Shendiao fan fiction... Two time travelers secretly compete, one is Guo Fu's twin sister, and the other is Guo Fu. Two time-travel heroines, see who can have the last laugh.
As written earlier, this article has two minefields:
First, the first female supporting character, Guo Fu, can walk when she is less than one year old. This is because Guo Fu imitates the routines of many time-traveling heroines. It is also deliberately exaggerated to compare the two heroines.
Second, the heroine has a space bracelet. Well, I know this is weird, but I don't want to change it, because I just want to write such a plot. Anyway, there is no charge for this article, so I can write it however I like. If you like it, just take a look. If you don't, you can give it negative points. Anyway, it won't be changed. Even though I know it's ridiculous, I just wanted to write it like this.
Also, I have a bad history, so there are a lot of false things happening. This article is the first article I wrote as an author. Looking back now, there are many immature and difficult to justify things. Even the heroine has a tendency to be self-righteous and Mary Sue. At that time, it was just because she loved the protagonist she created, so she couldn't help but cheat here and there, and finally got over it~ However, I really have no interest in changing the article, so I will keep it as evidence of my youth and frivolity.
Some readers were a little bit critical of the heroine's excessive smoothness, and were not satisfied with the plot arrangement. Well, I also admit that this article actually has many shortcomings. For example, Guo Fu's character description is very immature, and she does not have a fixed and mature image. Because of my excessive love and care, the heroine ended up becoming the kind of time traveler I hate...
I can only say that after writing this article, I understand better how difficult writing is, but I have also greatly adjusted my mentality. Maybe there is a Mary Sue in everyone's heart? (Laughing)
But thinking about it now, at that time, because I couldn't see my shortcomings and shortcomings, and sometimes I couldn't lose face, I missed many readers who sincerely left comments. Now that I think about it, I feel very ashamed and regretful.
Later, because I signed a contract with another website, I locked the article. Later, I checked the contract and found that this article was created before signing the contract. The copyright should only belong to me, so I unlocked it again after many years. Believe me, this requires a lot of courage. Looking at my immature writing style, I actually hope that the corpses will be destroyed and all traces will be wiped out...
So... I don't expect anything to unlock it, it's just a smile from Bo Jun~ If you feel uncomfortable reading this article and want to scold me, don't be embarrassed. I won't necessarily reply to the message, but I will definitely read the response carefully.
Finally, because this article was written before signing the contract, it is marked for general publication. Please accept it with ease.
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Reader comments
The corpses of his circus (?) Clowns were really everywhere. Later, when I was walking around the city, I would bump into a bloody hula scene from time to time and find it.
By the way, when will the author resume daily updates? I really like this novel~~~
There are too few emotional scenes between Yang Guo and Guo Qin. Unfortunately, this book feels that Yang Guo's martial arts has been greatly reduced. In the original book, Yang Guo was already a master at a young age. Now that he is practicing the Nine Yin Manual, Yang Guo's talent should actually be stronger than that of the original Yang Guo. After all, the original Yang Guo's martial arts training was not so smooth.
It feels like I've seen a miracle... It's actually changed?
The corpses of his circus (?) Clowns were really everywhere. Later, when I was walking around the city, I would bump into a bloody hula scene from time to time and find it.
By the way, when will the author resume daily updates? I really like this novel~~~
There are too few emotional scenes between Yang Guo and Guo Qin. Unfortunately, this book feels that Yang Guo's martial arts has been greatly reduced. In the original book, Yang Guo was already a master at a young age. Now that he is practicing the Nine Yin Manual, Yang Guo's talent should actually be stronger than that of the original Yang Guo. After all, the original Yang Guo's martial arts training was not so smooth.
It feels like I've seen a miracle... It's actually changed?