
Forbidden Bonds: Oreo
禁缘,奥利奥
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 102k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
34Chapters
411Favorites
5.2kClicks per chapter
173Comments
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This kind of man is too perverted. Shadow, how did you write such a man?
Why is the book named Oreo?
It's so painful to watch. Why can't the heroine be reborn? Or did Da DaDa have no intention of bringing the heroine back to life?
I like v much Pls dnt give up
Duoduo abuses the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is so pitiful, -.-Thank you so much, you are so beautiful
Shadow, I'm sorry, I'm not feeling well today. I typed out the previous article and sent it out. I originally planned to continue writing Mid-Autumn Festival comments to you, but now I still have to take medicine and sleep. I am very ashamed of myself for breaking my promise. Will make up for it later.
I can say that the author's writing is very good, because after reading this article, I wanted to kill the two male protagonists with a kitchen knife, especially Wuyun, who caused at least four people lifelong pain because of his selfish thoughts. To be honest, I really wanted to report it when I was halfway through it, because I felt that reading too much of this article would fill me with negative emotions. I wanted to kill the heroine to help her escape, the male protagonist to help the heroine escape, and the author to relieve myself. In the end, it turned into a violent emotion that could kill all the characters I saw in the article. = =Well, I always think that good writing is good writing, good conception, and good direction, that is to say, writing is smooth, novel and unique in conception, and can stimulate my positive emotions. However, this article made me feel that the writing is good, the conception is unique, but the direction makes me very painful. It's not that you can't be NP. In fact, there are many female NPs. Although sometimes you feel a little off-putting, it's not unacceptable. It's not that you can't have brothers with one daughter. In fact, if you look at Danmei, it's full of brothers, father and son, juniors, etc. However, in this novel, the love between these two brothers for the heroine, although the author talks about it to gain warmth, but it may not be detailed and in-depth enough to make people feel that it is not very deep, so there is a sense that these two people just catch a person who is pleasing to the eye. The woman is perverted and refuses to let go. Of course, it may also be because the writing has not reached a certain stage and cannot be seen; in addition, although the two brothers are orphans, they have been in society for many years and should not understand a little bit of moral concepts. Even if they don't care, they should at least understand that ordinary women will mind. Since Wu Feng can be gentle and considerate to the heroine at the beginning, why can't the two of them carry out this method thoroughly to the end? In this way, even if the heroine is entangled in her heart, it may not turn out to be like this. In this tragedy, even if Wuyun is a bit violent, but judging from the writing, he should be a sinister type. He should know that boiling frogs in warm water is more effective than violent methods. It feels like this kind of character is set up for torture, but I think it is a bit paranoid. It's not realistic enough. Although this is a novel, I think the character development is closer to reality and more acceptable. Furthermore, I feel that Wuyun's character seems to be evil, but what he does is really self-abuse and abuse of others, and he doesn't bring any harm to himself. There are no benefits, let's not count the physical benefits. Wufeng's struggle is more real, but does Wufeng really love the heroine? If he really loves the heroine, even if he loves his brother equally, he shouldn't do a physical and mental double blow to the heroine, but he is It doesn't seem to be pure sadism. I feel that the characters of this pair of male protagonists are as tangled and twisted as twists. When I watched it, I felt that my stomach was also so tangled and twisted, ORZ; finally, I also think that amnesia is used more widely... In fact, I wanted to stop reading after writing this review, because after reading it, I always felt irritable in my heart, and I had to comfort myself. Life is so beautiful, but I am so irritable and calm, but I must express my gratitude to the author for his efforts. However, my thinking was very messy. I could only write down what I thought of, and then quickly get rid of the thought of killing people╮(╯_╰)╭ Finally, I hope the number of words is enough. If not, my eggs will break, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
When will you slap your claws and retaliate?
I'm going crazy, how could this happen? Why do men and women always like to lose their memory as long as they are the protagonist? Or is this the golden rule for protagonists? Didn't Wuyun say he wanted to share the heroine with his brother? Why was he jealous of his brother again? By the way, this male protagonist is really hard to like! Sir, how about you change the male lead? (You're joking, don't take it seriously)
Who is the male protagonist? ? I'm confused. In fact, I don't even know whether this is torturing the heroine for the sake of torturing her or for the sake of torturing her. It feels like falling in love and killing each other. It makes me so sad to see it.