I just want to ask if you gave up on the Wasteland Farming book? Why did you start a new one?
The introduction within the background rules is a bit confusing. In fact, for such a complete worldview, it is best to introduce it systematically, which is more intuitive and immersive. For example, you can have a separate chapter of background introduction, or you can introduce it in a text. It is interspersed in the plot like this, which is not easy to understand and is not explained. It is intermittent and affects the smoothness of the story. Moreover, some descriptions are easy to be repeated, making it a bit wordy.
Collect it first! Get fat!
This is really a cp-free article, the male protagonist portrays a feeling of repulsion
I just want to ask if you gave up on the Wasteland Farming book? Why did you start a new one?
The introduction within the background rules is a bit confusing. In fact, for such a complete worldview, it is best to introduce it systematically, which is more intuitive and immersive. For example, you can have a separate chapter of background introduction, or you can introduce it in a text. It is interspersed in the plot like this, which is not easy to understand and is not explained. It is intermittent and affects the smoothness of the story. Moreover, some descriptions are easy to be repeated, making it a bit wordy.
Collect it first! Get fat!
This is really a cp-free article, the male protagonist portrays a feeling of repulsion