My Parents Were the Foils in a Period Novel [The 1970s]

The plot of the next part is really different compared to the previous one. I think it's good to go over the idea again. It's just a month off. As long as the plot is good, it's okay~ It doesn't matter~

It's a bad ending. It was obviously very good-looking and very attractive at the beginning, but by the second part it felt like it ended in a hurry. Bad review! Get your money back!!!

Should the King of Quality be divided into different categories? Oral liquids and refrigerators should be evaluated together. Isn't it a bit...

These chapters are too weak, and it feels like the author is writing them as an outline. It feels good, but it feels boring. Properly detailing is not as simple as just omitting everything. For example, if the manufacturer puts money into it, it can be completely expanded to reflect the heroine's thoughts, rather than just summarizing it in one stroke. Another thing to say is that the protagonist setting of this article is too vague. Although there is no parents' scene in this chapter, most of the previous articles focus on the parents' struggle, and the heroine's part is very few, almost becoming a camera. After opening the lower part, the heroine's sense of presence increased sharply. After getting used to her parents' view, looking here again started to feel awkward.

Ah, is this unfinished? I've been waiting for a month, and it turns out it's still June.

I just bought v and read the full article. You have to take a leave of absence for as long as a month. I am speechless.

I think the problem may lie in the incoherence of perspectives. Since the second half is the heroine, it should always be written from the heroine's perspective. The fun part should also focus on the heroine. Sometimes the heroine and sometimes the parents. It's a bit inconsistent. In addition, the perspective switches to the east and west all of a sudden, which makes people feel very fragmented. If you are really not good at writing business wars, you can use ordinary templates to slap the face. I think it's quite fun.

Ah, I can't understand the plot development.

The next part jumps very quickly. There is no exciting process of dad being the director of the factory, and there is no end to dad's stumbling block. The other half of the control group disappears. The heroine grows up, and then sells gentleman wine and jumps to the ending. I originally thought it was very interesting, but I was really disappointed that it was so rushed later.

There are quite a lot of changes after the repair.