Under revision! Under revision!!
Volume One (Chapters 1-20): Safe to read
Volume Two (Chapters 21-42): Safe to read!
After being reborn in a dream into an early-age otherworld, before humans had even appeared, the protagonist spends the early days as the founder of the oldest species, struggling to survive in a world where the strong prey on the weak. Things are so grim that they don't take human form until after human civilization has emerged.
At first, the protagonist is a weak sea slug, forced to flee and cultivate the wilderness just to survive, encountering all kinds of things along the way.
Before they know it, they've gained companions and founded a clan. But when they try to establish their own town, all sorts of difficulties crop up.
They have no choice but to take human form with their companions and travel to the world on land to build relations and learn. This leads to no shortage of funny mishaps and legendary tales.
Later, they get caught up in all kinds of conspiracies. It seems an unseen hand is toying with the protagonist.
The protagonist is driven through the skies and across the earth, across multidimensional space and through time, overcoming crisis after crisis until they become the Creator God of this otherworld.
Because the male lead is so weak in the early stages, his subordinates and followers constantly misunderstand his abilities and are overprotective of him.
On top of that, his subordinates are not only powerful, but also extremely arrogant. The timid male lead keeps misunderstanding the gap in their abilities. In the early stages, when they sideline him and leave him as a figurehead, he has no say in anything and feels utterly miserable.
But in front of outsiders, he acts like a powerful ruler, throwing his weight around through his subordinates.
They flatter him to his face, but look down on him behind his back.
Eventually, his subordinates acknowledge his strength, but even more trouble follows.
Their ambition and vanity swell even further, leading to all sorts of unnecessary conflicts, so the male lead has to keep cleaning up after them.
Or he gets pushed into conquering one world after another and becoming the Creator God.
Part One:
A miserable sea slug flees for its life, plants trees, farms, and hunts. It hides treasure, gives gifts, and makes connections, then builds a clan before it knows it.
Part Two:
The seven emotions and six desires begin to sprout. The protagonist works for a living and gets bullied, travels the continent to learn crafts, then becomes emperor in a daze.
Part Three:
Top secret, top secret, so very top secret.
Part Four:
Becoming a god was never my intention!
Theme: Struggling to survive
Reborn as a Seller of Unsold Star Systems, I Became the Planet's Chosen Savior Through Livestreaming
The Otherworld Stranded Gamer Who Couldn't Level Up Used an Online Store to Earn Money for Cheats (3)
The Otherworldly Drifter Who Couldn't Level Up Makes Money from an Online Shop to Buy Cheats (2)
The Otherworldly Stranded Man Who Can't Level Up Makes Money with an Online Shop to Buy Cheats (1)
Ode to the Universe
Is the protagonist a fool? I didn't have any sense of defense in this other world, and I was fooled around.
Chapter 100 will be released today, and a new volume will be released tomorrow!!
How can I put it, the protagonist is living a miserable life, and I can understand if he just has to survive in order to survive, but the copywriting said that these guys are the protagonist's subordinates... And then they have to isolate the protagonist and cause trouble for the protagonist. I feel very unworthy for the protagonist. With the protagonist's ability in the future, he shouldn't need to get along with these guys with bad personalities.
How can I put it, the protagonist is living a miserable life, and I can understand if he just has to survive in order to survive, but the copywriting said that these guys are the protagonist's subordinates... And then they have to isolate the protagonist and cause trouble for the protagonist. I feel very unworthy for the protagonist. With the protagonist's ability in the future, he shouldn't need to get along with these guys with bad personalities.
Oh, my dad secretly reviewed and signed it behind our back!
Oh oh oh oh oh! It's an update!
The author wrote the setting very carefully, and the inspiration may have been borrowed from the Slime TV series. The world view has just been unfolded, but it can already be seen that the setting is very impressive, and the writing still needs more practice, so keep up the good work. But here comes the twist, and I have to rant about it. The dialogue feels strange, and those modal words are very redundant and do not conform to the speaking habits of Chinese people. To be honest, the wording habits are more like the Chinese version of Japanese comics. There is no need to learn from Slime for this wording habit. (A normal person talks in a way that comes and goes, with a lot of modal particles.) Then there is the forced plot. The protagonist is aggrieved and mentally retarded. Normal people make mistakes, are not clear-headed, and sometimes the situation is not as good as they are. But it is really uncomfortable to force the plot to reduce intelligence. If it can be logical and self-consistent, even if the protagonist is not what you want, you can still endure it, but if it is written and people feel incomprehensible, it will be an emotional explosion. You have to understand the positioning of the article you write. The audience is not here to see the protagonist acting as a little brother to others. There is no sense of tension in the inner monologue. It seems that it is not a life-or-death crisis but a flirtation. The mentality is very wrong and the character creation is not in place. It's not to watch the protagonist get along with a powerful enemy and have a relationship. Goldslömer, you (guess, do you want them to join the protagonist group?) If not, I apologize. If so, I will wait and see how you write it. If the logic is self-consistent and the three views are normal, it can be accepted. The Two-Headed Snake is supposed to be a very controversial character. If it is well written, it should be quite charming and there will be many people who like it. But the author's writing is too dry, purely labelling, and cannot fill in the flesh and blood of the character through details. There is only a skin, so it is undisputedly annoying. This exposes the author's biggest problem, his writing skills. Whether it is writing the plot or shaping the characters, the conflict is written as if everyone has been hit, and the daily life without conflict is like writing a running account; the supporting characters are pale and feeble, and the protagonist is outrageous. You cannot treat him as a human being, he is more like a camera or a background board. I still don't understand his character traits, his past, mood, growth, and mental journey. It can't be said that I don't know three things when I ask one question. It can only be said that I have understood nine of the ten orifices. A person's character is his destiny, and the formation of character is closely related to the past and the environment. Character creation is inseparable from background + personality background. Finally, interaction is added to effectively interact, whether with living or dead things. Maybe I should put this at the beginning. Will anyone really read it? I know that the author must have worked very hard, so he took the trouble to write a long article to express his own opinions. My level is average and my expression is chaotic. It would be best if it can help the author, but I don't mean to find fault.
I joined the flock today. I will rest for a few days and then update after I recover. The temperature climbed all the way up to nearly 40 degrees. I didn't feel much discomfort physically, but I was very sleepy and cold, and my nose was stuffy and my throat was itchy.
I'm so tired of watching it. The world setting really pokes me, but the protagonist really makes me feel tired. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a kicking that makes me feel better.
Either I hate that sister, or I think she's too threatening, so I'd better kill her.