Forced to Become Everyone's Dream Girl [Female Omega]

Author, are you writing a stream of consciousness~emmm, I feel that your mental state is a bit tense. You have something you want to express, but the focus of the writing is not very clear. As a novel, it still needs to be story-telling. Too much expression of consciousness will make it difficult for people to understand what you want to express. Your thoughts and emotions should rely on the development of the plot, rather than a too-large... Confession? (Personal thoughts or talking to oneself are fine, and I often do this.) But as a novel, this way of expression is very streamlined. If you read the second half of the article yourself, you will find that the development of your plot is very slow. Most of the space is used to express your own consciousness. It is not like a novel but more like an emotional expression. Too many emotional descriptions will make people tired. People can actually feel your emotional tone. Just click to the end. Too much will make you tired ( Not a criticism, just a suggestion) The previous plot is very specific and I like it very much. To be honest, all the characters are actually people with emotional disorders, including the heroine. This was very attractive to me at first (I also have this tendency). But since the heroine was taken away, the plot has a feeling of being all over the place. In some plots, it feels like the author has some thoughts. An attempt to make flowers bloom from rotten flesh, but for some reason there is an uncomfortable feeling. There are only rotten flesh without flowers (personal feeling, you don't need to read it). The author sincerely recommends that you think about the second half carefully and make the plot more specific and smooth. Otherwise, if it drags on for too long, you may not even know what you want to write (writing this It's easy to exceed the word count when writing something, because when you write, your thoughts will continue to diverge, and you will want to write more and more, and it is very easy to go off track. You still need a backbone, otherwise you may not know what you are doing when you read it after you finish writing.) Personal advice, I have been following it to the end, but I am really tired from watching the current plot qaq

I remembered an article I read by another wife before. The focus was on the emotional issues between parents and their children. After children are raised uniformly by the society, children from potentially poor original families will be improved and upward. But what if the family is relatively happy and the children are expected to do so? If it is decided on a case-by-case basis whether to hand it over to public institutions, how to specify the standards, and the subsequent allocation of social resources, and how the two groups of people get along... Are all problems.

My favorite is Nishizawa. Although he is not strong enough, he is mentally stable and very cute.

Hey, my original intention was to jump to the back to see who the male protagonist was, so I didn't want to buy the wrong stock, but the ending, whether it was the main ending or the extra ending, left me with a lump in my throat. Because I came here to read an ordinary romance novel. No matter how it develops in the middle, it will be he in the end (I will leave automatically because the author will tell me). But in the end, the ending is the same as if it was not written.

After seeing this, according to my own taste, I give it eight points. I rarely read this kind of cyberpunk style of writing. Rather than saying it is a refreshing article, I think it is more like a philosophical article. The author's literary skills are very solid and his world view is vast. I personally would like to review it again. I'm looking forward to the sequel!

108, Changed the end. 109 Was rejected and rewritten. You can read it again, and then start writing the final chapter when you have time to finish the revisions. Then update every day in one go, and it's over! Throw flowers!

Read them all! Let me tell you my subjective opinion! In fact, I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, and it was a pity that I ended it here. I have been reading this book for a long time, and I feel that I could write more about the heroine's highlight moments, although I don't know why the author finished it so quickly. I think the Archon must die. In fact, he doesn't even need to be resurrected. It's a bit disgusting. What he did is really disgusting, so it's a bit uncomfortable to say that he and his brother are the same person later. If he was more ruthless, he should be so willful that his soul will be annihilated in the writing. It's a pity. As for the solo show of the heroine later, the author did not talk about why the doppelgänger appeared? And the way to seize the government is still a little bit lacking. This makes me a little regretful that the shaping of the male protagonist seems to be more complete, but the heroine is still a bit inferior, but I have to say that the heroine is likeable. After watching it, I will be more impressed by the former consul. He is more ruthless and has no sympathy. Emotions, moral sense, etc., This is also the extreme that interstellar society is heading towards, but the heroine's mother is not treated well enough. Even when it comes to using her personal will to overthrow the alliance, it is still unsatisfactory when it comes to war. For example, the analysis of her insect mother ability. With this ability, of course she is killed and given a long plot of Long Aotian! There are still a few details about the establishment of the Free Alliance, whether ideal or practical. If I expand on this section, I think it will be more complete. Overall, this book is very good! (Compared to love, I would rather see the heroine killing each other hhhhhhhh) When the author was writing the book, I actually felt that he didn't need to take many of the readers' opinions into consideration. I don't know when I started reading books here, but it felt like everyone always liked to give pointers and then quarreled. Looking forward to your next book^ω^

When I saw this, I had the feeling that the character Shushu came to life and became a living person.

I like Nishizawa's 5555 the most

I can't come to my senses. Caesar is dead, and Ea is dead. I thought Ea and Phaethon were equally matched opponents, haha. Although I thought that the Gnostics and Phaethon were similar before, it turned out not to be the case. Haha, maybe because I didn't mention it? I just have a vague idea of ​​the heroine's purpose (it was to survive at the beginning, right?). Another point is that the heroine's emotions don't seem to fluctuate much. Is this the setting? Whether it is the death of Caesar or Ea, or the identity of Phaethon, it feels like there is a layer of barrier between the heroine and the readers. I cannot feel her emotions, or in fact she is not moved at all (tears)