
Intimate Lover (Original Version)
亲密爱人(原版)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 44k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
28Chapters
340Favorites
9.2Score
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2.4kClicks per chapter
60Comments
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The original version is also very strange. Shengsheng really... This setting is not too much to have a crematorium in ordinary bloody novels. As a result, the plot of the explosion of the season block is very unreasonable (not to mention the time difference between the phone call explosion and the time when Ji ran over and was not discovered, but Shengsheng did not faint before the explosion, and exploded continuously. I heard the explosion, how could I not feel that there was someone blocking me?), And what happened next, I didn't see him so nervous last time. No matter whether Ji Ai loves him or not, when did he start loving him, if all Shengsheng feels from the beginning to the end is sadness and not being loved, then is this still love? What is the meaning of this love? I saw comments about the revised version saying that Shengsheng has lost even the author's preference. I think that the original version is not actually there (not denying the author's love for the characters). I hope he can be happy in the future.
Goose, natural selection, why is it that the older brother blames the younger brother? When he was still in his mother's womb, he didn't win over his younger brother, so he started to play tricks and hurt others.
I'm really speechless that twins can be so partial.
It's not like he's biological, right?
I still really hate Sheng's family, annoying
Maybe I've realized it before, but I forgot
Suddenly I want to ask, who did Xiao Ji call when climbing the mountain?
Did Ji Tianche cover Shengsheng's ears last winter?
After reading it, I still think the original version is good. The new version seems to have deepened Xiao Ji's feelings for Zheng a little bit. And the new version Xiao Ji knows that Sheng likes him. I feel that the new version is even worse... The old version is very good. I'm a little curious as to why the new version was revised at that time!!
Chen Ziyang is so awesome