a little bit, which meant that there was no interaction at all. It was not as good as Sunshine. I can only say that I really like the survival part at the beginning. I can't write the ambiguous interaction between men and women without writing it. Such a sudden cp is a bit strange.

I won't talk about it before, but why is this episode written like this? The description of the fight against the mouse is a bit too spoiled, and the description of Wei Yue coming down is too similar to those of romance heroines and male protagonists. I can even make up the lines in my head. At that moment, he was like a god. I really I'm convinced, even if the feeling is too strong, Wei Yue's combat power is great, and the heroine is indeed not as good as him, but there is no need to create a scene where the hero comes to save the heroine. Even if the heroine can't defeat so many mice by herself, why can't it be written as a story of fighting side by side, and why there is a scene where the hero saves the heroine?

This emotional line is really real. . . . It's hard to describe in one word. . . .

If you don't know how to write emotional lines, can't you write without cp? This emotional line is too far-fetched.

? The author seems really not good at writing emotional dramas

The male protagonist used to be Luo Ze. Has it been changed to Wei Yue now?

I took the wrong CP. . . .

All readers, please share your thoughts: 1. I am still very satisfied with the main content and read it all night long. The connection between the last few pictures is not good enough 2. Personality The hostess is pretty good, she's not a virgin, she only cares about herself the whole time and occasionally helps others. What feels unreasonable: The men are written a little too kindly. If I were them, they would not be nice to a woman for no reason, not to mention deliberately messing with the heroine, and they would be on guard. Another thing that makes readers unhappy is that the heroine has always been on guard against Wei Yue, but Wei Yueduo turned a blind eye and fell in love with the heroine. It's a bit magical, and it seems that such a powerful person falls in love for no reason. It's very strange! I guess some of the turning points are not smooth enough, so they appear rather abrupt! Just watch it without CP! Overall, the author's writing is very good! Continue to support! If you like desert island farming stories, you can probably write about farming. It feels more enjoyable than fishing for treasure chests.

It's good. I like Wei Yue as the male protagonist. He is so strong but willing to give in to the female protagonist. It would be nice to complete this CP in the extras.