Hard to Escape the Wild Passion

Although some plots are missing, overall I think it's a good read. This novel gave me the impression that the storyline was not enough. For example, the part where the male and female protagonists lived together was passed by, and then the heroine came to the flower shop. At this time, I wanted to know how they broke the situation, and how the heroine was involved in solving the matter, rather than how she looked at the flowers.

Then the little girl had nothing to say? No one is looking for her?

The male protagonist left. They had mentioned before that they would solve the problem together, because the female protagonist is also in danger now, but the female protagonist didn't react at all?

I'm going to "open up the dispute". It's irresponsible for the heroine to take the child home like this.

55.7%, Is Xiao Chongzhi the pseudonym of Lin Xin, or is Lin Xin the pseudonym of Xiao Chongzhi? It has been described from the perspective of "Lin Xin" before. From the call stage, it seems that Lin Xin's external name is Xiao, but there is no character name next to the double quotation marks, and the name in the protagonist column is also Xiao. I don't know if I got it wrong

Didn't Xiao Qi's companions show up? Where are they?

92% Of the first chapter is about the heroine being held hostage. Her action description and psychological activities are very good, but if Xiao Qi fires a gun, the first impact on the heroine's perception should be hearing. The sound of the gunshot is very loud, not the smell of gunpowder smoke (I don't know what the smell of gunfire is), and then Lin Xin rushes over to fight Xiao Qi, and this process Previously, there was no description of the heroine seeing Lin Xin take action, but the two of them locked eyes during a fierce fight. This description suddenly stopped the heroine's psychological activities and counterattacks. It was the same as what I said about the scene changing too quickly. The scene changed suddenly and the camera moved, making it difficult to see what the whole story was saying. The above are some of my feelings. There are some shortcomings in the language expression. Just take a look.

Come on(???_??)?

As an aside, there are risks in sharing a flat. You might encounter roommates who often bring their boyfriends back.