Green Tea Sister's Daily Shura Field [Quick Wear]

OK OK! So happy to hang out and play! (No) I feel like these two will be like each other in the future: Liu Yun screams and picks off Ah Diao's head when they split up, Liu Yun is very disgusted with buying French fries for Ah Diai on Crazy Thursday, Ah Diai happily sneaks into Liu Yun's invention and gets sold (this one doesn't happen!)…

Tied! I would like to give some suggestions to the author. He may be a bit verbose and please give me a pat. I can feel that his writing style continues to improve! It's just that Wenwen's positioning needs to be strengthened a bit. I don't know whether you want to write a story about the protagonist's upgrade, a group portrait, or something more emotional? If the protagonist upgrades, it is recommended to strengthen the shaping of the protagonist. In addition to fighting, you can also write some other plots to highlight the characters of Xiaojun and Senior Sister. It is not just about them being cold and sunny, but it is reflected in their reactions and some details in other events! And giving the protagonist some hobbies or habits can make her more real! As for the group portrait, I feel that the other characters are not very three-dimensional, haha. In addition to Xiaojun's bond with the senior sister, I also want to see their friendship with others. The beautiful friendship is also very touching. Or maybe the two of them met someone interesting and had different reactions, etc. It would be very interesting! As for relationships, I want to see some delicate interactions. What do Xiaojun and the senior sister usually talk about and do, how do they discover that their relationship has crossed the line, how do they get along from the ambiguous period when they are together again, will the cold senior sister be shy, what will Xiaojun do, this kind of Moduo Moduo! Of course, some small bugs are inevitable. For example, Xiaojun sometimes makes mistakes in battle. Teachers and elders will definitely educate him. Here, the protagonist can grow up! Then they can encounter some powerful enemies unexpectedly. After all, growth can only occur under pressure~ Describing Xiaojun's psychological changes will make her more attractive! Then when it comes to fighting, it feels great written in big words! Very graphic! As for the battle plot, it could be more twists and turns, and the twists and turns would make it more exciting~ I also want to see the daily life besides the battle! I have a rough look at it, and I don't think the other members of the protagonist's team remember it very well. I think they need to have a stronger sense of bond to become the next generation of Shrek's Seven Devils. Then again, I really want to know how Xiaojun is moved. I know that the senior sister is her favorite character in the past, but it feels a bit abrupt to see that she likes her after looking at the senior sister. I can write some heart-warming moments before, and then let Xiaojun think a little tangled and hesitate for a while. After all, this is difficult to distinguish. Finally, a critical blow will completely realize that the relationship has deteriorated hehehe! Then will Xiaojun choose to guard silently or take the initiative~ Will the senior sister be slow? What will she think if she finds out? I'm really looking forward to it. Please give it a try and update soon! And in addition to the protagonists in the love plot, other people's foils are also very important! Either choose to assist, or pretend not to know, or joke around, or shout about being abused, or take on the role of being jealous, it all feels interesting! In addition, I want to see the spiritual communication between two people. After all, to make a relationship irreplaceable, in addition to long-term companionship, soul contact is also very important! In short, I have said a lot, and I am a little bit suspicious of writing guidance, but I just hope that such wonderful works can get better and better. I am very sorry if I have offended you! I hope Xiaojun and Senior Sister can be together sweetly and happily! Come on, please update soon! Love you! (Compare your heart)

Why didn't I listen to the advice... Why did I click on this article?

Teacher, please make a side story TT

I actually updated three chapters in a row. The efficiency is really fast this time~

It's HE! Looking forward to the extra episode!

Okay, okay, I can have two styles of knitting😋😋😋♥️

I didn't understand the last paragraph, why is there an extra one? Ghost

The textbook summoner was not found ε=(? O｀)

Throw flowers! ! ! Very good looking, looking forward to the second part

Great! This article has been updated!

Is there a full version of the car on Weibo?

I like this ending the most [Laughing and crying] I hope I can open a separate version [Cat Head]

It's good to have two more books, keep up the good work hahaha That's it

I eat eat eat What! 👆I also want to see pictures, boss, please write quickly

The beauty before the storm

Well done, pull them all away for me!

What I'm saying is, let's take a look at your other book. All the flowers I've been waiting for have faded.

It's still shocking and delicious, and then I'm so happy to finally defect!