A Condor Heroes fanfiction... Two transmigrators secretly compete: one is Guo Fu's twin sister, and the other is Guo Fu herself. Let's see which of these two transmigrated heroines will have the last laugh.
First, a warning: this story has two potential pitfalls.
First, the main supporting character, Guo Fu, can walk before she's even a year old. That's because she's modeled after the usual transmigrated heroines, and I deliberately exaggerated a bit to contrast the two heroines.
Second, the heroine has a space bracelet. Yes, I know that's a pitfall, but I don't want to change it because I really want to write a plot like this. Anyway, this story is free, so I'll write what I want. If you like it, read it. If you don't, feel free to give it a negative rating. I'm not changing it. I know it's a big pitfall, but I really want to write it this way.
Also, my grasp of history is poor, so I often get people and events mixed up. This was the first story I wrote as an author. Looking back now, there are many immature parts that are hard to explain logically. The heroine even tends to be self-important and a bit of a Mary Sue. Back then, I just loved the protagonist I'd created so much that I couldn't help giving her cheat after cheat, and in the end she became a Mary Sue~ But honestly, I have no interest in revising it, so I'll leave it as proof of my youthful impetuosity.
Some readers have complained that things go too smoothly for the heroine and aren't happy with how the plot is arranged. Well, I admit this story has plenty of flaws. For example, Guo Fu's characterization is very immature, and she never develops into a consistent, fully realized character. Because I pampered the heroine too much, she ended up hardly any different from the kind of transmigrator I dislike...
All I can say is that writing this story taught me how difficult writing can be, and also changed my attitude a lot. Maybe everyone has a Mary Sue inside them? (Laughs)
Looking back, I couldn't see my own flaws and shortcomings back then, and sometimes I was too proud to admit them. As a result, I missed out on many readers who had left sincere comments. Now I feel ashamed and regretful.
Later, I signed a contract with another site and locked the story as a result. I checked the contract afterward and found that this story had been written before I signed, so the copyright should belong to me alone. After all these years, I've unlocked it again. Believe me, that took a lot of courage. Seeing my immature writing, I honestly wish I could erase all trace of it...
So... I'm not expecting anything from unlocking it again. I just hope it gives you a laugh~ If this story annoys you and you want to curse me out, go ahead. If you want to give it a negative rating, don't feel awkward about it either. I may not reply to comments, but I will read every response carefully.
Lastly, since I wrote this before signing a contract, it's marked as a regular publication. Please enjoy it with an open mind.
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After reading it, it's really good. The article I wrote 8 years ago still doesn't feel outdated when I read it 8 years later. The female supporting character, the time-travelling girl Guo Fu, is the completely self-righteous heroine in the current mainstream time-traveling novels. She is severely criticized in this article. The ending given by the author is not a clichéd disfigurement, useless martial arts, and cripple, but a reasonable and generous ending. The heroine Guo Mi has been mentally invincible from the beginning. This is very comfortable and makes you feel that you are reading a cool novel, but it is not a brainless and logical novel. You can clearly see the growth of the heroine, but because she has established herself mentally, it makes you feel that no matter how big the problem is, it is not a problem. Instead, you look forward to her solution. This is actually very The idea of a good novel is good. Many novels only focus on the pleasure of slaps in the face, and deliberately arrange catastrophes to slap the face, but the author often fails to understand the point. After arranging the disaster, the protagonist is confused and feels very miserable. You want to abandon the article before she is slapped in the face. This is not the case. The heroine has a plan in mind. No matter how disgusting things happen, you will not be so upset that you don't want to read it. Long Guo CP was dismantled, but Little Dragon Girl had a very good ending, and the man who arranged it was also very good, so I don't regret it at all. The only thing I don't like about this article is the traditional Chinese characters that pop up occasionally, and all the quotation marks are not in quotation marks. I have to use the [] symbol. But this should be a local-specific writing habit. I simply turned on automatic reading and played other games while listening, which also reduced the impact. All in all, I think this article is worth reading. A good article that is timeless.
Don't like this kind of extra!
Pure martial arts, what kind of hooks are involved? My lord, you are not in a sadomasochistic relationship.
Even if Guo Fu was living in the streets, she would die without a burial place if she offended someone she shouldn't have offended.
It is better than writing about her falling into a brothel and being humiliated.
Women are inherently weak, but the writers always like to express the misery of women by being toyed with. The more cruel the story is, the more sharp the plot will be, and it will make people's hearts ache when they read it.
"People must insult themselves, and then others will insult them." Literary creation is often directional. I won't talk about other people's abusive writings that require such plots.
But the whole article has a light Jianghu tone, pure chivalrous tenderness.
It's a pity to give Guo Fu such an ending that seems reasonable but completely destroys the overall feeling of the article.
There are too few emotional scenes between Yang Guo and Guo Qin. Unfortunately, this book feels that Yang Guo's martial arts has been greatly reduced. In the original book, Yang Guo was already a master at a young age. Now that he is practicing the Nine Yin Manual, Yang Guo's talent should actually be stronger than that of the original Yang Guo. After all, the original Yang Guo's martial arts training was not so smooth.
In fact, I think the writing is very good, especially the space bracelet that everyone dislikes. I think I can understand the author's feeling. It is a kind of complex. If I write the article myself, I also want to give my protagonist a space, whether it is to fulfill a dream or whether it is caused by insecurity. Anyway, I like the author's persistence. And I don't think the heroine is a virgin. The only thing I don't like is that the heroine always holds back her hands against the enemy, which can easily cause trouble. But she later changed her mind and there is nothing else. Especially the way she inherited Dongxie's martial arts. I like it very much.
The author feels that he is not suitable for writing about martial arts. He is not grand and too petty.
It's frustrating to watch. It's really frustrating.
Good! Keep up the good work! This article is very realistic. But that bracelet is a bit shocking. Still acceptable.
Guo Fu is already miserable enough, but the extra story makes him even more miserable. Oh, I can't accept it.
Come on, support
Guo Fu has always regarded the world around her as a customs clearance game, and has never truly considered the people around her, including her parents, as her biological parents. Such people are actually just ignorant wolves. You must know that Huang Rong's love for her daughter cannot be overshadowed.
In fact, I am really surprised that you insist on saying that if you integrate into this world, you should treat the parents here as your real parents.
Can you do it? These people who traveled through time are not people without fathers, mothers, relatives and friends. They have a family, people who love her, people she loves. If she lost her memory at first, this might be true, but he is not, he has memories, he has a family, why should he regard Guo Jing and Huang Rong as his real parents? Well, if you say that Huang Rong loves her, he can at most be moved and treat her as a real parent. Just kidding. If it were you, would you? Some adopted people would still look for their biological parents, not to mention that Guo Fu had parents before, and he knew very well who his parents were. Why should he treat others as his parents, and that sister, well, it doesn't even matter. Do they have any relationship apart from the fact that they are both time-traveling women? They are just strangers.
As for what you are talking about, about being superior to others and about changing other people's lives. I said, it's normal for someone else to pass it on to a book that you are familiar with. Could it be that you went through time to live in seclusion? It's impossible. Is there anyone who doesn't change something? Impossible.
Well, I won't comment on her ruining Yeluyan's life or anything, it's a fact. But I want to say that if it harms a woman's life, it is an unforgivable thing, then Yang Guo, Duan Yu, Guo Jing, Xiao Feng, Lu Zhanyuan, Duan Zhengchun, Abbot Xuanci, Wu Yazi. . . Wait
I said, has anyone harmed any woman in her life? ? Is there, is there? Well, maybe Xu Zhu counts as one
Then aren't they all heinous people? I'm a woman too, and I'm very unhappy with how you keep saying that others have harmed a woman's life, and then turn around and like those who also like to harm other people's lives?
Forget it, each person has his own opinion, I'll leave
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Great article! Praise! ! !
After reading it, it's really good. The article I wrote 8 years ago still doesn't feel outdated when I read it 8 years later. The female supporting character, the time-travelling girl Guo Fu, is the completely self-righteous heroine in the current mainstream time-traveling novels. She is severely criticized in this article. The ending given by the author is not a clichéd disfigurement, useless martial arts, and cripple, but a reasonable and generous ending. The heroine Guo Mi has been mentally invincible from the beginning. This is very comfortable and makes you feel that you are reading a cool novel, but it is not a brainless and logical novel. You can clearly see the growth of the heroine, but because she has established herself mentally, it makes you feel that no matter how big the problem is, it is not a problem. Instead, you look forward to her solution. This is actually very The idea of a good novel is good. Many novels only focus on the pleasure of slaps in the face, and deliberately arrange catastrophes to slap the face, but the author often fails to understand the point. After arranging the disaster, the protagonist is confused and feels very miserable. You want to abandon the article before she is slapped in the face. This is not the case. The heroine has a plan in mind. No matter how disgusting things happen, you will not be so upset that you don't want to read it. Long Guo CP was dismantled, but Little Dragon Girl had a very good ending, and the man who arranged it was also very good, so I don't regret it at all. The only thing I don't like about this article is the traditional Chinese characters that pop up occasionally, and all the quotation marks are not in quotation marks. I have to use the [] symbol. But this should be a local-specific writing habit. I simply turned on automatic reading and played other games while listening, which also reduced the impact. All in all, I think this article is worth reading. A good article that is timeless.
Don't like this kind of extra! Pure martial arts, what kind of hooks are involved? My lord, you are not in a sadomasochistic relationship. Even if Guo Fu was living in the streets, she would die without a burial place if she offended someone she shouldn't have offended. It is better than writing about her falling into a brothel and being humiliated. Women are inherently weak, but the writers always like to express the misery of women by being toyed with. The more cruel the story is, the more sharp the plot will be, and it will make people's hearts ache when they read it. "People must insult themselves, and then others will insult them." Literary creation is often directional. I won't talk about other people's abusive writings that require such plots. But the whole article has a light Jianghu tone, pure chivalrous tenderness. It's a pity to give Guo Fu such an ending that seems reasonable but completely destroys the overall feeling of the article.
There are too few emotional scenes between Yang Guo and Guo Qin. Unfortunately, this book feels that Yang Guo's martial arts has been greatly reduced. In the original book, Yang Guo was already a master at a young age. Now that he is practicing the Nine Yin Manual, Yang Guo's talent should actually be stronger than that of the original Yang Guo. After all, the original Yang Guo's martial arts training was not so smooth.
In fact, I think the writing is very good, especially the space bracelet that everyone dislikes. I think I can understand the author's feeling. It is a kind of complex. If I write the article myself, I also want to give my protagonist a space, whether it is to fulfill a dream or whether it is caused by insecurity. Anyway, I like the author's persistence. And I don't think the heroine is a virgin. The only thing I don't like is that the heroine always holds back her hands against the enemy, which can easily cause trouble. But she later changed her mind and there is nothing else. Especially the way she inherited Dongxie's martial arts. I like it very much.
The author feels that he is not suitable for writing about martial arts. He is not grand and too petty. It's frustrating to watch. It's really frustrating.
Good! Keep up the good work! This article is very realistic. But that bracelet is a bit shocking. Still acceptable.
Guo Fu is already miserable enough, but the extra story makes him even more miserable. Oh, I can't accept it.
Come on, support
Guo Fu has always regarded the world around her as a customs clearance game, and has never truly considered the people around her, including her parents, as her biological parents. Such people are actually just ignorant wolves. You must know that Huang Rong's love for her daughter cannot be overshadowed. In fact, I am really surprised that you insist on saying that if you integrate into this world, you should treat the parents here as your real parents. Can you do it? These people who traveled through time are not people without fathers, mothers, relatives and friends. They have a family, people who love her, people she loves. If she lost her memory at first, this might be true, but he is not, he has memories, he has a family, why should he regard Guo Jing and Huang Rong as his real parents? Well, if you say that Huang Rong loves her, he can at most be moved and treat her as a real parent. Just kidding. If it were you, would you? Some adopted people would still look for their biological parents, not to mention that Guo Fu had parents before, and he knew very well who his parents were. Why should he treat others as his parents, and that sister, well, it doesn't even matter. Do they have any relationship apart from the fact that they are both time-traveling women? They are just strangers. As for what you are talking about, about being superior to others and about changing other people's lives. I said, it's normal for someone else to pass it on to a book that you are familiar with. Could it be that you went through time to live in seclusion? It's impossible. Is there anyone who doesn't change something? Impossible. Well, I won't comment on her ruining Yeluyan's life or anything, it's a fact. But I want to say that if it harms a woman's life, it is an unforgivable thing, then Yang Guo, Duan Yu, Guo Jing, Xiao Feng, Lu Zhanyuan, Duan Zhengchun, Abbot Xuanci, Wu Yazi. . . Wait I said, has anyone harmed any woman in her life? ? Is there, is there? Well, maybe Xu Zhu counts as one Then aren't they all heinous people? I'm a woman too, and I'm very unhappy with how you keep saying that others have harmed a woman's life, and then turn around and like those who also like to harm other people's lives? Forget it, each person has his own opinion, I'll leave