I feel like Ming Ming doesn't like crispy apples. After reading two novels, the protagonists don't like crispy apples. Is it true that like mother, like son?
The description of "directly losing a father" is so funny, hh, so in order to avoid tragedy, I have to say this when I see it.
Finished spreading flowers!! I really like this story. I wonder if there will be a sequel?
I would like to give some suggestions. I subjectively feel that there are not enough paragraphs. It would be easier to break it into separate paragraphs, such as dialogues. I read it on the mobile app. Each paragraph is densely packed and looks a bit tiring. In the past, the articles I read had about 30 pages of about 3,000 words, and this chapter only has 20 (I am not a professional, so I give my opinion based on my feelings.)
No, no, don't hide it, his father is so dirty
I feel like Ming Ming doesn't like crispy apples. After reading two novels, the protagonists don't like crispy apples. Is it true that like mother, like son?
The description of "directly losing a father" is so funny, hh, so in order to avoid tragedy, I have to say this when I see it.
Finished spreading flowers!! I really like this story. I wonder if there will be a sequel?
I would like to give some suggestions. I subjectively feel that there are not enough paragraphs. It would be easier to break it into separate paragraphs, such as dialogues. I read it on the mobile app. Each paragraph is densely packed and looks a bit tiring. In the past, the articles I read had about 30 pages of about 3,000 words, and this chapter only has 20 (I am not a professional, so I give my opinion based on my feelings.)