Riding the Clouds Up to Ninety Thousand Li

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I stayed up for several long nights and finished reading Fuyun in one go. I can feel that the author's wife put a lot of thought into writing this article. After reading many novels about "using characters" to fall in love, I can even feel that it is not easy for Mr. Zhao and Mr. Li to understand each other. The broken mirror part of the novel is my personal favorite part. I saw in the essay that my wife said that she had read the first few chapters to the editor, but the editor felt that Yuan Mei was not a likable character. But I think if there was no 17-year-old Jinshi Zhao Yuan, I would not necessarily be interested in reading the 30-year-old Zhao Yuan, just because the 17-year-old Zhao Yuan is so real and powerful, so sincere and brave, but a bit presumptuous. Maybe Yuan Mei would think that she would be an ordinary person without meeting Li Pingyun, but in fact, before meeting Li Pingyun, there was a fire in her heart, and people passing by could only see smoke. After Li Pingyun set fire to the boat on the river, the fire only burned more intensely. Yuan Mei even dreamed that she burned Li Pingyun's boat. Yuan Mei's fearless spirit and determination to bend rather than bend make her so unique in the whole story. Li Pingyun influenced her, but it cannot be said that Li Pingyun shaped her. She has always followed her own heart, and even if she encounters changes later, the fire in her heart has never been extinguished. Although the part of the story about Taihe Squadron is not too long in the whole story, it does accurately outline the characters of everyone. When reading that part, I could feel that Li Pingyun was making a big plot, but I didn't care, because I could clearly see Yuan Mei running for her heart in it. As she walked away, she discovered the talented young man Gao Cheng, founded a school, and was imprisoned in Prince Jin's Mansion on a hunger strike but still refused to give in. As Liu Lin said later, Li Pingyun had been dormant beside Prince Jin for three years without finding the right opportunity. Yuan Mei only came here a few months ago, and Yuan Mei has always been the sole core of the entire story. Relatively speaking, I didn't like the second half that much, especially when it ended with the reveal that Li Pingyun was the chess player. Maybe I still prefer stories where chance is mixed with necessity. This kind of ending is not bad, but it always feels like it lacks a sense of natural ingenuity. But because I really like Yuan Mei so much, I am willing to accompany her to the end of this story. There is actually a lot more I want to say about this story, but I am also naturally stupid and have no literary talent, so I will just write it here. In short, I am very grateful to my wife for bringing this story. I can still see such lovely Mr. Zhao and everyone in the assembly line production. I think I will miss my time in Taihe County forever. I hope everything goes well for my wife and she lives a happy life.

Everyone in the world is suffering, especially women. To reiterate, it's not because I can only write about gender issues, but because I only see this and I can only write about what I see. In many previous chapters, I have commented on Zhao Yuan to some extent. She is the only soul character in this book, the only one. Zhao Yuan is not a Jinshi, but a top scholar. What was she thinking when she knew that she was clearly number one, but was asked by a group of male officials headed by her father to cancel her results? Proud? At a loss? Disappointed? If the father was willing to let his daughter suffer out of power considerations and to prevent the queen from worrying about the great achievements of the Zhao family, then did the other ministers think so too? I am afraid that everyone would like to step on Zhao Yuan so hard that she will never be able to get ahead. "It's ridiculous, a woman can actually take the first place in the exam!" However, in that situation, no matter what the reason was, it was the Queen who defended her. It was the Queen who fought against all the scholars, fought against all opinions, and protected her in front of all the male ministers. She saved the country's only female Jinshi. In a family environment that favors sons over daughters, Zhao Yuan did not receive much maternal love. Therefore, when Li Pingyun deliberately used strange powers to confuse the gods and set up a Taoist priest to tell Zhao Yuan's birth date and the Queen's daughter, would the emperor really take it seriously? I'm afraid Zhao Yuan is the only one who really takes her seriously. She really regards the Queen as her mother, so the jealous emperor's heart will be moved by the true feelings and spare Zhao Yuan's life every time. Here I briefly insert Li Pingyun to highlight Zhao Yuan's nobility. Li Pingyun was a pariah. After the Queen found out about his identity, she did not punish him for the crime of deceiving the emperor. Instead, she gave him a smooth road. Later, he helped his political opponents plot rebellion. This was disloyal and unjust. In stark contrast, Zhao Yuan was also favored by the Queen. She was assassinated by the Queen as many times as Li Pingyun. She escaped death many times. Did she hate the Queen? Yes. But she never thought about betraying the queen, she was loyal to the emperor and supported the country, and her loyalty and righteousness remained unchanged. This is the highest state of a civil servant. At that time, the King of Jin regarded Li Pingyun as his confidant, but he still received orders to collect evidence to bring down the King of Jin, bring down the Queen, and bring down Liu Jie who became the emperor. If the king is unkind, he will be deposed. What did Zhao Yuan do? She tried every possible means to convince herself with weak excuses that betrayal would be a dead end and she could only follow the queen, but in fact she could live well if she surrendered to the enemy. When Liu Jie became emperor later, even though Zhao Yuan was asked to die repeatedly, she never had any thoughts of rebellion, but calmly accepted her fate. With such an innocent heart, if the king wants his ministers to die, they must die. The king is the law of the country. She has been in charge of the Ministry of Punishment for ten years, and the law has penetrated into her bones. If her law wants her to die, she will die resolutely. The King of Jin allowed the powerful to annex the land, harm the people, disrupt the imperial examinations, and despise the law. When Li Pingyun was the county magistrate, he ignored it and did nothing. He just watched and planned indifferently. The 17-year-old Zhao Yuan, with her lonesome courage, directly stood up to oppose, uphold national laws and protect the old, weak, women and children. She was almost assassinated, burned to death and starved to death, but she never regretted it. The plot at the beginning of this book is very exciting. It is coherent and soul-stirring. It made my heart skip a beat and made me stay up late for a long time. The ending always gave me a feeling of being left hanging but unable to finish. It was so different from the previous plot setting and rhythm, which made me wonder whether the author did not follow the outline, or the writing time was too long. Other ideas came up during the creation process, and I had to follow the soul of the characters in the pen to let them release freely. I was very surprised when I first read this book, especially the front and middle sections. The story is complete, the characters are reasonable and three-dimensional, the suspense and foreshadowing complement each other, the climax and transition are well-organized, and the plot can be unfolded freely, which is better than "*Mountain". Every time I see the end of a small climax in the middle section, I can't help but wonder if the story is going to stop here, beautiful and complete. But the author continued to write. Some plots were too deliberate, and there was not enough foreshadowing. The characters' actions seemed abrupt, and there was no way to echo them back and forth. Some plots do not have to be forced to be continued. Just leave them blank for readers to imagine. For example, all powerful things happen to Jiang Huaihai, and every plan is Li Pingyun's calculation. The calculation of friendship, calculation of kindness, and calculation of love, I felt at the beginning The wonderful thing is different - I thought it was the wonderful arrangement of fate that made them meet and create sparks. Everyone is a small fish in the sea of fate, wandering and involuntarily, but in such a difficult process, they still support each other and share weal and woe. It gets weirder towards the end, and the characters become more and more stereotyped, like the two sides of a playing card, either flipping over to the front or the back, or the ending is too hasty, and many things are not explained clearly. I'm thinking about whether it's because I keep posting long comments in the middle, or because I'm too talkative, which interferes with the author's normal creation. The author was unwavering on Weibo, saying that he would not be affected by readers. I thought that the author really would not be affected by readers, so I boldly opened the microphone. If this is the case, I'm sorry. It would be better for me not to say anything in the future. I will take this as a warning and I will never do it again in the future. Creation is a very difficult thing. The author has done a great job in writing this story well. It is a very lovely story and a very lovely author. In the future, whether in life or work, it will definitely get better and better. I hope you won't be affected by bad things in the future. Health is 1, and everything else is 0. Nowadays, everyone has some physical problems, so you must take care of yourself. You can take a break for a while, let yourself stop and think, and take care.

After reading it, I finally finished it! I read it all day today. I cried, got angry, and was amused. I still feel unsatisfied after reading it. My wife wrote a very different book. I am very grateful to the teacher for writing this story!

Why is Cui Yiwen's plot in these chapters so awesome...

Grateful for meeting. Grateful to Mr. Li and Mr. Zhao. Grateful to Mr. Tian. Little Beet. Zhao Shisan...

According to this timeline, the people in Taihe's team actually knew that Li Pingyun was still alive, but no one told Yuan Mei... God, I always feel that they are not worthy of Yuan Mei's sincere heart.

Like this article very much. It's finally finished. Thank you to the author and everyone in the article. May good articles always remain.

Help! The plot is cut off by two chapters, I really want to read it! Can the author post the locked articles on Weibo?

The male protagonist is too stubborn. If the male protagonist is not willing to give in to the female protagonist and is not on the opposite side, they would have been together for a long time. The male protagonist is really alone and has a vicious mouth. He will be hostile to the female protagonist when she opens her mouth. [Covers face and laughs and cries]