The Gold and Silver Manor is one of the four great sects of the martial world. It's said that gold and silver are everywhere there and that it's rolling in wealth. The manor lord, Lu Yunpo, has three sons. The eldest and second sons are both accomplished martial artists, famous throughout the martial world. But the third...
The third young master of the Gold and Silver Manor is named Lu Sansheng. He does nothing all day, sleeps until he wakes naturally, and, if he misses lunch, goes out to buy buns. He wanders the streets every day and sometimes even works as a waiter at the Gold and Silver Restaurant, which his family owns.
Old Master Lu: "..."
Yue Fengtang is a rising star in the martial world, the head of the thriving new sect Phoenix Pavilion. Handsome and peerless, he rules his territory and is held up as a paragon. One day, Yue Fengtang said that his sect had an important matter to attend to and asked the Gold and Silver Manor to send someone to help. He specifically requested Lu Sansheng.
Old Master Lu was overjoyed. That very night, he bundled up his third son and sent him to Pavilion Master Yue, telling him to learn from the man.
Then Lu Sansheng's life at Phoenix Pavilion went like this: sleep until he woke naturally, wander out to buy buns, and work as a waiter at Phoenix Screen Restaurant, which Phoenix Pavilion owned.
Old Master Lu: "..."
Forget it, I don't want this son anymore. Phoenix Pavilion, you can keep him!
Yue Fengtang: Great, great! I'll keep him for life. Father-in-law, please accept this son-in-law's bow!
Old Master Lu: "..."
Theme: You don't have to be ambitious, but you must be kind and sincere.
Dear author, the idiom "" in the first chapter was used incorrectly. It originally meant to give alms and support to others, and cannot be used to describe spending money to buy things.
Here's a suggestion for the author: It's clear you put a lot of effort into the writing, but it feels like most of the writing is focused on supporting details, making it difficult to focus on the main character. Without a clear hierarchy, it's a bit confusing to read.
The writing is rushed, the characters are not well-developed, the logic is somewhat chaotic, the characters are rather one-dimensional, and the scene descriptions are weak, but the theme is quite novel.
Speaking of which, didn't Xiao Feng fall in love a little too early? He was only five years old when he was in his third life, and he was already in love? And it was the kind of love that lasts until death? That's a little bit of a plot hole, hahaha.
It's finished! Hooray! (=^▽^=)
I find your writing quite interesting.
Keep it up! The author writes very well!!