The Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period are the history books I least want to read. I can't understand the good and evil, right and wrong there. It may be exciting there, but it's more bloody and cruel.
Zongma Jianghu is very cool, but behind the scenes he is very cold.
There is no righteous war in the Spring and Autumn Period. Mencius said so.
Jianghu just looks beautiful.
Appear.
The introduction of the article is very surprising. There are many novels with a sword as the narrator of the story (such as Bloodweed), but the author's beginning still makes people feel fresh and unconventional. The author's writing style is very sophisticated, and the descriptions of atmospheric scenes and delicate details are very appropriate.
The whole novel starts with telling a story and ends with telling a story. The content in the middle is almost all about telling the story, one link after another, which is a very novel technique. Reading this article feels like watching a Wong Kar Wai movie (I'm talking about Ashes of Time).
However, it is also because the author's narrative sometimes feels a little cumbersome, especially when the transition between stories is not very coherent, which can make readers feel inexplicable. In addition, I saw some people commenting in the previous chapters that Su Cheng was not present in many scenes, but the story was told as if he saw it with his own eyes. God's vision is also a serious problem of the author.
Finally, the overall concept of the article is very good, but the connection between the stories of Yang Ye and Su Cheng is a little weak and seems to be forced in; the conflicts between countries are well set up, but the depiction is slightly inappropriate. At least when I read it, I couldn't feel Jingren's "hatred between country and family".
Overall, this article is quite good~ Finished with flowers and bricks~
Author's reply:
Thanks.
When I was writing this article, I read too many modern novels that jumped around, so I wrote an onion.
I originally planned to write the story of Yang Ye seriously, but later I realized that writing it all would be too distracting, so I just skipped a few sentences to pass the time.
The issue of God's perspective, Wangtian, I didn't think about it at the time. If it is to be rounded now, it is probably Aunt Su Cheng or Yuan Wu Jian tx who felt that the story needed to be told completely, so they added a lot of embellishments.
Ah, as expected, the female shopkeeper is Su Cheng... But it was made obvious from the beginning, so there was no need to guess. = =The author did it on purpose, it must be... But many of Liu Mufeng's shots don't have Su Cheng's perspective, how could they be included in the story? Strangeness.
The mention of Yang Ye's intention to die here seems a bit abrupt.
Parting is just to get together, it sounds familiar, smile. They finally came to such an ending, which was a pity for Su and Liu.
This chapter is cumbersome. Although there is something about Jingguo in the previous article, the mention of the hatred between the country and the family in this article seems a bit thin.
Such a vicious Su Hao, does this person have a bit of a dual personality... Even so, when written, he is still very charming = =
A new character appears... The relationship between Su Hao and Liu Mufeng seems to be irreversible.
A beautiful start, but Gongzi Ye's words are a bit cumbersome.
Yes, there is nothing more helpless than friends killing each other.
The Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period are the history books I least want to read. I can't understand the good and evil, right and wrong there. It may be exciting there, but it's more bloody and cruel. Zongma Jianghu is very cool, but behind the scenes he is very cold. There is no righteous war in the Spring and Autumn Period. Mencius said so. Jianghu just looks beautiful.
Appear. The introduction of the article is very surprising. There are many novels with a sword as the narrator of the story (such as Bloodweed), but the author's beginning still makes people feel fresh and unconventional. The author's writing style is very sophisticated, and the descriptions of atmospheric scenes and delicate details are very appropriate. The whole novel starts with telling a story and ends with telling a story. The content in the middle is almost all about telling the story, one link after another, which is a very novel technique. Reading this article feels like watching a Wong Kar Wai movie (I'm talking about Ashes of Time). However, it is also because the author's narrative sometimes feels a little cumbersome, especially when the transition between stories is not very coherent, which can make readers feel inexplicable. In addition, I saw some people commenting in the previous chapters that Su Cheng was not present in many scenes, but the story was told as if he saw it with his own eyes. God's vision is also a serious problem of the author. Finally, the overall concept of the article is very good, but the connection between the stories of Yang Ye and Su Cheng is a little weak and seems to be forced in; the conflicts between countries are well set up, but the depiction is slightly inappropriate. At least when I read it, I couldn't feel Jingren's "hatred between country and family". Overall, this article is quite good~ Finished with flowers and bricks~ Author's reply: Thanks. When I was writing this article, I read too many modern novels that jumped around, so I wrote an onion. I originally planned to write the story of Yang Ye seriously, but later I realized that writing it all would be too distracting, so I just skipped a few sentences to pass the time. The issue of God's perspective, Wangtian, I didn't think about it at the time. If it is to be rounded now, it is probably Aunt Su Cheng or Yuan Wu Jian tx who felt that the story needed to be told completely, so they added a lot of embellishments.
Ah, as expected, the female shopkeeper is Su Cheng... But it was made obvious from the beginning, so there was no need to guess. = =The author did it on purpose, it must be... But many of Liu Mufeng's shots don't have Su Cheng's perspective, how could they be included in the story? Strangeness.
The mention of Yang Ye's intention to die here seems a bit abrupt.
Parting is just to get together, it sounds familiar, smile. They finally came to such an ending, which was a pity for Su and Liu.
This chapter is cumbersome. Although there is something about Jingguo in the previous article, the mention of the hatred between the country and the family in this article seems a bit thin.
Such a vicious Su Hao, does this person have a bit of a dual personality... Even so, when written, he is still very charming = =
A new character appears... The relationship between Su Hao and Liu Mufeng seems to be irreversible.
A beautiful start, but Gongzi Ye's words are a bit cumbersome.
Yes, there is nothing more helpless than friends killing each other.